LIFE BEYOND MAURYA (a fic):last part,pg46 - Page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow! that was so.............romantic, rocking, awesome! These 3 are the only words I can say for now, coz I wanna go n read the chapter again! 😳

please continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww dis was just soo beatifully captured i lybed it now on popular demand write d next chapter soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
its awesum..i don hav words...all i can do is.. 👏 ...... 👏 *phew* its gr8888 plz continue soon...its a gr8 relief readin this fanfic after strugglin wid my textbooks 4 the xams...gr8 fic mads.. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzzz ishq continue yaar. it is awesome.i love it. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg.....it is excellent......soooo romantic........god i can really imagine the scene....... 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Chapter 16

" MAASI!!! "

" TRRRING!!!!! "

The simultaneous ringing of door-bell and Tanny calling Ashi from her room caused Ashi and Yuvi to broke apart abruptly….and they seemed to have come to their senses……

Their hands were still locked….and Ashi pulled hers apart with much effort…..

Without looking at Yuvi….Ashi rushed inside to see what was wrong with her niece….while Yuvi got up instinctively to open the door….It was a courier for Ashi…..Yuvi signed it and closed the door……just as Ashi came out after making sure that Tanny was fine……

They were standing 3 ft apart from each other….just staring at each other……

Unable to speak….unable to move…..unable to register what had just happened…….

It was Yuvi who spoke first. He cleared his throat.

" Uh….vo……actually….um……Ash----Ashi…..mujhe abhi jaana hoga…..you know….vo….."

" Uh…koi baat nahi Yuvi…..you carry on….main Tia aur Ranveer ko bataoongi…." said Ashi her voice resembling the embarassement in Yuvi's voice.

" Ok…bye! " he said giving her a last look which seemed to take ages....... "Bye…." he said and finally was about to leave…..

" Yuvi…" said Ashi in an urgent voice.

" Haan…."said Yuvi turning so abruptly and quickly on the spot that he bumped into her…..

" Kuch nahi….bye!!!" said Ashi…..closing the door after Yuvi left…..her mind full of a cob-web of thoughts…..

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow mads......wonderful as usual 👏

courier walla kyun aaya? 😆

Anyways, continue soon haan! i'm sure there will be a public demand for the next chapter as well! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
madss please continue fassssst//havta read the nest part by the weekend....me is very impatient and me will be very angry if it is not continued 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
u need 2 keep writing coz its tooooooooooo good
awesome gr8

gotta write more fast faster fastest plz plz plz 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
agar mujhe yeh xcoiruierwaala mile gaya na toh 😡 neways awesome part 😉

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