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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 1 and 2 is very beautiful and intriguing .It's really beautiful ,the way you described it .But dear please don't use text words in your writings ,it becomes difficult for me to read.
Rudra comes to meet Paro in her house and Paro is shy,Laila is very bold and loves her sister alot . Finally Paro and Rudra say yes to the marriage.Why does Laila asks for Rundra's blood reports?
Loved the Sangeet Ceremony ,Laila and Paro dance was veg nice .loved Gayatri singing for Paro .Haha loved Laila teasing her sis and mom.
Loved the Haldi scene ,the way Rudra applied Haldi to her was so passionate.Songs in the parts are beautifully imposed.L ooks like Laila doesn't like to see Rudra and Paro together she is jealous of her sis but she doesn't know why may be she is falling for him.
Loved the dialogue of Rudra "Only some time more.Then will be together forever."
Finally they are married
Loved the consummation scene it's so intense and passionate it's beautiful.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 3 and 4 is really nice Rudra and Paro morning romance is so nice.Paro brought tea for Rudra and he started to do romance with her even though she was hesitating when she wanted to go to the kitchen to make breakfast.Oh so Rudra has planned to go for a honeymoon in Goa.He gives her a gift that she needs to wear those mini skirts and top.Paro felt awkward.When she saw foreignes in bikinis she found it weird but as it was a beach this way clothes were suited.Love the playfulness of Rudra and Paro playing by splashing water.They come back .Paro asks him about his house in Mumbai but he gets angry and tells her that he doesn't have a house and Paro sees his angry side.He takes Paro inside the car and drives her to a place.Paro reminds me of Khushi here the way she talks too much Loved Rudra saying so .He takes her to thier new house .The way he says that since she has come it has brought positivity and she needs to open the house as she is positivity and the way the walked together inside the house hand in hand and they went to their room and they laid on the bed and the eye lock was very sweet .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 5 and 6 is really a mix of emotions ,the way Paro says for Vanilla as anilla was very funny.But felt bad for her as she is a village girl she doesn't know all these things.Loved the way Rudra corrected her.In a party,Paro didnt like the way a man greeted her in a friendly way and Rudra gpt angry on hef but then he calmed down,he brought changes into her by making her learn the modern style and the way of living.Loved that they go for a party where Paro makes Rudra mesmerized by her beauty.loved their dance the song included was perfect.Parud passionate romance is so beautiful and a treat.Loved that Rudra prepared food for her and he fed and plus Paro too fed him so cute .It was Park's Bday but she felt he forgot he then took her a room and she was surprised to see a swing
loved that you user perfect pics of Parud for the love moments in the swing
It was very romantic scene


dellzcreationz thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
Part and 7 and 8 is really nice and interesting.I want to correct you in one mistake which I found is that you wrote that Rudra is using arms and caressing her face actually it's his hand please correct these mistakes.Paro likes the Sweet gift he gifted her but why hasn't he wished her happy birthday?
Oh Paro gets locked in the bathroom and the bedroom door is locked Both are locked and Paro gets a dream that Rudra is making a prank.She comes back to reality and actually its really true.Rudra consoles Paro that he will sort out this and suddenly the doors open.Loved Paro and Rudra hug sceneIts later revealed that It's Laila who does it as it's a prank to her entry as a blast as she is come to stay her to do her MBA.Laila tells Paro that she has got a lovely husband that loves her alot.Rudra takes Laila fot shopping nice .

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Posted: 8 years ago
Laila wanted to check if Rudra has sexual disease as she doubted if had a healthy life style in city,.

Originally posted by: -Dellz-

Part 1 and 2 is very beautiful and intriguing .It's really beautiful ,the way you described it .But dear please don't use text words in your writings ,it becomes difficult for me to read.

Rudra comes to meet Paro in her house and Paro is shy,Laila is very bold and loves her sister alot . Finally Paro and Rudra say yes to the marriage.Why does Laila asks for Rundra's blood reports?
Loved the Sangeet Ceremony ,Laila and Paro dance was veg nice .loved Gayatri singing for Paro .Haha loved Laila teasing her sis and mom.
Loved the Haldi scene ,the way Rudra applied Haldi to her was so passionate.Songs in the parts are beautifully imposed.L ooks like Laila doesn't like to see Rudra and Paro together she is jealous of her sis but she doesn't know why may be she is falling for him.
Loved the dialogue of Rudra "Only some time more.Then will be together forever."
Finally they are married
Loved the consummation scene it's so intense and passionate it's beautiful.

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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome updates. loved it.
laila has gone mad. she fell in love with rudra n confessed it to him. she is behind him like obsessed person.
paro saw rudra n laila. what will be her reaction.
waiting for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update. laila is crazy.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Suraj hua madham...The sun has dimmed...Part11 and Part12

Part 11 Paro:Laila!
Laila is shocked:di
PARO:why r u catching Rudra's feet?
LAILA:who told u dat I'm catching jeeju's feet?I'm taking
the pearls dat fell on his feet
PARO:Oh!I thot u r ..
Laila takes the pearls.
PARO:why r u here now Rudra?
He stammers:me...I ...came 2 drink water
PARO:ok,cum and sleep.dis crazy girl sleeps during midnite
Paro goes.Rudra follows her. Rudra turns back.Laila's eyes r burning.

Rudra is sitting on bed.Laila hugs him from back. Rudra smiles and
catches her arm.den he sees Laila's arm & leaves it.
Rudra is shocked 2 c LAILA:u?I thot its Paro.how cum u here
in our bedroom?
LAILA:2 c u.2 giv u a passionate hug
RUDRA:how dare u touch me!I feel uncomfortable wen u touch
me
Laila smiled:no jeeju.u r lying.u loved it.eventho u thot
its di's hug u enjoyed my hug
Rudra is stunned. Laila smiles:a sweet hug.this is enuf 4 me
Laila goes. Rudra is irritated

Laila 2 PARO:di,I want 2 shop
PARO:I don't hav time.u go with Rudra
Rudra shouts:why r u always leaving us alone?why don't u hav
no time?
PARO:I've 2 make food
RUDRA:why ur life is always made up 2 prepare food?


PARO:what else can I do?I'm not educated like my sister.i
can do only this
RUDRA:u r my wife.i don't want my wife 2 finish ur life in a
kitchen.we'll keep a servant

PARO:wen I'm there no need of a servant
RUDRA:but Paro..
PARO:no back answering
RUDRA:ok.but whenever we r going out,u shud also b there with
us
PARO:ok,I'l cum with u 2
Rudra smiles.Laila stares at RUDRA:now I don't hav mood 2 shop
Laila goes inside her room.PARO:suddenly what happened 2 her?
Rudra smiles.

Laila is very angry wen lying on the bed.Suddenly she gets
up seeing Rudra entering her room.
LAILA:I no why u came here.2 shout at me.so u plz go.there
is no use.i'l not change
RUDRA:I came here 2 apologize.i'm sorry
LAILA:what?
Rudra 's fingers go thru her face sensually.
She 4gets herself .

He pulls her closer and they've sizzling sensual dance...


( Aashiq Banaya... (3) Aapne )... (2)
( Tere Bin Suni Suni Hain Baahein
Tere Bin Pyaasi Pyaasi Nigaahein
Tere Bin Bin Asar Meri Aahein )... (2)
Tere Bin

( Tere Bin Lamha Lamha Sataye
Tere Bin Bekarari Jalaaye
Tere Bin Chain Mujhko Naa Aaye )... (2)
Tere Bin

( Meri Nigaaho Mein Tera Chehra Rawaa Hain
Gehre Hain Armaan Jaane Ja Paagal Samaa Hain )... (2)
( Apni Daayre Se Toh Main Chutne Lagi Hu
Tere Baajuo Mein Aake Tootne Lagi Hu )... (2)
Tere Bin Jeena Nahi Hain Gawara
Tere Bin Dil Ka Nahi Hain Gujara
Tere Bin Kaun Apna Sahaara
Aashiq Banaya... (3) Aapne )... (2) -Aashiq-banaya-aapne
Part 12 Laila realizes dat it was only a dream and so she
gets angryand goes out of the room.She sees Rudra & Paro
sitting close 2 each other on the swinging chair.
Paro takes ridra's hand and keeps it on her tummy.
Rudra:What happened Paro?Are you not feeling well?You have stomach pain?We will go to hospital now.
Paro smiles:No need.I am alright.I meant to say that...
PARO blushes: Rudra,u r going 2 b a dad
Rudra is surprised.Laila is shocked.
Rudra is so happy that he hugs Paro with lots of love and carries her in his arms. They are very happy.

Laila thinks:I dunno whether to be happy or sad

Rudra takes Paro to hospital and confirms pregnancy happily.

Rudra caresses Paro's tummy:Baby...Daddy's baby...Danny and Mumma can't wait to see you.When are you coming?
Paro:Rudra...It will take 9 months..
Rudra:I know..but I can't wait to see our baby.
He caresses her face:I want our baby to be just like you.
She smiles:But I want our baby to be like you.
Rudra:But that is not possible as there is only one baby in your womb and that will be little Paro.
P:But have are you sure that it will be a girl?
R:You are so sweet that you can give birth to only sweet girls.
They both giggle.
He caresses her face with love and affection:I am telling you seriously Paro.You are very sweet.No one can be so sweet and pure like you.
She blushes.
They both cup each others face in hands.
R:Love you,
P:Love you too.

Laila who over hears it gets irritated.


Laila brings milk 2 Paro:drink dis di.its gud 4 ur baby

Paro smiles & takes it. Rudra cums there fast:don't drink dis.


PARO:why?
RUDRA:its not the right time 2 hav milk
LAILA:who told u?
RUDRA:I know dat
Rudra takes the glass forcefully from Paro and thus it falls down
and breaks.
PARO:what's this? Why are you making so much of fuss?You could have just told me not to drink milk.And what is the problem if I have milk now?Milk is really good for pregnant women.Right?
RUDRA:Don't argue..Come,hav sum nutritious food instead of sum light milk
Laila stares at him.

Rudra is in the kitchen 2 take food 4 Paro.Laila gets in:what did u
mean by what u did?
RUDRA:I know dat u brought milk 2 Paro with a wicked aim.u
wanted 2 kill our baby.You must have added poison in the milk.
Laila loses her control:jeeju!how dare u?ur wife is my
di.i'l not even think of killing her baby
RUDRA:I don't trust u.u want 2 kill Paro and our baby 2 get
me.but dat'l never happen
Rudra was strong.
He leaves with food.

Rudra feeds Paro with his hand.



P:I feel nice when you feed me.
R:I am feeding not only you,but our baby too.

Paro smiles:Our baby is lucky to be fed by it's father now itself.
Rudra smiles.
Laila feels jealous seeing Rudra feeding Paro.
She thinks:How caring he is to Paro di.Wish he was caring towards me also.

Rudra is shocked 2 c that the swinging chair is missing
RUDRA:Paro...
Paro cums.
RUDRA:where is the swinging chair?
PARO:I dunno.now only I came 2 no dat its missing
RUDRA:Where is it?
Laila comes:Don't worry.It's with me.
Paro holds Rudra's hand happily:Rudra...it's not lost.It's with Laila.

Rudra:Laila...what did you do with it?
Laila:I just removed it.
RUDRA:why did u do it?
LAILA:I removed it.bcoz there is no 1 2 use it

RUDRA:who r u 2 decide dat?dis I bought 4 Paro
LAILA:don't u know dat di cant swing in this condition?
Rudra:but it shud'nt b removed.keep it back.Keep it back.
Rudra yells at her.Laila is upset.
Paro:Rudra..why are you shouting at Laila?

Rudra:Because she did such a deed.
Paro:For such a silly thing don't shout at her.
Rudra:Paro..don't interfere.Let her keep it back.

PARO:keep it back.ur jeeju is short tempered But don't mind..because he is soft at heart.
LAILA:ok.I will keep it back.but on 1 condition.i want 2 swing.jeeju shud push
it 4 me

WIL RUDRA DO DAT?
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...👍🏼...Paro thought that Laila is touching Rudra's feet but she denies...🤔...Rudra gives a romantic hug to Laila thinking it to be Paro......Laila becomes happy...🤔...Rudra asks Paro to stop cooking always......Laila dreams of Rudra...😆😆...Paro is pregnant and both are very happy...👏👏👏...Rudra takes care of her...😎...Rudra doesn't allow Laila to give anything to Paro as he thinks that she's trying to kill her baby......Laila says Paro to ask Rudra to push it for her...😲...hope Paro knows soon about Laila's attraction towards her hubby......waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's lovely that Rudra and Paro are going to have a baby. But laila is turning out to be irritating. Now she has taken away the swing and will give it back if Rudra pushes her in the swing. How shameless. How can she do this to her sister.

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