Tiafication of Aashi-Sid doin make-up. - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well you're all just too impatient. I cannot just tell you whats going to happen. You have to wait and watch, but let me assure you that I won't be doing a Main hoon na. This thing is only for a bet, Aashi still is and always will be Aashi.

Thanks for the reviews!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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"Tum sab kya dekh rahe ho? Kabhi ladki nahin dekhi kya?" asked Aashi, tying her pallu safely around her waist.

"Aashi, kya tum theek ho?" asked Sid, walking towards her.

"Ofcourse you loser. I'm fine. Yeh batao ke ye saree kaisi hai?" she asked, twirling round her feet.

Silently retreating back, Sid gave Yuvi a shocked look, before bursting into more laughter. Soon, the canteen was again filled with sound of mirth.

Suddenly realising what a fool of herself she had made, Aashi looked around and gracefully turned. Making her way, quickly out, she heard Tia say 'Tacky'.

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"Dude,kya tumne usko dekha? I mean saree aur Anvesha?" said Sid, slapping Yuvi on his back.

"Shut up Sid," said Yuvi and ran behind Aashi.

He ran through the hallways, calling out her name, but couldn't find her anywhere. Coming to a halt outside her room door, he knocked gently.

"Aashi?" he called out. "Anvesha?" he tried again. When no answer came, he barged in.

Aashi was busy untagling her saree. "Hey bhaggu, yeh ladkiyan saree kaise pehenti hai?" she said to herself. Her pallu was in her hand and her other hand was trying hard to untangle the saree.

Yuvi felt his cheeks redden, suddenly feeling very warm. "Um- sorry," he said and turned his back to her.

Aashi turned to him and yawned. "Tum waise yahan kar kya rahe ho? Kya yeh enough nahin that ke wahan log hasse, tum yahan mere samne aakar hasna chahte the kya?" asked Aashi, not bothering to be angry with Yuvi.

Yuvi turned, and covered his eyes again.

"Oh come on Yuvi, maine apna khud ka top hi paina hai. Just because upar se ek paanch meel lamba kapda dala hai, toh tum embarassed ho rahe ho," she said. "Ah ha!" she exclaimed, finally unknotting her saree. "Thank-god. Gloria mujhe maar dalti".

"Waise Aashi," said Yuvi but stopped as Aashi started peeling the saree off. Below it, she revealed her well worn stel gray capri's and her favourite yello top.

"Ah- finally free. Yeh ladkiyan bhi," said Aashi, throwing the saree on her bed. "Mujhe isko fold karna bhi nahin aata, aur log isse actually pehnte hai?"

His reverie broken, Yuvi cleared her throat. "Waise tum yeh sab kar kyun rahi thi?" he asked, picking the saree up and studying it carefully. "A saree?"

"Uff!" huffed Aashi. "Look, tumhe isse kya hai?"

"I want to know, maybe I can help you," said Yuvi, sitting on Aashi's bed.

"Oh really?"

"yes".

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
thats sooooooo sweet......yuvi comes to her rescue 😳 😳 😳....loved the part.....gr8 going 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum!! 👏
uv 2 rescue!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45

hey charming gal, gr8 chapter. I really liked how you made it very realistic. U didn't make ashi all embarassed n she cracked her usual wise-cracks. Yet still ppl were shocked though in a funny way! 😆 N yuvi coming to help ashi was just so adorable! Keep it up babes! 👏 👏 👏

I'm putting the link of ur fanfic in my siggies at diff. remix forums bcoz i think this is a really good fanfic!

Edited by ashi rocks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
aw....dat was cho cweet really gud😊😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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TOTALLY SUFI. [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>] [=D>]
PLS POST THE NXT PART SOON CAUSE I WANT 2 KNOW HOW DOES YUVI HELP ASHI. [;)] [;)] [;)] [;)]
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very very awesum cp.uv getting embarassed 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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"Seriously?" asked Aashi, getting up from the bed. "Kya Yuvraj Dev, the biggest Loser in the world meri help karega?" asked Aashi sarcatically.

"Aashi-" warned Yuvi.

"Forget it dude. Tum apni million and one problems par concentrate karo. Mujhe yeh bet kaise jeetni hai, yeh main khud hi figure out kar loongi," replied Aashi.

"Bet? What bet?" asked Yuvi, suddenly becoming serious.

"Kuch nahin. Meri Dimbo ke saat bet lagi hai, ke main ek girl bankar dikhaongi," she said, going to her mirror.

"Lekin tum to already ek girl ho," said Yuvim going behind her to stand and look in the mirror. "In case you didn't notice," he said, and gave a naughty smile.

"Duh," said Aashi, "Ofcourse mujhe pata hai main girl ho. I meant the girly girl- the Tia girl," said Aashi a little angry. "Like all other angels, jo skirts ya dresses ke alave kuch nahin pahenti hain. Jo roj subah teen ghante sirf ready hone main waste kar deti hai," she finished in a huff.

"Par tumko woh sab kyun banna hai? I like you just the way you are," said Yuvi, hugging Aashi, in mockery.

"Yuvi, yeh joke karne ki baat nahin hai alright. And keep your hands to yourself," said aashi, turning back to the mirror. "Yuvi, kya mujhe apne baal wapas black kar dene chahiye?" she asked.

"No way babes. Tumko black balon main dekh kar mejhu hi nahin, poore maurya ko heart attack ho jayega," said Yuvi, clutching his heart.

"Ha ha, sab log joke marte hain," said Aashi sarcastically. "Main yeh bet kaise jeetongi?"

"Look, agar tum allow karogi, then I can help you," said Yuvi.

"Yeah right, aur tumhe ladkiyon ke bare main kya pata hai?"

"Trust me babes, bahut kuch".
Sorry for the delay people.Kaam tha. Enjoy this part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
cool....jsut read up all the parts I missed. Very funny.
you have a unique writing style. good work!

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