ITS BACK. pyar dosti hai! NEWPART#9 pg.13

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😳ok .. i was gonna do this fan fic wit my best friend Charmingal.. but she is very busy with her studies and i couldnt wait...😛


warning: in this story there is no shyla seth.. i had thought of this concept b4 she came to the show.😡


Pyaar Dosti Hai !

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Posted: 19 years ago
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woow im ready for a new fic already do continue soon!!!!!!
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Its a new beginning .. tia is very happy that ranveer has returned... but as usual she chooses to hide her emotions. Ranveer is now just focused on moving on.. he thinks that unless the feelings are not mutual there is no point in waiting for someone..New entries to the class.. Natasha she;s sweet, sexy, bubly, stylish, ... words are not enough to describe her.. Natasha is very friendly. Yuvi is lost in thoughts about how his switch in subjects is gonna work. And ashi very bugged with Mitra !!!

Day1: Ranveer walks into the canteen and sees yuvi seating on the table in deep thoughts.
R: Banna aap kya soch rahe hai (shaking yuvi to get him to the real world)
Y: Ranveer Dude is mitra ko mere dad se kya chahiye.. I dont understand. Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.. agar us psyco ka plan fail ho gaya na to mere dad to mujhe maar dalenge.

Natasha walks in looks around and spots Yuvi,
Natasha: HI, Im sorry to disturb you but i just wanted to know ki Mitra sir ka office kahan hai?
Y: Mitra, Tum us devil se kyun milna chati ho?
Natasha: Devil? really? itne bure hai kya ?
Y: Bure ... Aree us ka..
Ranveer: Aapko hum le jate hai Sir ke paas. Yuvi, hum abhi aate hai.
Natasha: Thanks ranveer. Bye yuvi.

Tia watches Ranveer n Natasha Walk out of the canteen, and walks angrily towards the table where yuvi is sitting.
Yuvi notices her odd behaviour.. and says
Y: hey, babes whats up? tum itni tensed kyun lag rahi ho ?
T: Tensed? .. uuhh Tia? Tia kyun tensed hone lagi? Aaaiisaa kkya ho gaya hai ki tia.. ?
Y: Tia rehene do.(noods his head in bisbelieve)


Should i continue... pls respond fast.

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PART #2

Meher walks into the canteen
Meher: Tia tumhe pata hai pri kahan hai ?
Tia: Nahin kyun?
Meher: Woh.. pri, bahut bure mood mein thi. Aur room main kuch to badbada rahi thi. Phir achanak room se jaldi jaldi mein bhag gayi...
Tia: Angel dont worry, yahi kahin hogi woh .. chalo hum usse dhundte hai.

Yuvi: *rolls his eyes* and watches them go. He then walks out of ther and on his way clashes with Latty.

Latty:(wicked smile) kya tumne sid ko kahi dekha hai?
Yuvi: Ek second.. (checks his pocket) nahin yahan to nahin hai ! (smiles and then looks at her and says) Mujhe kya pata ..
He then walks of.
Yuvi has got lot of chores to do .. but wait most important of all ... HE FORGOT TO CUT HIS HAIR !!!
Its almost sundown and now theres no way he can get a permission to go out especially from Mitra
Just then Yuvi spots his biggest nightmare coming towards him MITRA!!!!!!
Yuvi dodges him and quickly enters the locker room and tries to hide.. to his misfortune.. mitra is entering the locker room that very moment.....

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PART#3




Mitra walks into the locker room n yuvi is really freaked out.. Mitra touches the door of one of the lockers and sees the dust on his finger n starts wiping his hand wit his handkercheif..Yuvi tries to escape at tht time, when suddenly mitra feels like he saw someone moving...
He takes two steps backwards while yuvi is dodging between the lockers... just then ashi who is passing by sees yuvi almost on his knees crawling around..
Ashi: *rolling eyes* Hey bhaggu! Yeh fake He-man ko akal kab aayegi!!???
She walks straight into the locker room...and suddenly Mitra turns and sees her..
Mitra: Ah! Anvesha Ray Banerjee.. Tum yahan? Boys locker room mein?
Ashi: hmm.. Mujhe poen se kuch kaam tha.. kisine mujhe batay ki poen is room mein hai..


Mitra: Oh, I see.. toh aashi yeh red colour jo tumhare baalon mein hai.. yeh koi naya style hai?
Ashi(in her mind says, " NAHI YEH MERE NATURAL BAAL HAI! - DU-UH!") looks around from the corner of her eye n sees yuvi escaping..
Ashi: umm... sir mujhe kuch urgent kaam hai.. mujhe lagta hai mujhe yahan se jana chahiye.
And she walks off...


She sees uv and calls out of him at the corridor...
ashi: Hello papa's boy!
Yuvi: (nods his head in amusement and turns) hey!
Ashi: Waise tum jaise sher ko apne hi den mein chupna kyun pada!?? tell me ? (she keeps her elbow on his shoulder)
Yuvi : (shows her his problem.. HIS HAIR!)



Ashi: Hey Bhagu! Itne si baat ke liye.. really uv, tum fake heman ke perfect example ho!
Yuvi: psycho! tumhare pas meri taang kheechne ke alaava koi kaam nahi hai kya?
Ashi: ok? fine? main ja rahi hun.. bye!


Yuvi: (stops her by holding her wrist) Ashi.... Thanks!
(lost in each other's eyes.. for a while)


Just then sid walks rite to them..
Sid: Hey Guys!
They dont respond.. Sid waves his hand in front of their eyes
Sid: DUDE!!!!
Yuvi: hey sid! (ashi goes away,and yuvi watches her go)
Sid: Dude hum is weekend par kahan jayenge???? Main sochta hun kuch hot chicks ke saath disco chalte hai
Yuvi: Sid.. Tumhara dimak kharab to nahin hua hai na.. abhi to week shuru hua hai aur tum weekend plan kar rahe ho....
(and they move out of there)

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Part #4

Tia walks towards Gloria's desk, when she sees Vrinda and Natasha walking out of Debashish Mitra's office.


Tia: (calls Vrinda aside and says to her) Babes, Tum is tacky Natasha ke saath kya kar rahi ho?
Vrinda: Tia relax. Natasha yahan ranveer ke saath aayi thi. Woh to hum dono ko mitra sir se kuch kaam tha is liye hum saath mein hai.. aur tumhe Natasha se kya problem hai? Woh to kitni friendly hai..
Tia: Tum bahut innocent ho, main aise logo ko acchi tarah se jaanti hun.. pehle dosti...
Vrinda: Aisi baat nahi hai tia, woh sach mein acchi...

Natasha interupts..
Natasha: Hi tia, I think hum pehle kabhi mile nahi.. Im natasha,(puts her hand forward in friendship)
Tia: Hi (reluctantly shakes hands wit her)
Natasha:(smiles) Ok then, Virnda mujhe apne books aur stationery lene jaana hai so im outta here.. bye..bye tia!
Tia:(looks at her go.. with an unpleasant expression) Vrinda, tumne ranveer ko kahi dekha kya?
Vrinda: (looks at tia and understand everything and smiles naughtily) Nahi... Pata nahi woh Na-ta-sha ko- chod-ke kahan chala gaya! (she teases tia)
Tia: (seems bugged)
Vrinda: Kyun tia, ran-veer ko kyun dhond rahi ho???? (smiles)
Tia:ummm... Tia ko us- us camel se kuch kaam hai!.. usse papa ke kuch papers dene hai.. bye vrinda..


and she walks away witout even lookin at vrinda...
Vrinda giggles !
Ranveer is out in the garden of the college campus... when tia spots him but just then.. Natasha walks to ranveer and sits on the seat and is talkin to him..
N: hey ranveer...
R: hi
N: tum itne udas kyun baithe ho???
R: hum? nahi toh hum thik hai?
N: to maine kab kaha ki tum thik nahi ho?.. shayad udas hoke baitna tumhara favourite passtime hoga, rite?
R: kya?...
N: just kidding.. toh tumne science liya hai rite?
R: Haan..
N: k... com on yaar.. ranveer. why u so quiet?? say something
R: Abhi hume yuvi se kuch baat karna hai.. hum aapse baad mein milte hai...
N: ya sure no probs..
R: bye.. (and he turns to go)
Natasha: Ranveer (ranveer turns) im sorry, maine tumhari privacy ko disturb kiya
{im wondering if that sentence is gramatically correct in hinglish😃}
Ranveer: (smiles) nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai.. bye


walks out of ther and reaches the college building where tia is standing with her arms folded angrily...

Tia: Agar tumhari mithi-mithi doston se mithi-mithi baatein ho gayi ho to kya hum baat kar sakte hai???
Ranveer: looks confused at first.. but then smiles at her like this ....
😆

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PART #5


tia walks into the gym quite angrily and starts to talk when she turns and realises ranveer has not yet come.. and she turns back and talks to her self
T: stupid.. camel.. cactus! (and turns round towards the door and dashes into ranveer when he enters the gym! ) {NA JANE KAISE BACKGROUND SCORE} ranveer saves Tia from triping..
Ranveer and Tia are this close to .... u knw what!


They come back to reality...
Tia goes to the center to of the gym and tells him..
T: camel, papa ne mujhe kuch kaam diya hai...
R: Kya kaam?
T: tumhe yeh papers dene the..ye lo.. bye
R: Tia, aap humse is tarah kyun baat kar rahi hai?
T: oh puh-lease cactus, toh kya pyaar se baat karu? "oh ranveer, my jaan, please yeh papers le lo!?"

R: naughty smile... haan try to kar hi sakti ho, itna bhi difficult nahi hoga..


T: very funny... waise ranveer, naye students kitne acche hai na??
R: (frowns) haan. Sab bahut hi "Pyaar" se baat karte hai..
T: good, finally koi to hai tum jaise cactus se jo pyaar karta hai...
R: haan koi to hai, par pata nahi jisse main pyaar karta hun woh kya sochti hai...

(lost in each other's thoughts)

meanwhile ashi is in the shed she has told yuvi to inform ranveer n tia about meeting at the shed...
Ashi sees and burnt down candle at the place where she had once spent time with yuvi..
Sees smiles to herself, and thinks of the good times with him...

Yuvi barges into the gym and interupts the moment between T and R..
Y: Ranveer, Dude hume shed mein milna hai.. in 5 mins.. and tia u too
T: Tum log jao tia 10mins mein aayegi
R: hue bhi kuch kaam hai.. hum aate hai aap jaiye.. (he looks at T and goes away from ther...and so does uv)

Ashi, sees some of the songs that yuvi has written and tries to play their background tune [slow one]..Yuvi walks in wit his guitar.. but ashi doesnt see him shes busy playing the casio.. yuvi plays the same tune with his guitar.. and ashi looks at him.. and smiles..

Ashi: nice tune na..
Yuvi: doesnt say a word is just looking at her..
Ashi: music is so refreshing, i wonder pehle kabhi maine ye sab kyun nahi kiya tha.. maurya mein aane ke bad everything has changed so much..
Yuvi: yeah tumhare aane ke baad bahut kuch badal gaya hai..
Ashi: kya badla hai
Yuvi: main......

Edited by aasma_remix - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey...... this is awesome plz continue fast!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey very nice.. please continue.

good work.

wonder where was all this talent when we had the Fan Fic contest in IF. we got so few entries.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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well di i didnt knw abt this awesome forum that time.
waiting for some more responses b4 i continue..

COMING UP..
Yuvi's scene
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PART #2

Meher walks into the canteen
Meher: Tia tumhe pata hai pri kahan hai ?
Tia: Nahin kyun?
Meher: Woh.. pri, bahut bure mood mein thi. Aur room main kuch to badbada rahi thi. Phir achanak room se jaldi jaldi mein bhag gayi...
Tia: Angel dont worry, yahi kahin hogi woh .. chalo hum usse dhundte hai.

Yuvi: *rolls his eyes* and watches them go. He then walks out of ther and on his way clashes with Latty.

Latty:(wicked smile) kya tumne sid ko kahi dekha hai?
Yuvi: Ek second.. (checks his pocket) nahin yahan to nahin hai ! (smiles and then looks at her and says) Mujhe kya pata ..
He then walks of.
Yuvi has got lot of chores to do .. but wait most important of all ... HE FORGOT TO CUT HIS HAIR !!!
Its almost sundown and now theres no way he can get a permission to go out especially from Mitra
Just then Yuvi spots his biggest nightmare coming towards him MITRA!!!!!!
Yuvi dodges him and quickly enters the locker room and tries to hide.. to his misfortune.. mitra is entering the locker room that very moment.....

Edited by aasma_remix - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dam kool nams
plz write more
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will kill u if u dont continue iam eagerly waiting
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 pateince sharon...

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