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Posted: 8 years ago
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Revived in Plain Sight - Chapter 6

As she held her baby in her arms, Myrah felt weaker. But she was smiling. After the nurse left, she sat up with a wince, staring at Rohit who hadn't bother looking at the child once.
"Don't do this." She said simply. "It isn't our child's fault, it was my choice." He didn't reply.
"Name her Heera like we agreed, and don't you dare blame her." She added, much more firmly. "Tell her about me, after Parvati comes back to her normal life. And, give this to Paro." She handed him a box.
"You're bossy." Rohit spoke up as he seemed to finally give in, just hugging her close.
The next morning, when her mother was no more, Heera seemed to calm down when Parvati her, and once she was asleep, Paro opened up the box, picking up the first letter.
"Take care of Heera, Paro. And don't forget everything I told you. I promise being me won't be hard, but going back to being you, and with Rudra is your priority."
Even as she cried, Paro knew that this was the right & only choice.
3 weeks later, 'Myrah', Heera & Rohit went knocking at the door of the Ranawat Haveli, Paro still trying to get used to having the trendy hairstyle wig on top of her real hair, and her body clad in modern clothes..
Upon seeing an old woman nearly faint at the sight of that impostor, Rohit realized the resemblance wasn't a pain only for him.
As footsteps approached, as well as the sound of a deep voice that she had been yearning for, 7 long years, Parvati was shaking from head to toe, wanting to scream out for her Major Saab, yet staying quiet.

When their eyes met, she tried her best to keep from crying at the look of pained shock on his face.
"Is this the house of Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat?" Rohit asked, surprising Parvati with his help. Though that surprise was nothing like the one she got a few seconds later, when Rudra replied. "EX Major Rudra Pratap Ranawat."
Hai Bholenath, why did my Major Saab leave the BSD? She thought to herself.

x-x-x

So hello readers!
Here's 'Myrah's' arrival to the Haveli, I hope you liked this chapter :)
If any of you happen to be fans of the show 'Qubool Hai', I've written an OS about Asad & Zoya!
It'd make my day if you checked it out, thank you lots!!!
Edited by M_Y10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Really Awesome Update..
Emotional too..
pls Update long part..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Really Awesome Update..

Emotional too..
pls Update long part..

Thank you dear!!
And no worries, the next chapter will be longer.๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by M_Y10 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update dear but myrah is dead, sad for that. Happy that paro back to her home as myrah but can see & talk with her family, her major Saab & dhruv. Want to know how will rudra react & what will he do.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi..it is such a real delight to relive the magic of Parud on Rishte again. And this FF - discovered when I returned to this forum after ages..is like the icing on the cake !๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love that you will get Rudra back with his beloved๐Ÿ˜ณ Paro again !๐Ÿ‘

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

Nice update dear but myrah is dead, sad for that. Happy that paro back to her home as myrah but can see & talk with her family, her major Saab & dhruv. Want to know how will rudra react & what will he do.



Thank you dear!!
I was sad having to do that, but it's necessary for the story. Besides, Myrah's character will stay somewhat present through the letters she left for Paro :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: piccola1

Hi..it is such a real delight to relive the magic of Parud on Rishte again. And this FF - discovered when I returned to this forum after ages..is like the icing on the cake !๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love that you will get Rudra back with his beloved๐Ÿ˜ณ Paro again !๐Ÿ‘

Pic.



When I heard that Rangrasiya was also going to air in India again, I was glad!! I feel like it hasn't gotten enough recognition and perhaps it'll bring new fans!!
:D
Happy you're enjoying my Fanfiction so far!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG! OMG! Finally Rudra and Paro going to meet...
Also, Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RitikaGarg8

OMG! OMG! Finally Rudra and Paro going to meet...

Also, Thanks for the PM.


Haha yes finally! You're welcome. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluetitliya

Read both the parts together.

It was such an emotional ride.
Rohit is very much hurt .
Myrah is no more now๐Ÿ˜ญ
Hope Rohit takes Myrah's Words to his heart and not blame the child.
And shower it with love and affection.

Finally Paro back to India.
Paro and Rudra Face to Face
waiting to know what will happen now



Haha it is an emotional ride for me too to write this because it's what I'd have wanted to see after the leap! And I imagine it all in my head with the actors and everything!

The next chapter is going to be posted very soon!!

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