~* The Way We Were *~ pt 9 page 16! (A TiaRa ff) - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash419

Aww thanks girls, of course il continue writing for u :) I thought id make this part a bit longer, so its taking longer to post it..

And im curious to know, who's rachel? 😳 im sorry, i barely no anyone from rf! bt i luk forward to her reading this ff :)

oh ok take your time we all will be really happy to see longer parts😳😛 but do cont cause we all are too desperate😳😛
and racheal her id is maxliz and we are all looking forward for her to see your fiction she would have been so happy seeing this but she isnt active now but she would be back after some days and then i am sure you would also be happy seeing her sweet persona cause
she is very talented and her comments always brings a smile to your face it assures that someone is there who really looks forward to your post whom you can always vouch for and she has this amazing ability to make you happy and without her single day in kasthi is very soona and i hope she comes back soon miss you racheal😭 😳😛
hey have you visited the kashi asha its beautiful paradise of tr do join us we would be really happy to see you there😳😛😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 2: Bittersweet Nights and Unexpected Phone Calls

1 am. Ranveer was lying in his bed, thinking about the date he had just come back from. It had been a week now that he and Nainika had been dating. She was sweet, intelligent and pretty.. and they seemed to agree a lot. And yet thoughts of Her kept cropping up out of nowhere.

Like when Nainika had asked him if he had ever ridden a camel.. He automatically thought of Her voice shrieking "You dehati camel!"

And when Nainika twists a lock of hair around her finger.. He just remembered the way She used flick her hair behind her.

And when Nainika asked him to dance.. well what else could he think of but those dances with Her.

She didn't want to be with you Ranveer, remember?! I'm sure She's moved on by now. She's probably better off without me in her life, probably found someone new, who won't fight with her or hurt her.. who's probably richer and classier than me.

I'm sure she's so happy that she doesn't even think about me.

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1 am. Despite a tiring day at work, Tia just couldn't sleep. It was one of those days when she got an unsettling feeling at the back of her mind. She couldn't explain it, but it frustrated her to no end. She had tried all her usual aromatherapy baths, the lotions and potions, but in the end only one thing worked. Him.

Some people count sheep to fall asleep. But Tia counted the number of times she had found herself in His arms: the almost-kisses, the desperate embraces, the slow dances.. His scent, his breathe, his touch, his voice. Every caress and every word.

Of course she hated doing this, because that phase of her life was finished, and these memories of "the way we were" only weakened her current determination, and made her so sad. Yet she couldn't deny that it worked like a magic, because after only thinking of a couple of these memories, she would fall into a peaceful, dreamless sleep. He was her bitter-sweet solace.

In the morning she made herself strong again. She remembered convinced herself she was doing the right thing...Tia Ahuja didn't need any more heartbreak.

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"Hello?"

"Hello.."

"Tia?!"

"Meher? How are you angel? It's been so many days since I last spoke to you..."

"Tia, voh sab baad mein.. I have some really bad news – Pri's really ill."

"WHAT?????? Omg what happened to my angel??? Where is she???? Meher you should have told me earlier!!! How could you not tell Tia about her angel!???"

"Tia I'll explain everything to you, you just come home right now. Pri needs you babes."

"I'm getting the next flight to Bombay. Talk to you soon."

Tia put down the phone with her trembling hands. Her mind kept coming up with awful situations and explanations about what could have happened to her Pri. She and Pri spoke to each other all the time, even more than she did to her Papa. Something must have happened to her today itself.

Tia rang up the travel agent to book a flight, and then her work to tell them that an emergency had come up. Then in a rushed frenzy she began stuffing everything she could find and think of into her Louis Vuitton suitcase.

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"Hello? HELLO? Ranveer?"

"Yes speaking."

"Ranveer, main Vrinda bol rahi hoon"

"Ohh Vrinda! Kaisi hain aap? Aman kaise hain?"

"I'm fine.. But Aman is really ill.."

"Aman???? Kyaa hua Aman ko????"

"Voh.. Ranveer I think you need to be here. Can you come to Mumbai??"

" I'll be there as soon as possible."

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Vrinda puts the phone down and looks at Anvesha. "He's coming as soon as possible. Ashi he was so worried, I feel terrible for lying like this", she said.

"Me too Anvesha! Tia sounded like she was having a heart attack when I told her Pri was ill", added Meher.

"Meher, since when did you become a Mehereshwari? You and Vrinde, do you both really think that if we told them the truth they'd come out of their hibernation or exile or whatever they think they're doing? If you told them "Ashi is back from her around the world trekking tour and is dying for a Maurya High class reunion, so please please pretty please come" they'd come? Na-uh; They'd be the only 2 missing people from the whole year group.. It would be like a smile with two missing teeth!"

"I guess you're right. Some day or the other Tia has to face Ranveer and solve out their problems. They are meant to be together", said Meher.

"Hey Bhaggu! Timbo to Timbo hamesha rahegi, but why is Thakur acting so stubborn?"

The three girls sat in silence in Ashi's kitchen while waiting for the kettle to boil. Everyone knew Tia and Ranveer were apart, but not everyone knew why. Tia hadn't even fully confided in Pri and Meher.. they too only knew bits and pieces of the story. All they knew was that it was a bad idea to bring it up to her, and to him.

No one knew what to do...but then came Ashi's plan. She had been trekking through the Amazon rainforests, scaled the peaks in Peru, safaried in Africa and swum with sharks in Australia, dragging Yuvi along everywhere with her of course ;) Yet when she had recently returned to Bombay, she was filled with a longing for her classmates, and decided that 4 years apart was more than enough, she had to have everyone together in the same room again right now! Then she put 2 and 2 together, and realised that this was in fact the perfecto opportunity to get Tia and Ranveer to meet. It wouldn't be easy, but Ashi had a spirit and an energy that could change the world, so what were two troubled souls in comparison to that? Now phase 1 of her plan was complete.

"What happened happened. Now all we need to do is get them in the same room together, and they'll be pulled towards each other like magnets.. By the way Vrinda and Meher, you're performances were award-winning!" laughed Ashi.

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Will Ashi's plan work? How will Tia and Ranveer react when they find out the truth? And what exactly did happen to TiaRa? Find out soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice part like again loved the way you represented tia and ranveer side really cute😳😛
but i wanted to say i would have preferred to see more on there ind side whats going in thier life how much they are missing each other and afterwards they come back to maurya like after 1 or 2 parts it would have added more to beauty😳😛
but i liked ranveer and tias ind side and ashi plan to bring all of them to maurya and have reunion😳😉you have great writing skills😳😛
Edited by angel3142 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: angel3142

hey nice part like again loved the way you represented tia and ranveer side really cute😳😛

but i wanted to say i would have preferred to see more on there ind side whats going in thier life how much they are missing each other and afterwards they come back to maurya like after 2 parts it would have added more to beauty😳😛
but i liked ranveer and tias ind side you have great writing skills😳😛
and ashi plan to bring all of them to maurya and have reunion😳😉

hi!! thanks so much for the feedback, will def keep this in mind for the next bit! trust me i can write so so much about their thoughts, what they're feeling, the loving and longing.. but had too much else to write.
ok i dont want to give too much away, bt with ur patience i assure u ul find what ur luking for 😉
thanks once agen for ur comment, reli appreciate it!!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😊hey ash

ur part was amazing continue writing and i didnt read ur msg as i usually read it in the ff section but as evrybody said u r like a life saver coz nobody writes a tr fic i was like dying to a new fan fic. continue soon cant wait
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Some people count sheep to fall asleep. But Tia counted the number of times she had found herself in His arms: the almost-kisses, the desperate embraces, the slow dances.. His scent, his breathe, his touch, his voice. Every caress and every word.

wow !!!!!wow!!!!!

your remind me of lamina.. (she was queen of tr fan fics)its like ...you have filled up the void ..
you have a 👍🏼way with words.... you got me hookewd to your fa nfic
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Ash,
finally read ur fic😳the starting reminded me of JTYJN😆thought "Him" is Ranny and "Her" Tia😳nyc start👏👏👏

Because even though her wardrobe now mainly consisted of black and white business attire instead of bright mini dresses, she still never compromised on style. She compromised on her sleep, meal times, music ...But never her style. Things like that were just too deeply etched into her identity.

So never ask Tia Ahuja to get ready in 5 minutes, because it simply isn't possible. She may no longer have a fit about a broken nail, but that saying still applies: Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi hai!

i adore this paragraph👏👏so true so close to her👏👏Tia Ahuja hona koi aisi waisi baat nahiin.......ahhhhhh!!! how i want to hear her say that again😳

Like when Nainika had asked him if he had ever ridden a camel.. He automatically thought of Her voice shrieking "You dehati camel

😆😆who can forget this??Camel, Cactus, Dehati😆😆
awesome fic......do continue soon😳
Natalie.
PS:-m not liking this Nainika girl
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No one knew what to do...but then came Ashi's plan. She had been trekking through the Amazon rainforests, scaled the peaks in Peru, safaried in Africa and swum with sharks in Australia, dragging Yuvi along everywhere with her of course ;) Yet when she had recently returned to Bombay, she was filled with a longing for her classmates, and decided that 4 years apart was more than enough, she had to have everyone together in the same room again right now! Then she put 2 and 2 together, and realised that this was in fact the perfecto opportunity to get Tia and Ranveer to meet. It wouldn't be easy, but Ashi had a spirit and an energy that could change the world, so what were two troubled souls in comparison to that? Now phase 1 of her plan was complete.

i was rolling on floor while reading this🤣🤣dragged yuvi along🤣sounds exactly like a thing she wud do.
Natalie.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazingly written ash... u've so well expressed ranveer's nd tia's inside feelings.. tht though r hidden for the world.. but do exist in sum corner of their hearts nd they cnt get over it...😍☺️ u've written it soo well....
u srsly have a knack of writing... luved it totally...
really lukin forward to wat is ashi's plan's phase 2 about... m hoping towards those warm embraces☺️.. tht constant gaze of tiara☺️.. tht luv for each other tht cud b seen in thier eyes☺️... awww... m missin those special momentss...😭
how i wish remix had never stopped...😭
but hatss off to ur work yaa👏.. u brought bk all those memories😍... it was such a pleasure to have tiara in our lives yaa..☺️☺️
thnx again..
nd eagerly waitin for the nxt part...😛😛
Edited by palo rani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rika: aww thanks for the sweet comment. and its my pleasure writing this ff...just hope i can do justice to TR!!😳
Aparna: havnt read any other TR ff.. but woww thanks! thats a big compliment for me as this is onli my first ff! 😊 Thanks so much.. i like playing around with words😉
Natalie: so glad u finally read it! thanks so much 😃 Haha yhh i did think of jtyjn for the start, and how so many films have endings at airports! And I know... i just luv that phrase of Tias😊
Nainika.. haha she doesnt know abt Ranveers history yet! i wonder how she'll react when she finds out..
Palo: sorry, i dnt no ur name!😳 But thanks, i wish remix had never stopped either :( And Im posting the next part.. right now!
Luv
Ash

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