GAME.chained dialogs n scenes - Page 21

Ashi : Kya hua Yuvi, tum kuch zyaada hi angry lag rahe ho...
Yuvi : mein angry lag nahi raha.. mein angry hoon.. aur woh bhi tumse
Ashi : Kyun , kya hua? maine kya kiya?
Yuvi : (removing tht Diary...n showing her tht note..)Ashi yeh kya hai ,,... tum mujhe pyaar nahi karti>??agar haan toh yeh REVENGE kahan se aa gaya?
Ashi : (starts laughing)..Yuvi, maine likha ... aur tumne padh liya..
Yuvi : Ashi, yeh laugh karne ka time nahi hai
Ashi : Yuvi, read wht i hv carefully
Yuvi : tumne likha hai "dear diary...today was the best day of my life 2day yuvi proposed to me!!!.........now.........i can take revenge......... "
Ashi : i knw.. ok yeh hai mera revenge...
n she throws da diary on her bed.. holdz Yuvi n kisses him on his lips 😳 😳 (
Ashi : yeh tha mera revenge 😉 kaisa laga?
Yuvi : ...

sum1 plz continue..

sorry couldnt c Ashi taking revenge frm Yuvi
😉

Divya

yuvi- awesom bye the way ashi i am sorry
ashi- hey kyon
uv- maine tumpar doubt kiya
aship- uv stop behaving like thakur maine tumpar doubt kiya blah blah humaare relationship min everything should be shared and you did tht tumne mujhpar doubt nahi kiya tumne idhar aakar apni misunderstanding clear ki and thts the biggest thing now cheer up and give me a hug 🤗

sum1 plz continue

im running out of ideas 😕 😭

Divya

guys u wrote each n every dialouge so nicely 😳
ok by da way my part:

ashi-toh mr.yuvraj dev can i ask u that why u took away my diary wid u??????
yuvi(in a bit embaressed tone)-ya ..................woh.....a.......... main...........toh...........a ................just.........
ashi-yuvi stop stammering ok
u have full right to read my diary
so dont be embaressed ok 😉
yuvi-hey ashi tell me where do u wanna go 2day?
ashi-matlab kya?????? 🤢
i mean do u really mean it?????? 😕
yuvi-yup
ashi-cool then i will just go n change
yuvi-let it be ashi
u luk perfect in every dress 😳
ashi-really? 😳
yuvi-obviously now just cum wid me



guys why dont make it cool
i mean let it be ashi's b'day tomorrow in our fic
wat say 😉

hey sure
ashi and uv were in a car uv was driving and ashi was sitting next to him wid her hand on his then they reached a ver pretty houbungalow
ashi- yuvi hum ye kahaan a gaye
uv- chalo ashi i hv to show you something but first of all close your eyes

ok guys
now i m continuing



ashi-but y????????
yuvi-plz apni eyes close karo n
dont ask any questions......
ashi-ok fine,as u say.
yuvi-now cum wid me!
ashi-{wid her eyes closed}hello!!!!!!!!
my eyes r closed.how can i walk widout seeing??????
yuvi-thats fine........no probs.......
he carries ashi in his arms n takes her inside da bungalow
yuvi-ok sweety!!!!!!!! now open ur eyes....
ashi-.......................


now ,i hav ritten my part
continue guys.....

ashi she slowly open her eyes nd is surpried on seeing the entire house decorated with beautiful candles and heart shaped baloons witha beautiful ashi-uv poster at the back and in the centre there ws a huge cake 😳

hey divs even u can cont u write well 😉

hey guys

ashi-yuvi u did it??????
yuvi-no my ghost came n decorated the whole place 😆
ashi-i mean u did it for me ?????????
yuvi-no actually for barkha but she didnt came so i thot i shud make it for u then 😆
ashi was now very angry n shouted
ashi-fine Mr.Yuvraj Dev u call barkha then n i m leaving this place immediately
yuvi held her hand n took her in his arms
😳
ashi-yuvi stop it ok u have done it for barkha rite????? 😡
yuvi-no sweety its all for u coz 2day is ur b'day thats why 😳
ashi- how sweet yuvi
u did this for me
i m really feeling proud on
myself for luving a person like u
yuvi-me toooooooooo 😆
ashi-uv..................thanx
yuvi-plzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont be


now they both r sitting n chatting


guys i have written a very long part sooo now u guys continue

nice continuation ppl 😊
herez my part...

Yuvi : Ashi, tumhe thanx karna tha na?
Ashi : Ya, but tumne kaha dun b.. 😉
Yuvi : I mean agar tumhe thanx kehna hai to ek special way mein karo, aise hi thanx nahi kaha jata hai apne boyfriend se.. u c 😉
Ashi : theek hai toh fir , kya thanx aise karte hain?
(Ashi gives an amazing Long,lovely, sweet kiss to Yuvi on his lips 😳 )

sorry couldnt help it.. had to rite dis scene...

plz tell me if its gud or not 😕

n sum1 plz continue

Divya