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esha

@Coolest Esha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: s.priya
soumya!!! what to do... this is not Kekta story that I can have more than one bahu at a time naaa....

I have esha already.. ... u get rid of Esha, i will consider ur application as my bahu

What say Veo!! Swayamvar kare.. and u can decide.. 😉

di dont even think of replacing me 😡😡😡 i can b a guddd bahuuu....i know cooking,washing clothes, doing all household work & yaa even telling lie😆
gr8888888 sidhuuuuuuuu
keep going 👏
esha

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Aparna

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Posted: 19 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: hellraiser
episode 10

MISHAPS N MISUNDERSTANDINGS

"haila...mere bacche ko yeh kya hua...kisine mara kya..abhi dekhti hu unko.."
she sent veo with a pink bucket n a blue one 2 esha's home..

haila..... haila???

In the words of Maya Sarabhai.... haila is just too middle class. Yeh kya Hellraiser....u made our dear priya di into a bai😆

Originally posted by: hellraiser

lalit walked with his lilac n yellow cloak bellowin behind himm..
"good morning 2 u miss shelly"he nodded

Wah...what a good color combination. Good choice Lalit! I suppose he's trying to portray prof Snape in a lighter vein😆

Originally posted by: hellraiser

the floor was littered with sand grains painted diffrent colours....n GI Joes

Sand grains??? GI joes????

I dindnt understand a word!!! Plus...I didnt know .... girls played with Gi Joes???😆

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hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#243

episode 11

SHOCKING DEVELOPMENTS!!

veo walked sulkily waving his blue n pink bucketss..
he was thinking of tia's blue hairr..
mebbe he cud put some blue mehendi over it to turn itt blue.
unnoticed by him..a shadow was stalking him..
it was...priyaa dii who cudnt resist her curiosity of seeing esha n veo 2 gether..
he went into aparnas house ..bought water n came out..
priyaa dii dissapointedly rang aparnas bell..
appy opened it..
"kya appy ji...yeh dono toh milte hi nahiii"
"yess darlingg ..i knoww...n my princess is dyin 2 meet him"
"haan haan kyun nahii..mera beta itna handsum jo hai"
"hey prii..y dont v organise a..whatdyu call it..yess...a swayamvar for veoo"

ppl...im sry fer doin so much nautanki...but heres ficc...
the reason its so small is that im posting nxt part rite now..VEO'S SWAYAMVAR!!!!!!!dun miss itt

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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hellraiser

@hellraiser

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Posted: 19 years ago

#244

episode 12..

VEOS SWAYAMVAR

veo was seated on a throne decorated with 2 rupee dozen heart shaped balloons
he was desperately lookin for tia
the doors finally closed.
dissapointed ,he looked all around
of course there as tht ESHA ki bacchi...
n sum nerd with jasmine flowers...who had a id card pinned 2 her hanky tht read NAMITA
a shy girl with green eyes was lookin at him with her mouth open..or mebbe she was lookin at esha ..he cudnt relly tell...she was SPIKY
n alots more fans whom he cud not recognise

appy came gliding onto the stage in all her furs n diamonds...
as she took the mike n started 2 speak..there came an interruption
soumya was blinding everyone with the smoke frm her agni poojaa..
she was lost in a trance so they ignored her..
suru was calculaing the time in which everyone wud choke basing on the volume of the room n the rate of diifusion of smoke
priyaa dii was dressed in a yellow sari..her hair containing all tht roses that had eva bloomed

"gud evening ladies n gentlemen ..ill b ur host fer tonite..as u all know v r celebrating the swayamvar of veo...our ladla..our rock star...our pani ka bottle'
"stop aunty..varna mein ro doonga"veo said with moist eyes
"there..modest as eva...the rules r fairly simple..veo walks with a garland n puts it on the girl he like*esha*..thts all.."

a blushing veo took the garland n walked down the aisle...

Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago

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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#245

wow......way to go.....continue continue 👏

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Aparna

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Posted: 19 years ago

#246

Oh man...what a story....

Priya...btw...you must tell me where you bought that yellow saree. it was lookin quite good during the swayamvar 😆

I can just imagine...veo walking around with a garland 😆

But one question Hellraiser.... how come Veo agreed to a swayamvar if Tia is not gonna participate???