NAVARASA Series | Shaanta (Peace/Tranquility) IInd OS - Page 4

sunitikapoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Awesome OS...it's a beautiful piece of writing.

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..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Both OS was beautifully written

Loved it..

Amazing job guys 👏

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deep0909

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Angelteen,

I loved the hate part. I cant bring myself to read the remaining because I know it is about Mala. I am not ready to know Mala's side of the story. what she did was unforgivable. and she cant be forgiven for it...

I am afraid you have written that Rudra heals and forgives and accepts Mala and I cant accept that. So I am unable to read the rest of your story...

Most people don't understand forgiving. It has nothing to do with the other person. It is about you letting go of that incident and moving forward in your life. Most of us take it to mean that the slate is now wiped clean and the other person is accepted.

I'm not sure which way you have taken the story, and am afraid to find out...

kooky huh? having such strong feelings for a work of fiction?

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: deep0909
Angelteen,

I loved the hate part. I cant bring myself to read the remaining because I know it is about Mala. I am not ready to know Mala's side of the story. what she did was unforgivable. and she cant be forgiven for it...

I am afraid you have written that Rudra heals and forgives and accepts Mala and I cant accept that. So I am unable to read the rest of your story...

Most people don't understand forgiving. It has nothing to do with the other person. It is about you letting go of that incident and moving forward in your life. Most of us take it to mean that the slate is now wiped clean and the other person is accepted.

I'm not sure which way you have taken the story, and am afraid to find out...

kooky huh? having such strong feelings for a work of fiction?

Well I am slightly taken aback by the nature of this comment but I guess all I can do is tell you to read it to find it because I dont disclose stories but because I rather like your thoughts on forgiveness, I will give you a hint - you may like the ending.

Thats about it.

Thank You for the comment though and for sharing your apprehensions.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

That was incredible loved it so much.

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custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Two expressions of peace. One, that of a mother,who comes to know that her son has found love. And the other is of a lover to find his love safe.

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shipra.aqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Beautiful...

I have no more words to say here...

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Emotional piece beautifully written loved how he turned to her even with bullets flying all both wanted was to get to each other loved how he told her shaanta thanks for the pm..