*A Parud VM added OS: Keeche Mujhe Koi Dor Teri Ore

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: JJKKL
Very nice. And a good idea to combine an OS with a VM

Thank you...yeah initially I had just the OS...but later thoguht of putting it into a vm too as there were scenes from the show I could use to create the scene i wrote 😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

loved the os so cute loved her ranting about him not realizing it was rudra in the room loved him teasing her loved how he was taking care of her amazing os thanks for the pm.

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Beautifully written,Shona...

Major Saab is gone😃

VM is so good but y so short??

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

very sensuous dori tying

unfortunately the VM links were either blocked or not found

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Terribly sweet! Love your detailing to the scenes :D

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Nice one!! Loved the comparison between the doris and heartstrings and the threads that weave in to the fabric of life...

Super hot stuff, yet super cute as well...

Cheers

maya

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: seeta_naips
very sensuous dori tying

unfortunately the VM links were either blocked or not found

THANK YOU...N YEAH THE LINKS ARE NOW BLOCKED...😕

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: mistyrains
Terribly sweet! Love your detailing to the scenes :D

THANK YOU 😳

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ACTywm

@ACTywm

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: What_the
Nice one!! Loved the comparison between the doris and heartstrings and the threads that weave in to the fabric of life...
Super hot stuff, yet super cute as well...

Cheers
maya

THANK YOU MAYA...I TRIED MY BEST TO BALANCE HOT N CUTE TOGETHER...AM GLAD YOU ALL APPRECIATED IT 😃

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