Will U B Mine-prt14,pg 47.UPDATED! - Page 30

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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx a ton n a million for this gud news dia 😆
do continue it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi dia
plzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ms.Dia

may i knw ki aap apni fanfic kabhi continue karne wali hain??

plz continue asap

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
Umm...Monday morning...PROMISE!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 11

Ashi is about to take out her gift,when suddenly...

Someone opens the door and enters the shed--

Actually,not one person,but two people enter the shed...

Shyla and Latika!!

Shy:Wo-oh,JUST as I'd thought!!Both of them are right here,in the shed...Latty,zara dekho toh...Anvesha and Yuvraj...Sharing an intim--

Ashi:Dud-uh,Shyla!!Agar tumhe koi aitraaz na ho--ya agar ho bhi,I don't care--can you please leave???

Latty:And tumhe yeh kyun lagta hai ki hum tumhari baat manenge???

Ashi:You know what,mujhe aisa lagta nahi hai,I'm sure that tum dono meri baat manogi...So just--

Yuvi:Wait,Ashi,let me handle this--

Shy:Woh-oh,Yuvraj to the rescue of Anvesha!!

Ashi:Shyla,JUST SHUT YOUR BIG,FAT MOUTH!!

Yuvi:Ashi,maine kaha na,take it easy!!And let me handle this!!

Ashi:WHATEVER...

Yuvi:Waise,Shyla,main tumhe batana bhool gaya ki Ranvir was looking for you...He had to give you something...But of course,tumhe toh uske paas nahin jana hai,right???Theek hai,main usse bata doonga ki you're too bus--

Shy:Wo-oh,maine aisa kab kaha???OF COURSE Shyla ko Ranvir ke paas jaana hai...(thinks)I wonder what he wants to give me...Waise,thanks for telling me.Bye.See you guys later!!Hey,Latty,let's go!!I can't wait!!

And she pulls Latty out of there.

Once they're out of the shed...

Latty:Shy,tum pagal ho kya???

Shy:Haan...who said I'm not crazy???I'm crazy about Ran--

Latty:SHY!!Tumhe dikha nahi???Yuvi ne jhoot kaha!!!He said that just to trick you out of the shed...Kyun ki usse pata tha ki Ranvir ka naam lete hi tum excited ho jaogi aur un dono ko akela chhod dogi...Cuz you love him...In fact,why only Yuvi???Ab toh Maurya mein har ek student ko pata hai tumhare aur Ranvir ke baare mein...Even the teach--

Shy:Wo-oh,toh yeh Yuvi ka trick tha,haan??Theek hai,mere paas--

Latty:Kya mere paas??JALDI BATAO!!

Shy:Uff...LET ME FINISH first!!Yeah as I was saying,mere paas ek idea hai...kyun na hum-----

And she whispers something into Latty's ears...

Latty:Shy,tum toh sach mein great ho!!

Shy:Woh-oh...I know that...

Whew!!Long one!!Hope I made up for the delay...😉

COMMENTS REQUIRED URGENTLY!!

Edited by dia5 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey dia it's awesum,,, but rhat shy and latty here too 😭 😭 😭 ....... neways cont soon...
claps 4om me...
👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
No one's replying...I REALLY WILL stop writing now...Anywayz,Nitz,thanks a ton!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
its AWESOME dia u r the best mom kya likhti hai yaar tu its best just sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooooooooooooool hats off to u plz cont fasssst 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey,dat was bouncing 👏 pls post d next part soooooonn 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey atlast mommy can post sumthing 4 ur fic!!! 😉😉😉

waise dia why u wrote it soooooooooooooooooo late??????
i was w8ing to post for ur fic but no post from ur side 😭😭

ya ya now i must say that ur fic is vry vry vry nice otherwise u will kill ur mommy 😆

ur fic was really cool but why is every1 interupting in btwn them????

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz dia ab koi twist mat lao plzzzz 😭

continue asap


luv
mommy 😳😳😳
Edited by sonam1509 - 19 years ago

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