OS - The Price of being Tardy - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS Rithu 😳
Paro's dressing table by this time might be filled with pink bangles as whenever she is angry Rudra gets a set of pink bangles for her 😆

The last part was too good 👍🏼

When Paro offers chai to Rudra I was like awww poor him...
But then I wondered why Paro offered him chai so late in the night 🤔
May be to keep him awake so that they can spend quality time with each other 😉
Also Dhruv is already fast asleep 😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww this was such cutu & funny OS 😆😆 rofl he was expecting something nd what he got was his kurta nd towel 🤣 nd the last line 🤣 poor Rudy boy 😆

thanks for such cutu OS ... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As beautiful as her pink dress.
As twinkling as her anklets
As musical as her pink bangles
Loved it.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Awesome Rithu...read the update with a smile playing on my lips...I can imagine Rudra's haalat when Paro asked him if he wanted tea 😆😆 I was laughing like mad 😆. Poor Rudra his breath must have held in his lungs

Great job Rithu...please keep these doses of OSes coming...after all this is all we have been left with as regards to Parud.

PS. Thank you for making Ranawat's move back to their old haveli.



Thank you 😊. I was laughing like a nut job when I wrote that bit too. I know its mean to punish bannasa but I couldn't help it.

I'll write as often as I can. I miss Parud bigtime😳.

I can't imagine them in the new Haveli to be honest 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pree_28

That was cute 😉 poor RPR 😆
Rithu the pale pink earrings and the pink blue dress is pretty 😛
These sweet, light hearted OS from you are delight to read..



Thank you. The dress was the reason the story went this way. I was struggling with something else.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anny14

It's A wonderful piece Rithu! just like a dream, as Paro are a great wife and mother. you make me smile, he know very well what things pleases her bibi more to earn his care or love, every day we do little things for our care ones with a lot of pleasure! you got that!




Thank you 😊. Over the years their soulmate connection has gotten deeper and they understand each other perfectly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: custodian75

Lovely OS. Rudr thinks that the the pink bangle will help him get through Paro all the time. Well he is partially right. Cause Paro appreciates that he is thinking of her feelings. But surprise! He has also got something else. But he is not getting anything in return except his towel and kurta. 😆


Thank you 😊. Paro is wise to her husband's tricks. She won't give in so easily anymore 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RangParud

pleasant update 😊


ur assumption in the starting of the story itself made me to read this chapter😛😛


Thank you 😊.
Most of my writings are centered around those two assumptions. Check out the rest too 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved the os 👏
Poor Rudra, the last line chai 😆


Thank you 😊

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