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ACTywm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: lourel24
Have watched vm n its beautiful.Thanks for pm.

Your welcome...I'm glad you liked it 😊

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Oldestfan
I have always liked that song...
And this is such a lovely, honey warm, melting os!

I wish they had shown this on T V! Laila would have burned to cinders right there!

Lol...I was really hoping for it too...when I saw she was blindfolded I was like yay maybe another dori scene...but there wasn't any so I wrote one myself...thank you for your warm compliments 😊 n yes this song is beautiful on of my favourites...😊

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: The-Diva
Beautifully Written!! It was not dragged endlessly and was short and sweet. I loved the way you described the way he tied the doris, It was really amazing. I could sense the passion and love emanating from them! This scene could have been shown in the serial too, without the licking part if needed. Keep Writing!!
The VM is beautiful too 😳

Thank you 😳 so very humbled by your comment...and yeah I was really hoping for a scene like this in the show too...but hmm...may be in the future..😛