ladakh - an Ashi Yuvi fic ( completed!!!)

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Posted: 19 years ago

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its such a gr8 one plzz let it b true

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Radhika Shree

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

gr8!! superb, fantastic fanfic!! 👏

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Priyaa

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Posted: 19 years ago

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awesome......u rock....man...i think i shud not rite my fanfic...its gonna go dull...in comparison to urs...
sry dia...u arent gonna c my fanfic... 😭

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: remixrulz
i think i shud not rite my fanfic...its gonna go dull...in comparison to urs...
sry dia...u arent gonna c my fanfic... 😭

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DUH, hv u gone NUTS ????????????? u'rs is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO romantic !!!!!!!!!!! i'll die if u stop riting!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Priyaa

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Posted: 19 years ago

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well.........u wont die coz im writin more.....ive got my brains bak....i actually sent them on a stroll to LADAKH...
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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: remixrulz
well.........u wont die coz im writin more.....ive got my brains bak....i actually sent them on a stroll to LADAKH...
😆

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THANK GODDDD coz i had no intention of dying at a yung age of 12 !!!!!!!!!!😆😆

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Priyaa

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: dia5

THANK GODDDD coz i had no intention of dying at a yung age of 12 !!!!!!!!!!😆😆

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Ravinder Pal Singh Pasricha

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Posted: 19 years ago

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its so coooooooooooooooooool yaar 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 6
Next day Ashi,Yuvi,Sid & Sonia, all go out together for sight-seeing & both Ashi & Yuvi behave very friendly with each other & while returning back Ashi stops Yuvi again.
A: Aaj, mughe bahut maza aaya.I guess, hum dono acche friends ho sakte hain.
Y: Haan, tum sahi kheh rahi ho.
They talk for sometime & then Ashi asks Yuvi:Yuvi,tum ladakh kyun aaye.
Y: ( hesitates for a while)Well, mein nahin chahta tha ki tum mujhe loser samjho. I wanted to tell yo that meri galti nahin thi ki Ranveer chalagaya.
A: Bas?
Y: What do you mean?
A:Tum itni door aaye sikf muje itna batane ki tumhari galti nahin thi ki Ranveer chala gaya?
Y:(hesitating)Um..Ashi..woh.mein.. bas itne nahin.
And finaly he says: Nahin.

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 7
Finaly Yuvi blurts out.
Y: Ashi, mein ye jaan na chahta that ki kya tum abhi bhi Aditya ko date kar rahi ho. Mujhe jaan na tha ki kya tum us ke saath Ladakh aae ho.
A: Yuvi, mein kya tumhe psycho dikhti hyun? Aditya is a cheat. A psychotic fraud & liar.Us ne Remix ke saath jo kiya, Malvika ke baare mein mujse jhoot bola,un sab chijon ke hoone ke baad mein use kyun date karon?Waise bhi mein us mein jada interested nahin thi.
Yuvi smiles at her.
She smiles back.
Then they both say together: Mein tumse..
They both smile again & then Ashi says:Mein tumhe ..
But then she stops & she says: Achaha Yuvi bye.
And she turns to go.

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