Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

Mera bhi sochle i made him do it with the saut already...woh bhi twice

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remember my dream na ??? 😭😭

i understand 😭
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Guys this is going to be my longest update ever so it will be in 3 parts 😛

Part_18 A

Altunia came close to her and held her shoulders.

Altunia; ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai mohtarma?

Razia looked at him, their eyes met, though her reasons were different but she still had love for him in her heart, and that was evident in her eyes.

ALtunia; kab krna hai niqaah?

Razia; kal

Altunia nodded, he had tears of joy in his eyes, he moved forward to hug her, but RAzia moved back.

Razia; ab niqah k baad hi milenge hum aapse

she ran away. Altunia smiled, his happiness knew no bounds, he finally was getting married to the love of his life, he jumped in joy.

Altunia; kahan ho sab...tayariyan kro fata fat, kal hamara niqah hai

he announced.

The whole castle was busy in preparations, Altunia kept trying clothes and rejecting them.

Altunia; ye rang acha nhi he dusra dikhao

Zaroon; miyan..ye 13ween sherwani he jo tum ne thukra di chahte kya ho

Altunia; miyan, tumhari bhabhi jaan itni khoobsoorat he ab unke noor k saamne hum pheeke amroot jese langenge to kese chalega

a maid giggled

Altunia; kya hua?

MAid; ghustakhi maaf ho Malik, pr pheeka amrut aur aap? aap to rasleela aam hen

Altunia smirked

Altunia; haaye jaana, tum ye alfaz hamari begum k saamne bolna, ghusse me laal tamatar hojayengi wo...aur hum unhe

Zaroon; miyan, sabr rakho abhi bht waqt he, arman abhi na beqabo kr bethna

Maid; MAlik, aap na bhure rang ki sherwani peheniye, wo wali, bhure rang pe sunehre kaam wali sherwani aap pe khoob khilegi

Maid2; nahi Malik aap lal rang pehniye

Maid3; MAlik aap safed rang pehniye

Altunia; acha acha chup, hum bhure rang ki sherwani hi pehnege

the first maid smiled and teased the others.

Zaroon; shuqr tumhen kuch to pasand aya

Altunia; hamari begum k jode agaye? unhe hare rang ka joda pehnana

Maid; jee Malik jo hukum aapka, hum saare harre jode le aate hen aap pasand kr lijiye

the maids brought the clothes and he sat and stared at them for long, finally he selected one and gave it to Jameela.

the maids left.

Altunia; Zaroon miyan, unhe mehendi lag rhi hogi, humse sbr nhi hta, hum ja k laga den mehendi unhe

Zaroon; nahi, tum kahin nhi jaoge

On the other side, Razia was sitting like a doll as the ladies applied henna on her hands.

Fatima; ab btaiye hum Malik ka naam kahan likhen?

Maid; bilkul hatheli k beech me likhiye

Jameela; haan aur bada bada likhiyega

ALtunia entered the room

Altunia; koi nahi likhega hamara naam

all the maids stood up, RAzia looked at him in confusion, he gestured all to leave and sat beside her, he came very close her, and traced the area of her palm that had no henna, it was only the middle small area surrounded by henna and her hands were already very cold, his touch tickled her and send sparks down her spine.

Altunia; humne hamara naam aapki qismat se khud joda he, to hatheli pe kisi aur ko kyun likhne den

Razia looked at him, her heart raced, no matter how much she tried, she could never hate him, she couldn't even dislike him, he was just too perfect for her to resist.

He took the peacock feather, and dipping it into the henna bowl, he started applying it to the her, "Altunia" he wrote in arabic caligraphy, beautifully on her palm.


She looked at his name, and then at him, he took her hand in his, and kissed her forearm, just below the place the henna design ended, he kissed it all the way to her elbow, she felt as if an electric current passed from her arm to her whole body, electrifying all her parts, she had goose bumps throughout her body, her arm and cheeks red, she was unable to breathe properly, his effect on her was too much for her.
Jameela came inside.

Jameela; gustakhi maaf ho Malik, pr Zaroon miyan ne aapko yahan se niqalne ko kaha hai

Altunia; ama tum sb se hamari koi dushmani hai kya? kyun krte ho esa hamare saath

Jameela; niqah se pehle ab aap nhi milskte apni dulhan se, chaliye

she pulled him

Altunia; mohtarma, ye zalim log hamen aapse kitna bhi door krlen, hum aa k rahenge phir aapke paas

Jameela took him out and handed him over to Zaroon

Zaroon; chalo miyan, ab sojao wrna subah ankhon k neeche kaale ghade wala chehra le k jana niqah main

he made a face and followed Zaroon.

As he lay on his bed, he couldn't sleep, he lay on his chest and moved his arm over the silk bedsheet

Altunia; kal aap yahan hogi mohtarma, hamare sath hamare paas, hamari bahon main, mohtarma...

he sighed in relief and sleep took over.

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Zaroon was helping him in getting ready.

Zaroon; kya kr rhe ho seedhe khade raho na

Altunia; ama jab tumhara Falaq se niqah hoga na tab hum bhi dekh lenge tumhe

Zaroon; tab ki tab dekhenge, abhi seedhe khade rho

Altunia; hamari mohtarma, matlab begum (he blushed) wo tayar hogai kya?

Zaroon; aaye haye, gaal to dekho janab k, miyan tamatar to tum lag rhe ho

Altunia; chup, hum tayar krte na unhe..

Zaroon; miyan...tum na kuch aur krna, ab chup chaap khade rho wrna humse bura koi na hoga

Altunia; tumse bura koi hai bhi nahi

Jameela entered

Jameela; dulhan tayar hai, qazi sahab bhi a chuke hen

Zaroon; ye dulha bhi lag bhag tayar hi hai, bacha ban gya he aaj, chalo

Altunia walked in the grand courtroom which was decorated for the wedding, he wore a dark brown sherwani with golden embroidery, and a beaded sehra on a brown turban. His eyes searched for his bride, she sat with her eyes lowered, covered in jewellery throughout, in a green lehenga, with golden embroidery.
He sat down opposite to her, with a curtain separating them.

The Qazi started the wedding ritual, asking them if the agree

Razia; qubool hai, qubool hai, qubool hai (she said softly with a lot of gaps without looking at him)

Altunia; qubool hai, qubool hai, qubool hai (he said quickly)

all congratulated them, after the wedding Razia was taken away, Altunia's eyes didn't leave her throughout the ceremony, until she was gone.

Zaroon; thoda sabr krlo, dimag khrab hogya hai kya tumhara, itne log hen yahan tumse milne aayen hen

Altunia; zaroon, mohtarma murhai hui lag rhi hen, hum dekh k aate hen na

Zaroon; dawat khtam hojaye phir jana

Altunia wanted to go but people gathered him and he was unable to leave.

The sunset but the moon never showed up, the clouds covered the sky completely and there was a sudden thunder and Bhatinda was covered with rain.
Altunia finally managed to sneak out and went to her room, only to find it empty.

Altunia; oho, hum bhi na, hamari begum to hamare kamre main hogi na

he smiled and was leaving when his eyes fell on something, he went to her bed and picked up the thing, it was nani's message. Altunia was shocked to read it.

"yasir ki khatir hi sahi, Mirza se niqah krlo Razia"

His world collapsed, the marriage he was so happy about was not a marriage, it was just a contract, for her to secure her family and her stupid kingdom, he fumed and clenched his fist, the message in his hand.

Altunia; RAzia Sultan!!!!!!!!!! tumne ek baar phir hamara dil tod diya na, ab bas, ab bht ho chuka, humne tumse sirf ishq k do alfaz ki umeed ki aur tumne sirf hamen dhoka diya, ab bas, ab MAlik Altunia tumhen apna bna k rahega, ab tumhen hamare seene k andar ki aag se jalne se koi nhi rok skta

he left the room in anger.
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Part_18 C

He lay down beside her, and continued to laugh.

Altunia; bandhiyan sach kehti hen, aapke liye to hum raseela aam hi hen, kese choosti hen aap humen

Razia; acha? hum? ulta chor qotwal ko daante, sharam nhi aati aapko

Altunia; sharam aapko aani chahiye

Razia; nhi aapko, apni begum k sath esa koi krta he, aag laga di bistar k ird gird, ta k hum bhag na sken, tauba, kitne junglee hen aap

Altunia; aur aap kya hen? dil aapka hamen paane ko beqarar aur niqah ka taaj yasir aur delhi ki bechari awam k sar, aapki harkaton se hamara ghussa tak thanda hogya

Razia laughed again

Razia; hamen maaf krdijiye, hum khud nhi jaante aapke liye hamari mohobbat ko, ye kambhakt dimag hamare dil pe haavi jo hojata he

he pulled her into his arms again.

Altunia; aur hamara dil hamare dimag pe havi hojata he, tabhi bina soche smjhe kuch bhi kr bethte hen hum.

Razia rest her head on his chest, and moved her hand on it. He played with her hair and then traced her cheeks.

Altunia; aaj k baad humare beech me koi nhi aana chahiye

Razia; koi nhi ayega

he kissed her forehead and she kissed his cheek.

Altunia; abhi subah main kafi waqt hai na..kyun na

he grabbed her tight

RAzia; nhi humen neend a rhi he kal raat bhi nahi soye hum theek se, hatiye

Altunia; kya mohtarma?

she took her dupatta from the floor and wrapped it around herself, then she lid a lamp and searched for a night gown, she wore one and threw one on him

Razia; chup chaap ise peheniye aur so jaiye smjhe

Altunia; lekin

Razia lay down beside him and hugged him.

Razia; hum aap ki hen, aur aake paas hi hen, so jaiye subedaar sahab warna aap aur hum badnaam hojayenge

he hugged her tight and they both drifted into a peaceful sleep, ever since he had left Delhi, this was the first time both slept with comfort, they felt like they were finally in heaven.
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Posted: 9 years ago
charan dhone ki practice karke aati hoon ruk...


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Posted: 9 years ago
O my my...it was tooo...hot
Pure time blush kia bt padha bhi 😆
Haha...bandhia bhi line marne ka koi mauka ni chodti,or bechara zaroon mirza ki jangalee diwangi bhari bate use sunne padi or gali b khani padhi 😆
Alzia alzia alzia.. 😉 😈 ❤️
Waise ye last chap tha?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Babygirl287

O my my...it was tooo...hot
Pure time blush kia bt padha bhi 😆
Haha...bandhia bhi line marne ka koi mauka ni chodti,or bechara zaroon mirza ki jangalee diwangi bhari bate use sunne padi or gali b khani padhi 😆
Alzia alzia alzia.. 😉 😈 ❤️
Waise ye last chap tha?

nhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Altu pe line maarne ka chance koi nahi chodta 😉 Aww altu bhi blush karne laga raz ki mohobat me 😊 no comments for sr 😳 waiting for nxt chp 😊
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Originally posted by: AlZian

Altu pe line maarne ka chance koi nahi chodta 😉 Aww altu bhi blush karne laga raz ki mohobat me 😊 no comments for sr 😳 waiting for nxt chp 😊

why no comments😊 phir mere likhne ka faida😊
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ONLY BECAUSE I SAID I WOULD COMMENT TODAY ITSELF...

Altunia was happy like a child just given his most precious thing. Sweet hes just sooo very suweeet !😳

Baaandhis...😡 how i hate them...you are not pheeka amrood u are raseela mango...huh 😡 And Mirza can never turn his flirt mode off bloody...haaye jaana it seems 😵...flirty kameena mera 😆

You made her wear green 😳 kya kiya yaar...i know u have red allergy coz of tht red dupatta on mirza...but itni allergy ki dulhan ko na pink na orange na maroon...seedha green...🤣

Mehendi scenes haaye...you know this was very unexpected...him barging in like that and writing his own name on her hands...the dialogues he tells her...angry or sweet...are always to die for...


humne hamara naam aapki qismat se khud joda he, to hatheli pe kisi aur ko kyun likhne den

His convos with Zaroon also are always a treat...tumse bura koi hai bhi nahi🤣 love live this friendship...⭐️

ooo so this was the reason why nani sent the paigaam...rather why u made her send it...bless her...bless her soul...bless her handwriting...her paper her quill her ink.. everything

My dream consummation of Alzia...the rains...the winds...the thunder ...and the FIRE 😈😈😈

Amaaa tere dimaag mein aise overly hawt shaitaani ideas kahan se aate hai re...the fire also he lit with perfect science sense...mud so that it doesnt spread...oil so that it burns well...😛

Altunia on fire...Altunia in anger...UFFF HAAAYEEE ☺️☺️ My cheeks have become beetroots rather like someone just slapped me hard there or i applied VS ka blush ☺️☺️ he in his anger mode is when hes the most desirable to me😈...bhala razia bhi kaise resist kar leti...😳 Hes dangerous...the way he was talking to her...cutting her off in btwn and telling her a big angry scary dangerous and hawt CHUPP...hes just beyond perfect and in every sense HAWT...


his lines...spcly this ---->
kyun? dard hoga bardasht na hoga? hamen farq nhi padhta ab...tum harai begum ho tumpe haq he hamara samjhi

this was wildd...so wildd to the effing core 😈☺️ bardasht nahi hoga ?? dard hoga ???? YOU GUTTERY SOUL SISTER 😈

ab sirf hum hone aap hogi aur hogi aag
☺️☺️ howww can he be so dominating and romantic at the same time...justtt howww...you have also spoilt me and made me increase the demands of qualities the Altunia of my life should have !


ek trf hamare seene ki aag, aur dusir trf ye, jalna to aapko aaj hoga hi, dekhte hen, konsi aag ka shikar bnti hen aap

like seriously, what was that ??? 😈☺️ itni zyada aag mein jo jal raha ho...woh bina chuye hii sab kuch jala daale😈...haaye ALTUNIAAA LOVE YOUUU !!☺️☺️

and then the most awaited action...ab u really want me to describe what i felt ??? itni samajhdaar toh tu bhi hai...tu khud hii apna update padhke dekhle what effect it has on people like me ☺️☺️ there was not a single line there which i didnt read maybe thrice or more...⭐️ but as usual arsh has to have her one or two specific fav line...and i do have ----> one is when he ahem tore her choli off...😈☺️ and the other was ...dont know how though...when he pulled the quilt over them...tanha toh thay magar for him its still like alone or not alone she is all mine and only mine to see...

aur action scenes ke baare mein toh pooch hii mat ab...jaan legi kyaa ?? sharam aarahi hai mujhe...beetroot ban gayi hoon main ☺️☺️

You nailed it...you nailed it hard...you are in the real true sense my soul sister...how much i loved this update i cant even fantom the most romantic and highly wild and passionate consummation as yours was...really really really realllyyy hatsss off...a million salutes👏👏

OMG RAZIA BECAME JUNGLEE BILLI 😲
but offcourse jab shauhar mila ALTUNIA jaisa toh bhala koi kaise khud pe control rakhe...main hoti toh noch deti usko😈 I HATE U RAZIA...U HAVE NO IDEA HOW JEALOUS I WAS OF YOU THROUGHOUT THIS UPDATE...MUJHE SONU KE SS WALA MIRZA CHAHIYE CHAHIYE CHAHIYEEE !!!😡

he started laughing ?? he actually started laughing after everything 😆 yesss hes right...sharam razia ko nahi aati...Altunia ko sab maaf hai lekin😳 MU over im glad although i love it more when they r on a passionate fight mode...see what happened above bcos of that😈

and she didnt let him do more😡 saali🤬 thats why i tell hes better off with me😈


I LOVEEE YOU GIRL...THIS WAS THE BEST UPDATE EVER READ TILL DATE NOT JUST OF YOUR'S BUT OF ANY SS/FF loveee u loadsss


sada swagwaty raho (RA ke style mein)😉


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