Will U B Mine-prt14,pg 47.UPDATED!

i'd started writing another ashi-yuvi fic 1ce but i never finished it..................i'v lost track of dat so i'l start a new fic.............hope u ppl lyk it...............................

Part 1

ashi was running across d corridor,desperately trying 2 escape frm sonia,wen she bumped into yuvi,hu was coming frm d opposite side of d corridor................unable 2 cntrl herself,ashi fell on top of yuvi.

Y:ashi tum..................i mean,whacko,dekhkar nahi chal sakte kya????

still trying 2 pull herself out of yuvi's arms,ashi said,'duh,psycho,i didn't do it purposely !!!!!!'

Y:waise ashi,tum aise bhaag kyun rahi thi??????

A:hey bhaggu,mai kya koi criminal hoon jo tum mujhse itne questions pooch rahe ho???

finally,wid yuvi's support,ashi's up on her feet

Y:actually mujhe laga ki i can help u if u'r in ne problem.........u can trust me..........but if u don't wanna tell me,it's fine.

A:mai batana toh nahi chahti but dis is a VERY big problem........mumma mujhe pure skool mein dhoond rahi hai.yuvi plz hide me sumwhere rite now !!!!

Y:par kyun??????

A:duh,psycho,u said u'll hlp me so instead of asking me these idiotic questions,hide me sumwhere......................n JALDI KARO !!!!!!!

Y:ok ok stop shouting!!!!!!!(aftr thinking 4 sumtime)let's go............

A:kahan ?????????

Y:arre chalo bhi..........................

ok ppl plzzzzzzzzzz tell me whether u lyk it or not.................plz post ur comments.n don't worry,i'l stop writing if u guys don't lyk it...............

doesn't seem it's gud enuf............coz u'r d only 1 hu's replied till now.................

hey bhaggu,i think i'l tell sum1 2 close dis topic............or mayb delete it..........

hehe ur soo yper dis its gud u shud continue

ya ya i do get hyper sumtimes..........but now i'm not hyper,i'm just upset dat no1 lyks my fic.don't worry,if u ppl don't lyk it,i won't continue...........

newayz,shells n esha,thnx 4 lyking it but i don't think i'll continue coz no1 seems 2 lyk it...............

its gud many ppl rnt onln eire now u shud w8 till everyone reds it n dun jump into ocnclusions osoo soon

ya why r u losing hope it is really good i luved it n n wht the next part to be posted fast

Originally posted by: esha17_love

ya why r u losing hope it is really good i luved it n n wht the next part to be posted fast

i'l cont. soon but i'll wait till my best frend reads it !!!!

Originally posted by: uvcraziestfan

its gud many ppl rnt onln eire now u shud w8 till everyone reds it n dun jump into ocnclusions osoo soon

ok,granny......................i'll do as u say............😉

Dia, this is awesome!!! Pls continue I love it 👏 👏 Dun worry ppl aren't on et they will be tho 😊