Fic:Remix misplaced!(Last part-pg10)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is a fan fic..my first one here so puhlease send me ur feedbacks!!!

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Remix misplaced!!

It is the winter vacation at Maurya and this year Jumbo decides to take the students on a holiday instead of just letting them go home.

The students definitely have every reason to be thrilled.

But someone is not happy, and that is prof.Mitra. he approaches Jumbo-

"Sir is saal Maurya mein yeh naya rule kaisa? Agar aap le jana chahate hain to le jaiya par scholarship students ko Maurya ke funds pe le jane ki zarrorat kya hai?

aur waise bhi unke is trip mein shamil hone se baki students pe bura asar parega..unhe bhi to apne status ke students ke saath rehna chahiye!"

Jumbo:" Prof. Mitra, dekheyi Maurya mein students ko sikhaya jata hain ek dusre ke saath mil jhul ke rehna, scholarship students ko na le jaane se baki students ko bura lag sakta hain!"

Mitra: "wuff!!! bura lag sakta hain..bura lag sakta hain. scholarship students ko Maurya palta hain..woh Maurya ko kuch bhi nahin dete!!

Paar aap jaise mera kam mein dakhal nahin de sakte, main bhi aap ko nahin rokunga. After all mere bhi kuch usool hain."

Banging the door of Jumbo's cabin Mitra leaves.

on the other hand Shyla convinces Latika to go on the vacation, coz it will give her time to get into the groove of her new made frnds-ashi, tia, yuvi,ranveer and concentrate on Ranveer.

But Jumbo reconsiders his decision when Mitra leaves, and when he is confused Lati enters her fathers cabin.

Seeing her excitement about the whole thing, Jumbo sticks to his decision.

Next morning all the students are called for a special assembly. Jumbo and Mitra adress the students about some rules that are to be followed while the trip.

Mitra:" Hum saab jante hain ap log kitna utsukh hain is trip ke liye, par yeh ek college trip hain, is liye ap sab ko kuch rules samajh lena hoga.

Aap log koi bhi harkat karne se pehle yeh yaad rakhna ke yeh bhi apke college curriculum ka hissa hai or indiscipline bilkul nahin chahiye!

Students aur teachers Flight ke Executive class mein jayenge, par scholar ship students economic class mein. Aur is baare mein koi..koi bhi aur bahes ya sawaal nahin karenge.

AAp logo ko trip ki baki details samjha diye jayenge. Aur finally hum ne decide kiya ke humlog Maldives ja rahe hain."

Mitra and Jumbo leaves. All the students all start leaving the room. Tia approches ranveer:

"Ranveer, Tia bahut khush hain ke hum sab trip pe ja rahe hain"

Ranveer:" Aap ko to kush hona hi cahiye..hum sab dost jo sath honge.."

Tia:"par.."

Ranveer:"Par kya tia?"

Tia:" par Tia ko bura laga ke Mitra sir scholar students or baki students mein fark kar rehe hain. Aise to tia ki angel Meher bhi Tia ke saath nahn hogi..Flight ka maza hi nahin aayega! Tia apne angels ke bina nahin reh sakhti."

ranveer:"Hum jante hain.."

Tia:" aur tum bhi to Tia ke saath nahin .."

they look into each others eyes. Ashi, Yuvi comes,

"hey thakur aur timbo...thakur suno tumhe hamre saath chal na hoga aur Yuvi ko scholarship students ke saath."

Yuvi:"haan dude, kyun ke Mitra mujhe ranveer aur tumhe Yuvi samjh te hain"

Ranveer:"par aap hamare liya kyun taklif uthaenge?"

Yuvi:"dude its fine..chalo abhi trip ki taiyari karte hain, yeh sab bad ki baatein hain!"

Ranveer:"cahliye"

tia:"haan tia ko bhi ready hona hain."

Ashi:"jao timbo..aur duniya bhar ki dresses pack karlo..kya pata wahan koi fashion show"

Tia:"Ashi! tia abhi jati hain aur pack karti hain"

tia leaves, others also leave.

shyla standing with Latika,

Shyla:"ab main apni last target maien finally kamyab hone wali hun"

Lati:"Tum kya karne wali ho? yeh log jitne bhole lagte hain utne hain nahin. yeh tumhe apni frnds to bana chuke hain par apni confidential bate tumhare saath itni asani se share nahin karne wale."

Shy:"Just wait and watch!!"

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome dude!!!totally fabulous...puh-lease continue!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow this is really nice........continue it asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddd😊con'td

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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was ausom....but mitra has done wrong...this is very much wrong...
but this update was ausumn....
plz contd it....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanx 4 all d compliments...i am posting d next part soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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You seem to know the characters very well... great job!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dam nice torsa
puhleese continue
mitra is a loser 🤢
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow....first welcome to IF....
u hav an awesome fic....keep goin..... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice one!
awesome fic! 👏

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