Alt Ending FF:Our RR. How it really ended~ TH#1 ~

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

mpat

@mpat

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Curiosity has got the better of me...adding to my reading list.

Quote

pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Ye kya kar diya yr tumne? y did u bring paro bck?

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

ab kya hoga?? paro has lost her memory? are yr y r mking dere life so comlicated.?

Quote

SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Lovely update zara
Wow naksh is NK
Super cool
Cant wait for the updates
Have a nice day

Quote

Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

fantastic updates

loved them

thanks for the pm

Quote

seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Omg this is going to get complicated

Dhruv is having second thoughts about Myrah being his mummy and loving him

Now Paro is alive

Crap and double crap Rudra still loves Paro and he also loves Myrah

This is going to turn out bad for Myrah

Quote

751887

Suspended

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Thank you! Splendid! I am so glad I came across this.

Quote

Navya

@Navyya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Dhruv retorted while wiping his tears angrily: "It's true Maasa. Papa loves Myrah now, which means he doesn't love you... *unable to hold back a quiet sob* Why did you send Myrah Mumma? Why couldn't you come yourself?"...

...A soft smile glowed as gentle eyes stared in awe at the gorgeous endless sands glistening in the moonlight...

Oh...this was so beautiful Zara...I can visulize the above scene perfectly...Dhruv asking his mother to come back & then , right at THAT precise moment...the bus ...& Parvati...OMG...it's simply wow...I love, just love the way you have introduced

Paro...had it played this way on our screen...I can imagine how we would have cheered...so many of us would have had our eyes brimming with tears.

Quote

603840

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: babyji
Dhruv retorted while wiping his tears angrily: "It's true Maasa. Papa loves Myrah now, which means he doesn't love you... *unable to hold back a quiet sob* Why did you send Myrah Mumma? Why couldn't you come yourself?"...
...A soft smile glowed as gentle eyes stared in awe at the gorgeous endless sands glistening in the moonlight...
Oh...this was so beautiful Zara...I can visulize the above scene perfectly...Dhruv asking his mother to come back & then , right at THAT precise moment...the bus ...& Parvati...OMG...it's simply wow...I love, just love the way you have introduced
Paro...had it played this way on our screen...I can imagine how we would have cheered...so many of us would have had our eyes brimming with tears.

That's exactly the reaction I wanted. Thank you for sharing this :')

Quote

--POV--

@--POV--

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Zara,

ooo...

all I can say is that ur a twisted soul! 😈

now that myrah and Paro in the same frame what is Rudra gonna do..

O la la.. eagerly waiting for the story to continue..

u have got me hooked girl!!

BTW, the first line was totally said in awe and amazement..

I am loving this little fantasy in the alternate world of RR

I felt so much for Dhruv. Its such an elemental feeling - uncertainity, insecurity - builds so many other emotions. I loved how u have woven the story.

Yup, I love my evil Kakisa.. she is sooo cool when she is evil but not overtly..

So when Paro comes,, who will he choose.

what will happen to Myrah,, how u planning to bring in the story,,,

Hmmm... waiting for the knots to unravel!!

P.S: I love the way u weave an imagery with ur words.. Really good!!