The Awakening Part 4 (9 Nov 2005)

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Radhika Shree

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

wat happened lalit bro??!!
forgot about ur fanfic or 2 bussyyyy!!?? 😆 😆

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lalit1

@lalit1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

ok sorry for the late continuation
i honestly did not think so many people would like my story to comment upon it

thanks everybody esp misha and appy

she had reached ccd feeling as light as air .
no tension her life was as blissful as it ever was.
eyeing all the happenings going on in the cafe with renewed vigour.

tia and ranveer were in another phase of their denials of love.
looking at each other with looks that everyone could see
except the pair themselves.
hey bhaggu , kya thakur ne timbo ke brain udhar liye hain

she could notice sid taking an unusual interest in vrinda nowadays.
good she needs someone to get over aman.

omg i cant beleive myself , i am actually eyeing quite a few on the guys hanging out here.

she was abt to leave when yuvi entered ccd.

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ashi_mania

@ashi_mania

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Posted: 19 years ago

#23

nice part lalit 👏 👏 👏...but its a bit too small.....hope u post the next part by evening......eager to read it 😛

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exquisite gal

@exquisite gal

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

too gud lalit bhaiya .. it is awesum .. me too waiting fr ur next part ..

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armaanilicious

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Posted: 19 years ago

#25

hey...its really damn gud!!!
plzzzzzz continue

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shelly

@uvcraziestfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#26

hehe realyy sufi n dat eying part was really gud waitin for uv to make his entry 😉 😆

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shwetha

@remixfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

#27

222222222222222222222 gudddddddddddddddddddddd plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue 👏

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sonia ajit prasad

@s_aangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

wow!u guys write amazing fan-fics. gr8888 story. but cud u just hurry up,we seriously cannot wait(u r parts r too small)
i am eagerely waitinggggggggggggggggggg.

happy remixing!

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Divya

@dj doll

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Posted: 19 years ago

#29

same here!! I'm also eagerly waiting. U GUYS ROCK!!! But puh-leez jaldi post karo na. 😊 😆

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lalit1

@lalit1

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Posted: 19 years ago

#30

yuvi gazed at the lovely figure in front of him
suddenly he could notice a change in her eyes
they were no longer lost nor wandering
he just couldnt get his eyes off her
something somehow had changed
just what he couldnt tell

ever since they had broken off he had been trying to get back with her
he felt that she loved him deeply
but was hesistant
today he was not sure
her eyes were betraying a sign of extreme irrelevance
somehow as if he was not there
he couldnt make out what was going in her mind
he had always hoped that they would be together soon
whats going on in her mind i must find out

ashi was going past him when he caught her hand

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