FS: A traitorous taste (for Smitar) Part 5 page 27 completed - Page 13

Originally posted by: tvbuf

Wow so many think the same

Year I have a different interpretation of Paro - if she returns the kiss by using her tongue and all, and this is her first kiss ever in life - that sounds more like Laila to me - lol

I see a Paro who would be shocked and angered, and not be returning kisses with the same style 😊

Originally posted by: tvbug2011

Tvbuf I totally get your discomfort. Perhaps breaking down the kiss will help:

Yes Paro was shocked and angered. She was also outraged and afraid and hurting. At that point Rudra was forcing the kiss on her and she had no choice but to submit. But the kiss changed and transitioned. And everything that Rudra could not say to her he conveyed through the kiss - that he felt her anger and her fear her outrage and her pain, that he knew he was to blame for a lot of it, that he was trying to make amends. And then he gentled her and cherished her as he wanted to as she deserved. Until she healed a bit, and 'taking' her with him he deepened the kiss by fractions, (this is the master we are talking about 'aath din har raat' - had to have some skill, all though love is its own skill) so that when he let go, she was beyond thinking and only capable of feeling. And being Paro she was generous in her response.

Incidentally, for me the Paro who is drunk or drunk on love or drunk on desire is quite uninhibited.

BTW, when she stroked his mouth, it was with her lips not her tongue - there might've been a bit of tongue when she was trying to drink in his taste - but it was mostly lips from her end if it makes it any better.😉😃

Hey Sabs, quite late in commenting. A hectic schedule going on. Taking a break in between.

To start with I loved how you maintained the rustic and raw passion that was associated with the RR of initial days.

Rudra first angry at her for risking ... everything? her life more than anything

Then confused at her action - something unsettling him

Then him losing his control - something which he rarely did

Then the desire - of parching his thirst

Then him letting his body take control over his brain.

Succumbing to the succulent lips and fragance of Paro

And then the doe-like wide eyes bringing him back to his self.

And then we got a passionate yet gentle, forceful yet tender kiss. Though the kiss was to drown her cries, it was more for satisfying his raging body.

Rudra was atttracted to Paro right from the first time he set eyes on her. I was in doubts about Paro responding to the kiss. But then you explained it in the reply to tvbuf. Truly said. Paro was never averse to Rudra's closeness. A something rare for a village girl. A bond existed between them which they neither accepted nor denied.

The intrusion of the BSD men sure shook them out of their trance, but neither had the chance to question each other nor think about just what conspired between them. What was going through their mind. Paro not once seemed ashamed of her boldness. And neither Rudra for taking advantage of her. The silence that existed between them was piericing.

A passionate TS for a passionate couple. Everything about them was special and so was this TS.

Wish to read from you more. Do write

Love you Sabs

Originally posted by: tiniaa

SSSSUUUPPPEEERRRBBB...OMG !!!!! Where were you hiding for SOOO long???????? IMO,this is the best fiction on RANGRASIYA so far.

Pleassseee I beg you , write more.

Originally posted by: .swati.

ve been a silent reader . Do not comment much but this was so beautiful that I had to come out of my hiding & compliment you. It was a pleasure to read your work. Hoping that you would continue.

Originally posted by: Fiza1960

👏ab main kya kahun. Itna khoobsoorat tha ki maiin speechless ho gayee.

Aap please aur Bhi likhiyega,it's a request.

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

Wow! This is not what I expected. I anticipated Rudra loosing himself in the moment. But from our naive Paro baisa? She surprises us all as usual.

Thanks for the PM.