Short One Shot - Many Moons - 10/5

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I have no idea what this is! I haven't seen Rangrasiya for the past week .. owing to exams .. and this was a way to keep myself from catching up today.

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Many Moons

Sleep escaped her as she lay on their bed this fateful night, looking at him. He was sleeping peacefully, his hand clasped tightly in hers, completely oblivious to her turmoil.

He was getting better. He had managed to use his right hand for a while today. He'll be completely normal in a day, or a maximum of two, she mused.

She knew she had to leave him then. She didn't know the how and when. She didn't know where she would go.

She just knew that she had made a promise to her bholenath. She had bargained with him and he kept him end of the bargain. Soon, much too soon, it would be time for her to do the same.

Maybe it was better this way, she thought. The sooner she left, the less it would hurt. Both of them.

She knew it was going to be hard, hard knowing that she was going to leave just when he had started opening up to her, just when he was starting to - dare she say it- fall in love with her. That in all probabilities, he'd go back to hating her, to not trusting her, like before.

But she had to do it, she thought, tightening the hold she had on his hand, waking him up in the process.

"Soh ja Paro", he told her, pulling her closer to him, her head almost resting on his chest, their hands intertwined and lying causally on his heart. She could feel the pulse of his heartbeat under her palm, soothing her. She went into a deep, dreamless slumber.

Perhaps the last for many moons.

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This is my first attempt to write on PaRud. Hope you enjoyed it .. a tiny bit at least! Look forward to any kind of feedback, always.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was short, but you aptly captured what would be going through Paro's heart when she will have to leave Rudra...
Rudra pulling her closer in his drowsy state, almost as if he knew she was troubled..that was a nice touch!

Are you a new writer? Welcome!!

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Drish I loved it... I didn't know you write. 😲
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Very nice. Liked that he is so comfortable with her... sad part to come.

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That was awesome.
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A good read nice one.
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Originally posted by: What_the

It was short, but you aptly captured what would be going through Paro's heart when she will have to leave Rudra...

Rudra pulling her closer in his drowsy state, almost as if he knew she was troubled..that was a nice touch!

Are you a new writer? Welcome!!

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Thank you! Am glad you liked it. I've bookmarked your OS Conflagration since weeks but haven't really had the time to read it. Will do so, soon :)

I have written a bit on Arnav-Khushi but this is my first piece on PaRud.

Originally posted by: sarita_barun

Drish I loved it... I didn't know you write. 😲


I write a bit .. I mean, I've written on ArHi before. Not too much though. Thank youu! Glad you liked it, Sarita!

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