A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 8

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Hi Ritu,

First of all belated Happy Birth day! Hope you had enjoyed the day.🤗

Coming to the update it is awesome , but why are you teasing me?😕

12 the chapter no Parud,

13th chapter only Rudra and now in this chapter only Paro you are testing my patience and you know what I'll send you but giving exception this time as you just celebrated your birthday.😆

I liked the way you are building up the story and the way towards Parud's meeting.

I'm happy Paro is in Mr.V.Ks house and they are taking care of her as their family member and happy to see her working with NGOs.😊

The way you are putting Parud's emotions is awesome.

My favorite Aman oh! Thanks for giving him lots of story space😃 As he's one of the characters I liked in RR.

At last Parud will meet in next chapter ...Yippeee!😆

If you made me wait again by creating some suspense in next chapter I'm warning you after that don't complain.😉

🤗

Originally posted by: Zeeliciousxo

Happy belated birthday!! 🥳

Coming to the chapter...oh please now I'm just anxious for the moment PaRud meet at the party after so long. 😒 I liked that you dedicated a chapter to Paro's perspective just like you dedicated one to Rudra's. Unlike the CVs you are giving Paro's perspective time and attention and you are making her her own individual, and not just a foil to Rudra. I love it!

Please update soon!! And if you can, make the update longer 😳, because it would be great to have a good dose of PaRud after being deprived of them for so long. 😆

Originally posted by: deepsel

This is Ramanchi Rithu...I so wanted to see PARUD meet tonight..😆...

Well sweetheart, its very well written and sweet...You have shown Paro's life a bit which the show failed completely......I am so happy for her...

The longing for each other is beautifully depicted here which makes the chapter more exciting and now looking forward to next update even more...

Update soon...I am restless now😆😆😆

Originally posted by: SPraba

Thanks for the pm rithu
Lovely story
Read all in one go
Please make Parud meet. Eager to read that

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Very nice FF 😊 I love the way you are showing the individual lives of Rudra and Paro and how they come together with willingness from both sides ( may be ?) 😊

I have been wondering for a long time what the story of show would have been if they pursued the BSD angle, 17 Birpur girls who were off the border in god knows what miserable conditions , Tejawat and arms dealings alongside building a Rudra -Paro love story with both Rudra and Paro growing individually learning to fight their monsters , chase their dreams with each standing by the others' side - supporting each other. 😛

I am happy I am able to vision most of this through your FF😊 . Will be waiting for your next chapter 😊

Originally posted by: rithureuben

Thank you, I had a wonderful birthday.

Chapter 12 and 13 were mostly to explain Paro's and Rudra's state of Mind and how they spent their away from each other. I wanted them to focus on other things too and not just on each other.

This chapter was supposed to have more of Parud, but since the party is supposed to be for the general's birthday I shifted the focus to him and his wife.

VK Singh, Geethanjali and Aman are among my favorite characters so I like writing about them.

The next three chapters will be about the party so loads of Parud coming up.

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Hi Ritu,

@bold... I know, I like how you keeping them sticking to their responsibilities and I liked it the way they are thinking about each other even they are far away.

Saturday next update ... wow!..

Originally posted by: anisa79

Lovely update! Cant wait for them to actually meet now, hopefully it will be a full parud chapter!