OS: Disgust from Rudra's POV

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smitar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Ipoona
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Nice!

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: smitar

Nice!

Thanks Dear. Do you think this is a thought that will bother Rudra at some point ?

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: JJKKL

Thanks AngelTeen. First attempt Jo Hai. So very close to my heart - like the first crush. But then like all first crushes the end was rather abrupt I guess 😭

Would like to know how you would have taken this forward. Can you write a few paras ? Will be great to see the difference in thinking between a novice and an expert.

For a first attempt, very well done :)

And I love the comparison to first crushes! Totally get it! You just want to finish a piece of writing but trust me give it some more time and words will flow :)

And about your very tempting offer - well I definitely try to if I get some time :)

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

beautiful.last line touched me the most.He sud have waited.he feels impure,feels disgusted.

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-Sush-

@-Sush-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Ha ha...making your point with reverse psychology ...CLEVER! 😃

I try and not judge people for what they did as right or wrong...I am not so offended by Rudy having sexual relationships before he met Paro...But I think he has a very self serving way of looking at the whole relationship...

Edited by -Sush- - 11 years ago

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asmi279

@asmi279

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow..grt job...u write so well!

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lourel24
beautiful.last line touched me the most.He sud have waited.he feels impure,feels disgusted.

Very happy that you liked it. Thanks

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Sush-

Ha ha...making your point with reverse psychology ...CLEVER! 😃

I try and not judge people for what they did as right or wrong...I am not so offended by Rudy having sexual relationships before he met Paro...But I think he has a very self serving way of looking at the whole relationship...

Thanks for reading and commenting Sush. I am not offended with Rudy either. But this is a feeling he might have - not a feeling of guilt but feeling at least a little apprehensive before the D day. Let us see whether CVs show it