ladakh - an Ashi Yuvi fic ( completed!!!)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

ashi912

@ashi912

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#41

Part 9

After a long time they break apart.
Y:(naughtily) Haan, Ashi tum kuch keh rahi thi hena?
A:(angrily) Haan, mein keh rahi thi ki we're just friends.
Yuvi's smile falls off his face & he looks very hurt.
Ashi starts laughing & says: NOT!!
Y: What do you mean?
A: (still laughing) Oh, Yuvi,tum itna bhi nahin samaj sakte,kya?
Y:(still confused) Huh?
A: Shut up, sweetheart
& she hugs him....

Edited by ashi912 - 19 years ago

Quote

ashi912

@ashi912

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#42

Do u guys like it??? By the way the story's not over yet! 😊

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Priyaa

@remixrulz

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#43

ooooo.......ur gettin naughtier... 😆 😆 😆
its awesome.....ashi912......its completely rox.....

luv'
priyaa

Quote

ashi912

@ashi912

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#44

Part 10
Yuvi finaly pulls away from Ashi.
Y: Ashi, I'm sory meine tumhe itna hurt kiya.Mein sachmuch tumse pyaar karta hun.
A: Good, mein bhi tum se bahut pyaar karti hun. Pata hai, jab mujhe Sid ne bataya ki tumne mujpar bet rakhi thi aur tum mujse pyaar ka natak kar rahe the to mein bahut hurt huee the. I love you more than I've loved any one else. Ab plz mujhe dhoka maat dena.
Y: Kabhi tumhe dhokha nahin doonga, I promise . You're the only one I've ever loved.
A: Aur Yamini?

Quote

ashi912

@ashi912

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#45

is any1 reading?????????Plz plz plz reply 😭

Quote

Divya

@divya_92

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#46

really really really awesome fanfic..

plz dont bring yamini the bhootni in this.. 👏

Quote

Priyaa

@remixrulz

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#47

awesome........and ya 1 request....plzzzzzz dont bring yamini the bhootni...the devil....the arjun..the latika..etc etc 😆 into their lives.......

priyaa

Quote

shelly

@uvcraziestfan

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 19 years ago

#48

it was awesoeme let it b true i hopee................. 😉

Quote

dia

@dia5

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#49

THANK GODDDDD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally i found it--wow ashi912,darlin,u ROCKKKK n so does u'r fanfic 😳 .u kno i'm verrrrrrrrrrryyyyyy upset dat dis time i wasn't d 1st 1 2 read it !!!!!!!!! 😭 newayz,now dat ashi-yuvi r 2gethr 😳 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don't introduce ne of d devils 😡 😡 here.tumhe ashi aur ashi-yuvi ki kasam !!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉

Edited by dia5 - 19 years ago