The Awakening Part 4 (9 Nov 2005) - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: lalit1




ashi was going past him when he caught her hand




plz dont let that hand let go😳 ...the way other day tia did🤢

gr8 work...stupendous👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
awesome lalit 👏 👏 👏 👏..glad u posted the part so soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

awesome lalit 👏 👏 👏 👏..glad u posted the part so soon 😃

same here!!😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
awesome! plz continue ASAP! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
hey guys i am not feeling well so the next part may be delayed
i have it all thot out if i feel well i will post it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: lalit1

hey guys i am not feeling well so the next part may be delayed
i have it all thot out if i feel well i will post it soon

No probs lalit!!! Get well soon!!!😛😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluey



plz dont let that hand let go😳 ...the way other day tia did🤢

gr8 work...stupendous👏

i agree😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
get well soon lalit bro!! 😊 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

ashi was seething with silent rage
she needed to get the message to yuvi loud and clear

"leave my hand" in a stern voice ashi boomed
without a word yuvi left her hand
"mr yuvraj dev,get one thing clear i do not love u"
everyone started staring at her and she nonchalantly left the place
yuvi stood there stunned
she had said this lots of times before but he felt that she was just pretending
not this time though
he could tell
something had changed
but he couldnt bear the thought that ashi didnt love him
his whole world which revolved around ashi
suddenly seemed meaningless

it seemed that the world was spinning around him
the people were staring at him
he just ran away


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Posted: 19 years ago
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I had expected u would write something like this......feeling a bit sad for yuiv though......but overall a nice part and interesting fic 👏 👏 👏

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