Rangrasiya Drabble - He Hated Her - 15/5

I'm back again .. with another drabble/short OS. Can be read as a sequel to my first one called 'Many Moons' but it is not necessary. Here is the link incase anyone is interested ---> https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/rangrasiya/4018132/short-one-shot-many-moons-10-5

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He Hated Her

She was gone. She had left. Just like that. Without a trace. As if .. as if she had never been there. He would have thought it all a dream had it not been for his missing rudraksh - the one she wore. The one she had taken with her. That and her earring which sat safely in his pocket.

Kyun Paro? Why now?

He was getting used to waking up to her face, their hands clasped together somewhere between them. But today .. today when he woke up, she wasn't there. Her side of the bed had seemed untouched.

He called out for her but she hadn't come. He looked around the house but she was nowhere to be found. He asked them all if they'd seen her. Maithili. Sunderi. Ranawat. No one had, not since last night.

He waited. Maybe she had gone to the temple. She'll be back soon, he thought, she has to be.

He went into his, - no, their room, fully intending to change and then go look for her. But what he saw, or rather didn't see in the cupboard changed his mind. Her clothes weren't inside. There was nothing. Her shelf was all empty, much like how he felt.

And in that moment, he hated her. He hated her with everything he had. He hated her for coming into his life. He hated her for making him feel something. But most of all, he hated her for leaving him. Just like his mother had.

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Hope you enjoyed it! Look forward to any kind of feedback, always.

Thank you!!!

Loved the Drabble! Short and well written!

Lovely - short but packed full of emotion and intensity - more please!

it was too short.loved the way U used the word hate.He actually started loving her n now feels betrayed since she had left without any trace.so many emotions were being reflected.

He will hate her. Exactly as you said here, he will hate her for making him feel something! I wonder how they will work through this. 😲