A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 48

Created

Last reply

Replies

962

Views

267.6k

Users

44

Likes

2.3k

Frequent Posters

-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutemithra

Hi rithu.. nice chapter... So laila s the reason behind Paro's confusion.. Am correct this time..yayy...
And wat..Paro accepted to get married to someone else..this s something I never expected... Omg..I can't imagine Rudra's condition when he gets to know this...
Paro is so innocent and laila knows this and she used this to manipulate an already confused Paro... Paro too is doubting laila and hope she goes by her intuitions and confronts Rudra before taking any decision..
Sumer found out about mala.. Nw he s going to tell dilsher..wat ll happen nw...
And the trapdoor from the farmhouse leads to Tejawat's haveli..?? Am curious hw your are going to use this in story..whether this will prove helpful or bsd...


Thank you. I did reply that it was a good guess.
Laila did quite a number on our naive Paro, that's lead to take drastic steps to remove herself from Rudra's life. Till then she was confident of Rudra's affection though she was shy to take any steps towards him.
Sumer found out by accident and he doesn't have Rudra's good sense. He will blurt it out to the first person he runs to. Unfortunately for Dilsher, no one else is at home.
The tunnel to the Haveli is important, I have an idea what to do with it. Just have to work it out sensibly.
-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tinamehta

I'm loving sumer now. Everything was awesome about this chapter except Deepika Padukone :P (meh). So Laila has started her nonsense. I loved Paro's dream. It was so vivid. Umm, who is she marrying? Please don't marry her off to someone else. Eagerly waiting for chapter 33.


Sumer is an affable character with his tractorwala dil. Not a Deepika fan? Sumer might be one though.
Laila has been selectively honest about Rudra. She didn't mention that he never cared about her. But that is enough for Paro to step away from Rudra.
I actually felt bad for Paro while writing down that nightmare. She is such a sweet person and truly cares about Rudra's wellbeing.
Paro is marrying Rudra. I want Mein...tu...hamesha to last forever.
-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SPraba

Omg super duper update rithu.
I did not miss Parud cos the story was so interesting.
Oh god this laila started her nautanki again and poor paro
I like this sumer and who is she getting married to?


Thanks Prabha. I'm happy you found it interesting.
Laila will be Laila. It will take time for her to realise she is fighting for something that was never hers.
Sumer is all grown up and you probably will love him more in the next chapter.
Paro is marrying Rudra, they belong to each other.
-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Wow..this is aweosme Rithu...</font>

<font size="2" color="#6600ff">
</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">First as I expected Laila took the easy way of troubling Paro's mind..that dream sequence was very well written👏👏..Lets see how Paro tackle this..</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">
</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">
</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I love Sumer more now..he is even willing to take risk for his cousin..you have woven a interesting knot now with Sumer and Dilsher knowing the truth about Mala..</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">
</font>
<font size="2" color="#6600ff">How will ranawats act now after knowing the truth..Pretty interesting..Carry on...Your writing flow is superb dear..</font>


Thank you. Till Laila has an epiphany, she will not take the high road. And Paro's first instinct is to trust people blindly. But now her experience with Tejawat is making her think a little.
I'm happy you liked the dream.
Sumer signed up for this, because he wanted to keep his family safe and make up for the way he messed up the investigation. Things would have gone very differently if he had told Rudra and not Mohini that someone is looking for Paro when he was given the picture.
The Ranavats are bonding together pretty well, and when Mala returns the bond will be tested.
My writing is a product of your encouragement and the support of all the people who read my story. So big thank you to all of you.
-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
@Shafoo - Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you liked this update.
Crazy410 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
I love this twist. Sumer finds out about Mala and tells Dilsher. I feel if they had shown more family interaction maybe it would've fared better. In this story there is so much more depth. Every character is contributing towards it's progress.
Love it.
-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy410

I love this twist. Sumer finds out about Mala and tells Dilsher. I feel if they had shown more family interaction maybe it would've fared better. In this story there is so much more depth. Every character is contributing towards it's progress.

Love it.


In the beginning all the characters contributed to the story as a whole remember how Sunheri brought out the hiding Paro by inducing a asthma attack for Dilsher or how Sumer found Paro's pic while being wasted. Only after Shiv ratri mela, all characters started to play cupid with Parud as their main role instead of driving the entire story forward. Glad that you like the depth shown here.
neet2407 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Rithu - wonderful update! I feel Paro's pain letting Rudra go to be with Laila. That girl is too trusting but we and Rudra love her for it , on the other hand Rudra has never to,d her his feelings - he will of course go insane and I can't wait for him to express his feelings to her! I love the fact that you are making Rudra earn her love - that would have been a joy to watch in the show too
Love the Sumer angle- how will everyone cope with Mala's reappearance - another wonderful track I am waiting for you to exploit with your wonderful writing!
-Disenchanted- thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neet2407

Hey Rithu - wonderful update! I feel Paro's pain letting Rudra go to be with Laila. That girl is too trusting but we and Rudra love her for it , on the other hand Rudra has never to,d her his feelings - he will of course go insane and I can't wait for him to express his feelings to her! I love the fact that you are making Rudra earn her love - that would have been a joy to watch in the show too

Love the Sumer angle- how will everyone cope with Mala's reappearance - another wonderful track I am waiting for you to exploit with your wonderful writing!



Thank you. Paro is realising that Rudra may have had a past relationship with someone else. The girl's basic character is to trust people until they prove her wrong. She always gives people the benefit of doubt. So she had to believe Laila, even if she is confused. And as you say Rudra has never told her how he feels. He just drops hints and expects her to understand, which our innocent baisa doesn't get. He will loose it for a while before he pulls himself together and fights for her.
Mala's reappearance will test the other relationships in the family, especially as the secrets start to come out.
KhushiParo thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Rithu,
just read chapter 31. Thought I'll comment after reading both the chapters but I am compelled by the chapter 31.😊
It was very nice update, ... Wow! Aman stood up to the general for Rudra wow! I liked Aman in the serial though his role was short but here I'm adoring him and you are totally utilizing every character and giving so much depth. Now after reading RR based stories in IF I'm feeling if they are not under pressure of TRP RR CVs might have done wonders.
Rudra's IV is so heart touching and hoping Geetanjali ji will shed some light and hope to Paro. Rudra is ready to do anything for Paro to clear her name, but banna you just need to confess your love and ask her hand.😃
I'm liking this Rudra more than CVs TRP pressured Rudra.😆
Thanks for PM.
Sorry for late comment as I was caught up with real life but never lost interest of beautiful stories.😊
Will comment soon for next chapter.


Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".