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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 18

Awesome!!!!!👏👏 Loved it as always😉😃... The happy excitement on Dhruv's face was bouncing from his being 😃 Happily chatting away with Koel made him so happy and planning up ideas together 😆 Finally convincing Rudra for going to the orphanage was like winning a battle for Dhruv... Myrah did a very wdomg deed by hiding the truth.. Maithili is right now its really too LATE 😭 ...Sitting eagerly while going to his mom was described so aptly...truly beaming like a shining star next to his dad... Even Rudra was caught in a trance after he heard HER voice imagining that it was his mistake or illusion but FINALLY seeing her in front of his eyes made him believe the truth and Dhruv too... She fainted again because of painful rush of random pieces of her past coming back.. Hope it doesnt affect her health ofmr memory 😕😭Waiting to see Paro's reaction after she wakes up... Whether she recognizes her Majorsaab or no and what will Rudra say when she wakes up and the face off finally 😃 ... Even reactions of Nakshatra, Dhruv, Kaki and Kaka...ohh and also the kids too!!! Reading the titles I can guess the story outlines but really waiting impatiently for next updates 😃
Edited by lujainshaikh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read this chapter first thing in the morning the moment I woke up ( as always ) ...Words fail me to describe your sheer brilliance but I will still try... I AM IN COMPLETE AWE as to HOW you write... felt every emotion , be it Love ( Dhruv's for his mother ) or Hurt, Anger, Rage, Helplessness of Rudra when Dhruv kept insisting/talking of what all he did with Paro...or FEAR of Rudra that something might be wrong with Dhruv & there might be a need to show him to a psychiatrist ...and finally that historic, classic moment ...that moment all Parudians were waiting for...what do I say for that ?? Actually, what can one say for such an epochal moment...is there any word that could truly justify what I felt as I came to that part ? I don't think there is any word in my dictionary that will aptly describe my feeling ,my emotions ...you mentioned in one of your comments that it ( Paro & Rudra's meeting ) would be worth the wait...believe me Zara, it was MUCH MORE than that... thoughts, moments, feelings, movements,words barely spoken,...they all had a distinct sense ,distinct fragrance in this chapter...I truly felt my heart beat accelerate when Rudra started walking towards Paro,I certainly can not penn down the awe , the magic THAT I felt as it will require tremendous writting skills which I don't possess but I can surely say that you are truly GIFTED & blessed by GOD & I am honoured to read your writting ...thank you for giving us this PHENOMENAL , MAJESTIC moment...
I do not want to speculate on how Rudra will react to Myrah knowing about Paro or anything else for that matter because I know it's going to be Rudra, Paro & Dhruv in the end...and that's all that matters...



Edited by NavyaKavya30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Loved the update👏
Finally Rudra and Paro meet face to face, my heart beats in anticipation to what happens next🤔
Will Paro remember?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Wow what an update to start the new year
Happy new year Zara and finally Rudra meets his Paro
Myrah tells the turth to jija. Brilliant
You just described rudras state so well. Kudos dear
Makes me miss RR even more
Cant wait to read what happens next
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Fabulous update
Finally Rudra met his Paro :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Lovely chapter Zara!

Happy New Year!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Woww.. you are a brilliant writter 👏
you described each scenes so well, each emotion, body movement..
rudra paro meeting was epic.. very well written 😃 I could imagine Ashish Sanaya expression's in last scene.
Thanks for writing this story 😛
eager to know what happen next.. Please update soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I get a feeling that Rudra will be the one supporting Myrah, that he will not get angry with her. Paro will not remember everything so soon,na? It will be too early for her to remember everything,isn't it ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lujainshaikh

Chapter 18


Awesome!!!!!👏👏 Loved it as always😉😃... The happy excitement on Dhruv's face was bouncing from his being 😃 Happily chatting away with Koel made him so happy and planning up ideas together 😆 Though children's ideas are innocent, they are also usually the simplest was to solve problems.😆

Finally convincing Rudra for going to the orphanage was like winning a battle for Dhruv... Myrah did a very wdomg deed by hiding the truth.. Maithili is right now its really too LATE 😭 ...Sitting eagerly while going to his mom was described so aptly...truly beaming like a shining star next to his dad... Even Rudra was caught in a trance after he heard HER voice imagining that it was his mistake or illusion but FINALLY seeing her in front of his eyes made him believe the truth and Dhruv too... Yep the most awaited moment for all.

She fainted again because of painful rush of random pieces of her past coming back.. Hope it doesnt affect her health ofmr memory 😕😭Waiting to see Paro's reaction after she wakes up... Whether she recognizes her Majorsaab or no and what will Rudra say when she wakes up and the face off finally 😃 ... The next chapter will be interesting indeed😉

Even reactions of Nakshatra, Dhruv, Kaki and Kaka...ohh and also the kids too!!! Reading the titles I can guess the story outlines but really waiting impatiently for next updates 😃 Everyones reactions will be worth watching...i mean reading😆 Thanks sis for the fab comment.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30


Read this chapter first thing in the morning the moment I woke up ( as always ) ...Words fail me to describe your sheer brilliance but I will still try... I AM IN COMPLETE AWE as to HOW you write... felt every emotion , be it Love ( Dhruv's for his mother ) or Hurt, Anger, Rage, Helplessness of Rudra when Dhruv kept insisting/talking of what all he did with Paro...or FEAR of Rudra that something might be wrong with Dhruv & there might be a need to show him to a psychiatrist ...and finally that historic, classic moment ...that moment all Parudians were waiting for...what do I say for that ?? Actually, what can one say for such an epochal moment...is there any word that could truly justify what I felt as I came to that part ? I don't think there is any word in my dictionary that will aptly describe my feeling ,my emotions ...you mentioned in one of your comments that it ( Paro & Rudra's meeting ) would be worth the wait...believe me Zara, it was MUCH MORE than that... thoughts, moments, feelings, movements,words barely spoken,...they all had a distinct sense ,distinct fragrance in this chapter...I truly felt my heart beat accelerate when Rudra started walking towards Paro,I certainly can not penn down the awe , the magic THAT I felt as it will require tremendous writting skills which I don't possess but I can surely say that you are truly GIFTED & blessed by GOD & I am honoured to read your writting ...thank you for giving us this PHENOMENAL , MAJESTIC moment...
I do not want to speculate on how Rudra will react to Myrah knowing about Paro or anything else for that matter because I know it's going to be Rudra, Paro & Dhruv in the end...and that's all that matters...




Aww thans so much sis for you heart felt comment. It truely means alot. I'm glad everyone is enjoying my story but trust me there is loads more ahead. The equation between Naksh and Rudra will be an interesting one to watch out for. 😉
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