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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey this is my first fanfic please tell me if you like it.

Scene:-
all friends are sitting in the canteen eating while ranveer, tia, yuvi & ashi are discussing about the next remix meeting without letting mitra the slime know. shyla & raghu meet at the lockers and they talk...
Shyla: wo-oh raghu tumne tia se kuch kaha ya nahin?
Raghu(irritated): tumhe problem kya hai hain?
Shyla: main to bus tia ko pane mein tumhari help kar rahi hoon.
Raghu: par tum meri madad kyun kar rahi ho?
Shyla: aise hi, kya tumhe meri help chahiye??
raghu thinks for a while and tells shyla that he will take her help.
Shyla: to suno and she tells him her plan.
Raghu: teekh hain main aisa hee karunga.

Shyla: wo-oh tia, sorry par ranveer sirf shy ka hi ho sakta hai.
At the canteen


Ashi: thakur i think hume next meeting kal rakni chahiye kyunki suna hain ki mitra kahin out of station ja raha hai to vo apna favourite game kaun banega finepati bhi nahi khel sakta.
Ranveer: ashi aap confirm kar lijiye ki mitra actually bahar ja rahe hain, phir ye plan teekh rahega.
Yuvi: ya dude tum sahi keh rahe ho
Tia: tum log jo bhi decide karo plz tia ko inform kardena.
Ashi: timbit tum bhi apne wacky brains lagakar koi idea suggest karo.
Suddenly raghu comes there & interuptes the conversation.
Raghu: kya main tumse do minut bat kar sakta hoon, akele mein?
Tia: tumhe tia se akele mein kya bat karni hain?
Raghu: woh main tumhe akele mein hi kahunga.

Tia looks at ranveer who looks back at her with innocent eyes.

Tia: teekh hain chalo

They walk to the lockers and...

Raghu: tia mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..
Tia: kaho
Raghu: tia kya tum mujhe date karogi?
tia: kkkyyyyaaa?
Raghu: please tia
tia: tia tum jaise gawar aur tacky insan ko kabhi date karne bare mein sapne mein bhi nahi sochegi warna use nightmares ajaeinge, puh-lease.
Tia walks away from there leaving raghu and shyla both heartbroken.
Shyla: wo-oh tia ahuja, kya tum ranveer ko akele nahin chod sakti?
Ranveer gets to know about this and is furious with raghu & calls him to the gym....
everyone is there at the gym.
Ranveer: raghu ye aapne acha nahin kiya.
Raghu: aakhir maine aisa kya kar diya?
Ranveer: aapne tia se aisi bat kahi bhi kaise?
Raghu: jaise tumne kahi thi.
A physical fight picks up between the two and tia arrives..
Tia: ye kya kar rahe ho tum?
Ranveer: tia isne aapse aise kaha kaise? aaj hum inhe nahin chodnege.
Tia: koi tia ko kuch bhi bole tumhe kya farak padhta hain haan?
Ranveer: farak padta hai tia.
Tia: kyun?
Ranveer(loudly): kyunki hum aapse pyar karte hain!



O.k. guys that was the end of my first part please post your comments.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good yaar plz continue fast i cant wait!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good one, continue asap plz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part continue pleaseeee 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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puhleese suspense mein mat rakho mujhe yeh pasand nahi hain
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey ashita its really cool....plz continue asap...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 GREAT
CONTINUE SOON

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