The Awakening Part 4 (9 Nov 2005)

The sky couldnt have been clearer .
the sun couldnt be brighter and the sea couldnt be bluer.
the last mists of doubt that had lingered in her mind had gone away . suddenly every thing had changed . she was a new person .
the realization couldnt have been more stark .
thats the reason she could face yuvi without any ackwardness or doubt.
no she hadnt fallen in love. she had fallen out of love.
thats it .

she longer loved yuvi.
no love , no anger , no hate .

she hadnt any emotions regarding yuvi any longer.
for her he was just a friend,

shaking her head off she got out of her trance
and hailed vrinda "mind coming to CCD"
"ya coming ashi" vrinda replied

it seemed as if a huge stone had been cleared off her mind.
she was the old ashi she always was.


Hey guys dont kill me for this
i was just dead tired of reading so many romantic fics
i wanted to write something else
i dont care if none of u like this fic

lalit...FINALLY ur writin a fic...me sez u rite better than almost everyone round here...n abt the story line..iluv it...just dun make it romantic again...keep it like it is...

thank u so much
for giving me somethin worth readin
i am tired of ashi loves uv uv love ashi and stuff
this is good........

😭 atleast end it romantically lalit....but a fabulous start...but plz bring them together 😳 😳 cant see them apart..see so much already 😭

Originally posted by: hellraiser

lalit...FINALLY ur writin a fic...me sez u rite better than almost everyone round here...n abt the story line..iluv it...just dun make it romantic again...keep it like it is...

thanks i am really not sure where this story is gonna go

Originally posted by: fate

thank u so much
for giving me somethin worth readin
i am tired of ashi loves uv uv love ashi and stuff
this is good........

ya me too dead tired

Originally posted by: bluey

😭 atleast end it romantically lalit....but a fabulous start...but plz bring them together 😳 😳 cant see them apart..see so much already 😭

thanks for the compliment i really dont know what turn this story will take
but there are enough fan fics around if yu like romantic ones
even i have written a couple earlier

lets wait n see how this turns out

Hey ! Nice one.
and quite different too 👏

Originally posted by: bluey

😭 atleast end it romantically lalit....but a fabulous start...but plz bring them together 😳 😳 cant see them apart..see so much already 😭

i agree yaar--we'v cn ashi-yuvi separate 4 like 4 mnths or sumthin😡--ISN'T dat enuf 4 hellraiser,fate n d others??????????????newayz,gud 1,lalit.........................

Hi,
very good beginning 😊 .