PaRud TS :: Return of THE Jallad IMPORTANT NOTE on PG 10

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Gosh that was so intense !!!
The obsessive possessive lover is back ..
Pls do write more on PaRud , u hav an amazing way with words :)

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

This is the track I wanted to see instead of family drama, the obsessively insecure and over possessive Rudra trying to control a guilt ridden Paro !!
U portrayed it in an excellent way ..
Can u continue it dear ?!?
It's an earnest request :)

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Wow!

What an update yaar.

The Jallad is well and truly back.

I can see where Rudra is coming from.

Paro left him a note just like his mother left his father a note saying that she is leaving.

To him it means only one thing and one thing only betrayal. He was betrayed by his mum and now he feels betrayed by his wife.

When his father said beautiful women can't be anyone's that is what he remembers and will always remember.

Paro leaving has turned her Major Saab back into the Jallad he once was.

He will never let her leave ever. If she does he will kill himself.

What a dilemma for Paro.

Loved the update.

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

one word- FABULOUS...and you are right when you draw parallels with this rudra and othello...when i think of othello , his possessiveness and obsession is what comes to my mind...

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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

wow just wow yaar loved it loved the possessive ness in him but dnt u think u need more of it because i need more of his possessiveness loved it yaar continue eagerly wating for ur next OS r FF