FF: The long way home (Chapter 31 on pg 39) - Page 26

Nandini just dug her grave . I hope that wasn't one of Tejawat's men , but I know that he most probably is. Silly silly girl. To have come such a long way and give into impatience now.

Rudra is gonna be so angry sigh

I just loved parud scenes. oh nandini...

Hello Alina!

I have been meaning to read this FF for a while now, I finally caught up with all the chapters this long weekend.
I must say that your story arc is very interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your take on PaRud's story.
And you addressed so many important points, which the original series completely missed out - like the evaluation of Paro by a psychiatrist.
I liked that your Damayanti was much sharper and asked all the relevant questions. VK Singh also was more sensible in your story, that he was on the show.

The first couple of chapters and the conversations between Rudra and Aman had me intrigued. But I was thrilled to find out in the later chapters that all that secrecy had been to protect Bindi! Aman and Bindi, who would have thought? Nice!
I am sure Paro will also be happy to know that her friend is alive, but unfortunately not so well. But Aman seems more than capable of taking care of Bindi. Looking forward to more on this new couple as well.

I thought the little conversation between Rudra and Samrat, where Samrat says that Paro's arrival has made people forget about Mala, was a great addition to the story - it made Rudra look at Paro in a new light.

You also handled the rescue of Nandini in a very sensitive way - especially the way you wrote about her reluctance to leave behind the cursed life at the brothel, her distrust of men in general and her hesitance to impose on Paro. I liked that she was given the choice to stay back or escape - and thankfully she chose the latter. Really interested in knowing how things are going to pan out for her now, after her little rule-breaking in the most recent chapter.

I absolutely loved all the intimate moments, they were really well written and also very well-placed in the story - the flow was so natural, they did not seem forced at all.
I also loved when Rudra asked Paro if she needs help to undress, it was super-cute and had me grinning from ear to ear 😳

It is really nice to come across this fresh story line and I am waiting eagerly for the next chapters.

Lots of love,
Maya

PS: What else have you written? Please do share, would love to read!

Eagerly waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting for next Chapter...
Pls update soon..

Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Amazing Chapter..
PaRud moments r lovely..
Wow Rudra wants to took Paro to tent so that he can spend his free time wit her what a plan..
Omg who s tat man?? Hope Nandini remains safe..She did something wrong, I expect tis 4m her bt NT so soon..
Eagerly waiting to know who's tat man?
Thanks for PM..

Thank you Bhavya 😊
He is lying. The minute he gets to work he will forget his lovely wife. Kya kare, all men are like that.
Nandini is asking for trouble whether she got it or not time will tell.

Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Eagerly waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting for next Chapter...
Pls update soon..

Badawala Sorry! Will update tonight

Originally posted by: SS88

Nandini just dug her grave . I hope that wasn't one of Tejawat's men , but I know that he most probably is. Silly silly girl. To have come such a long way and give into impatience now.

Your story is beautifully written. I wish what we were shown was even half as nice as this. Good job . I read all the first 25 chapters together and have been waiting for this one. Lovely work , AM.

Hey 8 is my lucky number 😆 Welcome to my Parudland! What shall I call you SS?
I want to be angry with Nandini too for being fool hardy. But the girl's brain is messed up. She is just going with what her heart wants without thinking about anything.
Thank you for patiently reading through all my bakbak. My thoughts go all over the place sometimes. But am doing my best to bring things back on track 😃
Hope you like what happens next.
- Alina

Originally posted by: pavinitishiv

I just love your story. It is very suttle. Transition is neat and good. Loved parud moments. But not satisfied. need more prudliciou s moments. Thanks for the update. Nandini will have to face the weather of Rudra. Deserve it. But poor Paro caught between jiji and Rudy boy.

I always find one thing nice about RR is how parud where there for each other come what may.

Younger generation should learn from this fiction.

Thank you 😊
Sometimes Parudliciousness slows down the plot so am trying to mx things up 😳
I agree. He has a lot tied to this case.
Paro is facing what most married women go through stuck between dominant family and in-laws. But she will manage both easily.
That's why I like RR best. The couple stays together and faces things head on. No hiding/lying/creating misunderstandings.

Originally posted by: TaujooMadiha

Rudra is gonna be so angry sigh

She did screw things up for him. His wrath is inevitable