Alzia OS 'Fighting with one's own heart' - Page 2

Originally posted by: Astoria

Sonu,meri jaan,first of all I am extremely sorry ki itni late se reply kar rahi hoon.Forgive me😊

Sceond,one thing about your writing is that you always have a surprise in store for us.Everything that you write always manages to keep the reader engrossed and charms the reader as well.

Do you really need my comments to know how AFSAW your OS is?I don't think so👏

The way you have described the feelings of Alzia,Altunia's passion and his fiery jealousy of Yaqut,no words can be enough.👏

The use of Urdu is beautiful and that is one of the things which makes your writings all the more special.

I love you Sonu for this beautiful piece of work🤗🤗🤗

Once again,AFSAW,AFSAW and AFSAW👏👏

Can't imaginge, whose pain is more.. A mere misunderstanding, can bring a horrible end to every beautiful memories..
But it can't end the love.. So very beautiful it was, that i'm wondering, how cvs are going to portray the scene...

Don't know if Yakut is anywhere at fault or not, but his only mistake is he tried to take Mirza's place, in his Mohattarma's life.. Bechara free me halal ho jaega..

The only good thing is, the person whom cvs introduced as Yakut.. His appereance, and personality here, is such, ki ise halal hote dekhne me v maza aega.. Razia to rehne do, ise Turkan v ghaas nhi dalegi..

Fab OS..

Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL

Can't imaginge, whose pain is more.. A mere misunderstanding, can bring a horrible end to every beautiful memories..
But it can't end the love.. So very beautiful it was, that i'm wondering, how cvs are going to portray the scene...

Don't know if Yakut is anywhere at fault or not, but his only mistake is he tried to take Mirza's place, in his Mohattarma's life.. Bechara free me halal ho jaega..

The only good thing is, the person whom cvs introduced as Yakut.. His appereance, and personality here, is such, ki ise halal hote dekhne me v maza aega.. Razia to rehne do, ise Turkan v ghaas nhi dalegi..

Fab OS..

Originally posted by: overactor

thanks😳

Turkan ka calibre high hai boss wo kyun ghas dalegi ise to dasiyan bhi ghas nhi dalengi

Well, he could go for that painter bhaijaan of Razia.. Sorry half bhaijaan.. Just imaine both of them in RK pose.. Uff, flower showering upon them from ceiling, and they're lost in each other.. Go for it cvs...

Originally posted by: DIGVIPAUL

Well, he could go for that painter bhaijaan of Razia.. Sorry half bhaijaan.. Just imaine both of them in RK pose.. Uff, flower showering upon them from ceiling, and they're lost in each other.. Go for it cvs...

i know .. commenting super duper late, sorry... busy with training these days.😔

Originally posted by: ..radiance...

i know .. commenting super duper late, sorry... busy with training these days.😔

haaye starting ka scene jahan hawa Razia ko choo kar Mirza k pass jati hai.. main toh wahin clean bold ho gayi thi..

Mirza ne bhi kya order diya apni fauz ko... aisa toh yahi janab kar sakte hain.. 😆

beech mein jab Yaqut Alzia ki fight k beech mein aata hai aur Razia usse bhaga deti hai, i wished ki jab ye saari misunderstandings build up ho rahi thi tab bhi Razia aisa hi karti... 😭

yaqut Razia ka best friend 🤢

i didnt understand one things yarr.

'zawal' kya hota hai!? something like taqdeer?

I loved your OS soo much Sonu... 🤗

Oii sonaa...i read this OS again...

Originally posted by: princess200

Oii sonaa...i read this OS again...

i have a query

whats the meaning of "tumhara zawal ye tumhara ashiq aaj khud likhega"

Also Razias roza breaking prayer "Aaj jeet sirf hamari dil ki ho" 😆 u knw what she asked for indirectly and unknowingly ? she asked for Altunia's victory...😳 Mohtarma ki dua qubool hui !! 🥳

Beautiful. ..