ITS BACK. pyar dosti hai! NEWPART#9 pg.13 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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What's taking you solong? Post the next segment fast, before we grow old and wither away, will you! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesum!! 👏
puhleez cont fast!! 😃
u r v lucky that priya di commented on ur fanfic!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey Radhika and all of you guys...

Sorry buddies, but some office work and other work have been keeping me away from Remix section. I hope all that will get sorted out soon and I hope to be back here with all of you.

Meantime, dont forget me 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey amazing fic.waiting 4 moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


happy remixing!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is sooooooo cool 😉 plsssssssssss continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16


PART#3




Mitra walks into the locker room n yuvi is really freaked out.. Mitra touches the door of one of the lockers and sees the dust on his finger n starts wiping his hand wit his handkercheif..Yuvi tries to escape at tht time, when suddenly mitra feels like he saw someone moving...
He takes two steps backwards while yuvi is dodging between the lockers... just then ashi who is passing by sees yuvi almost on his knees crawling around..
Ashi: *rolling eyes* Hey bhaggu! Yeh fake He-man ko akal kab aayegi!!???
She walks straight into the locker room...and suddenly Mitra turns and sees her..
Mitra: Ah! Anvesha Ray Banerjee.. Tum yahan? Boys locker room mein?
Ashi: hmm.. Mujhe poen se kuch kaam tha.. kisine mujhe batay ki poen is room mein hai..


Mitra: Oh, I see.. toh aashi yeh red colour jo tumhare baalon mein hai.. yeh koi naya style hai?
Ashi(in her mind says, " NAHI YEH MERE NATURAL BAAL HAI! - DU-UH!") looks around from the corner of her eye n sees yuvi escaping..
Ashi: umm... sir mujhe kuch urgent kaam hai.. mujhe lagta hai mujhe yahan se jana chahiye.
And she walks off...


She sees uv and calls out of him at the corridor...
ashi: Hello papa's boy!
Yuvi: (nods his head in amusement and turns) hey!
Ashi: Waise tum jaise sher ko apne hi den mein chupna kyun pada!?? tell me ? (she keeps her elbow on his shoulder)
Yuvi : (shows her his problem.. HIS HAIR!)



Ashi: Hey Bhagu! Itne si baat ke liye.. really uv, tum fake heman ke perfect example ho!
Yuvi: psycho! tumhare pas meri taang kheechne ke alaava koi kaam nahi hai kya?
Ashi: ok? fine? main ja rahi hun.. bye!


Yuvi: (stops her by holding her wrist) Ashi.... Thanks!
(lost in each other's eyes.. for a while)


Just then sid walks rite to them..
Sid: Hey Guys!
They dont respond.. Sid waves his hand in front of their eyes
Sid: DUDE!!!!
Yuvi: hey sid! (ashi goes away,and yuvi watches her go)
Sid: Dude hum is weekend par kahan jayenge???? Main sochta hun kuch hot chicks ke saath disco chalte hai
Yuvi: Sid.. Tumhara dimak kharab to nahin hua hai na.. abhi to week shuru hua hai aur tum weekend plan kar rahe ho....
(and they move out of there)

Edited by aasma_remix - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
dis was awesome keep it coming like dis
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
hey this rocks 👏. Pls continue as soon as possible
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Namita (aasma_remix) plzzz continue soon ..
its Amazing!

way to go awesome !

keep writing

i think this was the best part --
'Yuvi: (stops her by holding her wrist) Ashi.... Thanks!
(lost in each other's eyes.. for a while)'

continue sooonn

will b waiting!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 nams sorry to comment later but it is awesum. 😉 😉 See all the viewbies and global mod have replied to your fan fiction except me and Esha. Now let me comment. Frankly speaking I din't like it. I luved it. 👏 👏 👏 . It was awesum and third part was super duper sufi. 👏 😉

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