LIFE BEYOND MAURYA (a fic):last part,pg46 - Page 27

😭 i feel so bad for sandy 😭 😭 😭 shes so sweet,i love her for this 😭
but ashi yuvi finally confess 😳

hey mads! an awesome part......but iam kinda scared of sandy... 😆 😆 u know she's too sweet na an so fast let him go.....nothin fishy rite??? i hope not...but if u r endin it mads then i don want ashi an yuvi to confess so quickly 😕 no......its alrite if u add more twists an turns....i hope u know tht i am survivin on only u r fic cos the serial....u know tht how "AMAZINGLY"its goin on 😡 😡

an readin u r previous fic, i also can say tht anythin can go wrong suddenly.....so i am a bit worried though its a happy moment..

no stoppin till u complete a 100parts or 600 or may be even 1000.....i really don mind u know 😉 😉

Originally posted by: s_aangel

hey mads! an awesome part......but iam kinda scared of sandy... 😆 😆 u know she's too sweet na an so fast let him go.....nothin fishy rite??? i hope not...but if u r endin it mads then i don want ashi an yuvi to confess so quickly 😕 no......its alrite if u add more twists an turns....i hope u know tht i am survivin on only u r fic cos the serial....u know tht how "AMAZINGLY"its goin on 😡 😡

an readin u r previous fic, i also can say tht anythin can go wrong suddenly.....so i am a bit worried though its a happy moment..

no stoppin till u complete a 100parts or 600 or may be even 1000.....i really don mind u know 😉 😉

100-600 parts!!! dear....r u feeling ok???😆😆😆 Hey bhaggu!!! Itna karte karte toh meri poori life kat jaayegi.....but u know wat....I cant add more twists n turns....coz then it wud become boring.....and now wen I end it it'll be short....n hopefully sweet too!!😃

And I'm not turning sandy into a negative character coz I believe that aise characters sirf films aur serials mein hote hain....and I want my fic to be as real as possible...that's y I'm not extending it nemore.....

And abt the survivng part...lemme assure u not to worry....coz fate the gr8 is back with her new fic....and its more amazing than mine!!!😃 Read it for sure....but after reading my fic of course!!😉😉😆

lovely....finally ashi and yuvi coming back together 😳 😳 😳

loved sandy too....she is so sweet.....but one thing that deserves a mention is the relationship betwn ashi and thakur......u have brought it so well uptil now in ur fic......I really liked it...how I wish he was so understanding in remix too and would do something to help ashi and yuvi patch up

and haan if u ask me I dont mind u ending the fic......coz I really wanna see ashi and yuvi patch up......coz remix main ye hona na mumkin hain 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

but u have to start another fic too as soon as this gets over 😃

Chapter 23

" Hi Wackho…..kaisi ho…." asked Yuvi grinning at her when he reached her bed.

Before she could say anything….he kissed her on the cheek....

" Yuv---"

Yuvi placed a finger on her lips……and silenced her.

" No Ashi…..you can't do that always….aaj mujhe kehne do….let me say it…."

He removed the finger from her lips….she was breathing hard….just like him…..

He moved closer to her….took her hand in his…..and looked deeply in her eys…..a look that took Ashi away from reality….a look that made her forget everything around her…..a look which she could never help but return…..a look that always reminded her that Yuvi was not a brat like she had thought….a look which made her fall over and over in love with him…..

" Ashi…..Will you spend your life with me? "

Ashi blushed deeply….and looked down……it was unlike her to blush….but she knew that only one person in the whole wide world could make her blush….and that person was sitting right in front of her…..

" Look Ashi…..agar tumne 'Haan' kaha…toh main tumhari har baat maanonga…..tumse kabhi fight nahi karoonga…..tumhe kabhi wackho nahi bulaoonga…..tumnhe----"

As she heard those words…she seemed to leap back into college…these were the words he had spoken when he had tried to propose her the second time…..he still remembered them…..so did she…..

" Lekin agar tumne 'Naa' kaha……"

She looked at him her breath held…..waiting for him to speak…..

" Agar tumne 'Naa' kaha….." he said after a pause still looking at her. " Even then I'll love you….." he finished.

Ashi smiled lovingly at him……and they hugged passionately.

" Pshycho!!! "she whispered. " Kuch kehne ki jaroorat hai??? "

After what seemed like an eternity…..they broke apart.

" But Yuvi….what about Sandy?? "

" What about her??? I mean…you know….kabhi kabhi….jab main tum jaisi wachko se bore ho jaaoonga…then I'll go to her…." He teased her.

" How mean pshycho!!! Aur tumhe toh apne promises fulfil karna bhi nahi aata…..bilkul ek Poilitician ke bete ki tarah ho!! " said Ashi with her usual tease and then she smiled.

" Well….vo kehete hai na…. 'Old habits die hard!!'…"

" Seriously Yuvi…..bolo na….."she said hitting him.

Yuvi took her hand in his and looked at her.

" Ashi….we broke our engagement….."

Ashi smiled sadly. " Vo bahut hurt hogi na…."

" Haan…..par she's pretty much stable now….." said Yuvi trying not to think about how much he had hurt Sandy.

" Yuvraj Dev…..aapke liye yeh letter choda hai….." said a warden coming inside and giving him a piece of paper.

Yuvi opened it....and read it…..and by the finished it…..he had tears in his eyes…..

" Yuvi….kya hua? "asked Ashi concerned.

Yuvi looked at Ashi. " Its from Sandy……vo aaj hi London jaa rahi hai….infact…she's already left……"

Ashi touched his face and hugged him……

Its true.....that Laughter is always accompanied with tears….he thought as he hugged her back and wiped off his tears….he thought he could feel Ashi crying too…he knew he couldn't ever forget Sandy in his entire life….Never…..she was someone whom he would always be indebted to….she had been with him in that time…when he thought his life was a waste……She had been like an angel to him.....someone who had unknowingly brought him and Ashi together......and someone who had left now without saying a word....without revealing how sad she was.....who had thought of their happiness rather than hers......

As they broke apart…..he folded the letter and kept it in his pocket…..

too good,awesomplz cont asap 😃

awwwwwwwwwwww mads its simply mind blowing 😳
how do u do it yaar? 😛 sumhow wen u rite it makes u feel as tho things r relly happening 😳
and sandy is soo sweet!! 😃 i luv her 😳.....technically speakin i luv any1 who makes it possible for my a and y to get bk 2gethr 😆 but criusly haan,sandy is too good.....how can sum1 b so nice [:4]👏
i hv no words to describe ur fic mads.....and dekho in speechless state also ive managed to rite so much 😆
so jst think how real good tht makes ur fic 😛🤗
do me a favor n send this to remix scriptwriters na 😃.......i dont think rebelde is planning to go beyond skool life,but if u send ur fic to humare remix script writers theyll defnitly go beyond maurya,and dekhna rebelde will strt copyin remix 😆
luv ur fic yaar 😃 continue fast 😳
and i agree with ashita......u had better strt a new fic after this one 😆😛😳

fabulous 👏 👏
now im seriously out of wrds 😉

Mads...that was.....seriously amazing!!!! I just read the last 2 parts together!!! 👏 👏

I am glad that you did not make sandy into a negtaive character. She is so sweet! I love her character!

Like ashita said, you showed ashi n ranny's friendship perfectly! ranveer was so much like ashi's bro, in ur fic! Always trying to talk abt yuvi 😆 😆 😆


Well, I am also sad that this is ur alst chapter...i would always log in at i-f, firstly to read ur fic and I am going to miss reading ur fic yaar!

I am now going off to read fate's fanfic, as u suggested. 😛

Now keep writing more fanfics n like sonia said, maybe, 100-600 chapters won't be so impossible! 😆 😆 😆