IF FIC:EPI 17:CHANGE OF HEART - Page 23

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Posted: 19 years ago
Hai Hai Sindhu!!! Matkas of water at the pump 😭 I dont know how to operate the hand pump.. and I love bottled mineral water 😭

Cooking food on Chulha!! Yaar sindhu, gas chalana nahi aatha, how to cook on Chulha... Ranveer is Dehati.. not Veo and his Mom... 😃

But ek achi baat hai... ek ready made worker mil gaya 😉 Veo kaam pe lag jaao 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesum fan fiction. 👏👏. ME not superstitious yaar. 😭. I can't lib in alone in a hostel. 😭😭. Priya di wearing a saree. 😆😆. I can't imagine her with a saree. 😉She will look liek Sati Savitri. 😆. The Shelly and Lalit part was awesum too. 😉. Haila me doesn't know anything related to superstitious. 😆😛KEep it up. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
i m just imagining diii filling water & i dont have words 😆
gr888888 going sidhu
esha
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Posted: 19 years ago


shelly was in her room....setting out all the pens she had eva stolen frm her crushes.. 😆
lalit's pen was by far the costliest...hence he was gonna b her most intense crush..

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This is so funny!😆 😆 😆 Does dat mean the intensity of her crush depends on the cost of the pen??!!😉 😆 😆 😆



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Posted: 19 years ago


soumya was contemplating her new room..
it had so many flaws that she was horrified..
the froont door as 2 the east..according to vaastu it promoted ill luck..
n the mirror was facing the door....it reflected all the chi out....there were no three legged frogs also...wat a room..
she started all her modifications..
she bought out her ever ready thali with kumkum n haldi..n started doin pooja.. 😆
she strung lemons n mirchis 2 gether n hung them all over room..

Dis is damn funny!😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
hii all it feels gud to reply after soooooooo long!!
waise the fan fic is toooooooo gud!! 😆 😆 😆 !!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
lalit sir where r u???😆
i noe im a huge clooecter i collect coins stamps etc etc..but pen seeshells sand crystals wow!!!!!!r u sure im nt dat kinda physic person
brilliant i lubed it 😃
soumis part was kewl😉
way to go sindhu
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hellraiser

episode 9


soumya was contemplating her new room..
it had so many flaws that she was horrified..
the froont door as 2 the east..according to vaastu it promoted ill luck..
n the mirror was facing the door....it reflected all the chi out....there were no three legged frogs also...wat a room..
she started all her modifications..
she bought out her ever ready thali with kumkum n haldi..n started doin pooja.. 😆
she strung lemons n mirchis 2 gether n hung them all over room..
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this part is funny 😆 😆 😆 soumi give me sum tips too

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hellraiser

episode 9
n started cooking food on the chulha..
her ladla love the makai ki roti she made...
wen he came she shud remind his of water shortage in the house..
maebe he cud borrow water frm aparna's house..
isse dono bacche bhi miljayenge..
if water was not there mayb he cud fill buckets wid his tears...
how convinient.. 😛
tht was the advantage of havin a mama's boy...
he did all mama's wrk also 😆

OH MY GOD!!!!

this is just "over the top" hilarious. At first I was just dumbfounded...reading bout soumya😆

then it got even worse...reading priya's part. Just imagining her carrying the matkas'......😆

priya, you are always welcome to take some water from my place....

but before that let me warn u!....

keep your son away from my innocent little daughter😡 Meri Esha abhi bhi choti si bacchi hai!!!😆😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
episode 10

MISHAPS N MISUNDERSTANDINGS

priya dii was exhausted after fighting with her maid all day..
she gave a few galiyaan...n waited for veo while she cooked kheer n makai ki roti..
veo came runnin home..his bag swinging wildly with one buckle open..
"haila...mere bacche ko yeh kya hua...kisine mara kya..abhi dekhti hu unko.."
"nahii mataji...maine abhi usss ...uss pari tia ko dekhaa...."
"tia..woh nakchadi ammer khandan ki bigdi hui aulad........"
"mama...sto..stop.p..."a few tears were spilling frm veos eyes..😭.
priya dii stopped hurriedly...
she sent veo with a pink bucket n a blue one 2 esha's home..
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namita walked into her room n her mouth fell open..
it was lookin like a sabzi market..
pushing her way through all the pumpkins she saw...
soumya swaying weirdly...
"helooo...excuse me...pardon...r u like.. sober??" 😆
soumya opened her eyes angrily n threw some blue powder over hrself n turned 2 times clockwise n 4 times anti clockwise..
she faced namita angrily
"how dar u disturb my havan..im ur new roomie by the way"😲

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lalit walked with his lilac n yellow cloak bellowin behind himm..
"good morning 2 u miss shelly"he nodded
shelly was quivering with excite ment ..her hand was shaking..
she put her hands to her mouth n the 2 boxes in her arms spilled open..
the floor was littered with sand grains painted diffrent colours....n GI Joes
she screamed in horror as her magenta painted sand grain n her grey painted grain stuck 2 gether n flew away..
awayyyy..lost 4 eva her 2 priceless sand grains.😆😉..



Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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