one mistake,and then??last part31 - Page 13

yeah sure sweta.only i have to think and write it properly. il try to post by tonite. 😛

pleeeeeease continue
its taking too long
waiting eagerly for the next part.

vinitha u had told u will continue on saturday so pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry up and continue asap with little longer parts.

hey vitak,
really nice fiction..........continue fast....... now i can't wait.........so plz plz plz plz continue asap.....

vinitha pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast asap.

tia yawned and groggily got up.she stretched her arms and smiled.she had woken up so early,even before the hotel gave the wake up call.she looked at the watch and.......got the shock of her life. 9 O CLOCK!!!

omg!!omg!!! itna late kaise ho gaya!!!!

she scrambled for the phone

hello.im calling from room no 302.i had asked for a wake up call.apki wajah se mera boat miss ho gaya you know??kisa hotel hai apka huh???WHAT????? sab chale gaye???aise kaise ja sakte hai??tia was shouting now.she banged the phone down and ran out of the room.

surely ranveer yahi pe hoga.woh mujhe chod ke nahi jayega. she knocked at the door tentatively.

ranveer opened the door.his face broke into a wide grin on seeing her.

hello tia!!!he made a sweeping gesture for her to enter the room.

ranveer,tum yahi ho.phir sab kaise chale gaye??

'uhh tia woh actually ....hum ne hi....sab se kaha ki woh.... chalejaye.'

tia turned towards him,a dangerous look in her eyes.

uhh....woh...tia.......kal bahut late ho gaya tha na aur....aur... hamne socha ki...bekar me appki..... neend kharab ho jathi....so...uhh ..aur

tia looked at him calmly. aur tumne socha ki kyu na mauke ka faida uthaye aur dekhe yaha pe kya changes hue hai?aur mujh se achi company tumhe aur kaha milegi..kyun??

ranveer nodded his head,abashed.

tia:toh chale??

ranveer:uhh kaha?

tia(exasperated):explore karne.surely tumne picnic to plan kiya hi hoga na?

ranveer:(who had not thought about that at all)oh yes!!of course.picnic!!!! sab ready hai.ap ready ho jaiye hum adhe ghante mein nikalte hai ok??


sorry guys for not writing fast.heres the next part.hope you lke it. 😊
i'l write a better next part.think this ones a lil boring

tia and ranveer trudged down the path.tia was chirpily chattering away while ranveer was quietly walking,simply enjoying the pleasure of having tia all to himself for the whole day.

rudr and tahira!!

huh??? ranveer was suddenly shaken out of his thoughts.

those two lovers ranveer!island was named after them na?

oh! ha.yeah!

rudr and tahira....ranveer tia

tias words of that day came back to him. tia was talking so normally....as if the memories meant nothing to her...all that they had shared was...nothing.

pata nahi. yeh ek vain hope hai ya humari stupidity....ki tia yaha...sab kuch bhula dengi.....



tia looked anxiously at ranveer.'ranveer tired dikh raha hai.maybe we should rest for sometime. '

she patted him on the back.
hey camel,chalo lunch karte hai.im hungry.

ranveer immediately put down the basket. tia hid a grin.

So....what are you waiting for??set the table!

helloooo!!! shaadi ke baad ye sab nahi chalega ok?

tias face shuttered. oops!!! you idiot ranveer!! kab kya kehna kuch nahi bata.

just joking....ranveer offered feebly.

tia didnt listen.just took everything out and started eating,she gave a sigh of pleasure.
ranveer was looking at tia,amazed.she had not once complained about her diet.
well,she was proving herself to be a true punjabi. but wonder how she kept herself so fit,ranveer thought,blushing.

tia looked at him,eyebrows raised.agar khane ke liye nahi jiyo toh kyun jiyo?? thats the point. rite na ranveer??and ya,she turned away from him.you can admire as mucccch as you want.i wont mind.reallllly!!

o ho!!u would love it na ??that tiny voice said again,cheekily.

yeah!said ranveer,grinning.

they finished eating and lay upon the blanket,looking up at the clouds.

ranveer kuch theek nahi lag raha hai.tia thought worriedly.uki thabiyat toh theek hogi na!

both of them just sat quietly,engrossed in their own thoughts.

tia looked at ranveer.he had drifted of to sleep.she hesitated,then gently took his head in her lap and stroked his hair tenderly.her throat constricted.she had missed him so much,it was almost a physical pain.she had ached for his voice,his laughter,his touch...

but then,she had made her decision.

i gave you everything ranveer...everything!! kya kami thi mujhme? but its too late now. main chah kar bhi tumhe trust nahi kar sakti,tumhare saath nahi reh sakti.

tia slowly touched his face.she bent down.her face was just a heartbeat away from his.she closed her eyes and touched her lips to his.then pulled away.hot tears were burning in her eyes but she refused to let them flow.

she took his head and put it down.then got up and walked away.

next parts posted 😛 plz tell how i can make it better cause im having a brain drain now

its very nicely written pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue fast asap.

nice 1 Vinita

it was really romatic

waiting for ur next part 😉

Divya