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CyberOstrich

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Ankita Baisa- aapne toh grey ko bhi itna romantic bana diya?! I was anticipating something angsty as soon as i saw the color u had picked! And Paro asking- safed ya kaala boliye- so APT for her. Bahut shukria!

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dreamwinner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Haven't heard or used word saleti in
long time. How people change in love
and indulge the person they love in all
their whims even if it's strange to him / her
Another lovely update

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: ujwala444
Beautiful

Thank you!

Originally posted by: radhikalaya
This series is really good. You writers are so talented, I will never give up on the show because of you guys. Which may be a good thing or bad, I am unsure 😆
PS: Not to take away anything from your writing, the comments are pretty darn fine too.

Thanks so much! Isn't that a good thing? Also, lets hope the writers on this forum don't give up on the show! 😆

I know right! I am amazed at the comments! So brilliant they are!!

Originally posted by: kaykay
beautiful one again... lol..grey is one of my favorite color too...it could be his color..but i want to really know his color in the show and hope it to be a vibrant color...just my thought😊 ...

Thank you! Mine is blue n green. Lets see when he decides to reveal his favorite color on the show!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: HappilyLost
Ok so grey took my heart away!!( rhyming see??😆😆)

They say that there is no white, and there is no black either! Human emotions and psychology whirl around this shade: gray. So can't blame Rudra for his colour choice.

I loved how he described Paro with a multitude of colours and himself as a dull boring grey, one who was lucky enough to have her.

And that thought, anout getting a child bride because Paro can be too innocent was damn funny.😉
Ah yes the kiss, unexpected yet perfectly fitting. I love how this is shaping up with amazing directions to a pallet of nothing but ordinary colours. You have great imagination Ankita baisa! Bravo!!

I can't help but think that there are only two left. Please make them long Baisa, that's a heartfelt desire ⭐️ Hope you will consider that!

Haaye Nidhi! You certainly are rhyming now!

I just do the best I can... And your comments make me all mushy!

Drabbles will be drabbles naa... Length is the only thing I can't increase.

I am going to miss this series so much. It has made me meet readers like you!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Aish002
Rudra and grey...matches his persona..
A mix of good and bad. And the good in them was wearing off each passing day of his existence.

^this is the line that perfectly captures what Rudra is..sort of a cynic..believing that people are grey..yet that they tend towards the darker side even then...loved how he realizes the changes Paro brought in his life...

Thank you Aish!

Exactly... Rudra himself is Grey.. And what better way to see the world as..

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: neet2407
who thought that grey could be such an exciting colour!
another lovely drabble - I am going to miss this series already even though it hasn't ended yet!
The colour maybe grey but Rudra's love shines through in this and of course Paro's cuteness, and I love the colours of love (Rangrasiya!) reference where he thinks of her as every colour you have already mentioned

The last lines of course are the cutest - of course Paro doesn't think grey is a colour! ( my Hindi is improving too - I didn't have to use google translate as much to work out the Hindi bits woohoo!)

This was exciting?? Now that is exciting to know! 😆

It'll end in two days! :)

And even though I have said it twice already, I am gonna miss this series too!

Colors of love... Aaah, I love the fact that this serial is colors... Rangrasiya indeed.

Congrats on the improvement in hindi!

And I apologise that I didn't give a translation.. But its just that some dialogues are powerful only in the language they are meant to be in. I think it would have weakened if I translated. :)

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update 👏

Thanks! :)

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: SanzBarbie
It was so cute when he thought of her as a child bride :*
And the color grey defines Rudra !!
This Drabble has a depth I loved to read !!

Thank you Manaal!!

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

one more res for replies coz I am super sleepy.

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Ankita

@_SenbonZakura_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Indigo

She sat in the dark cell, her eyes hurting. She had been drifting in and out of consciousness.

They had brought her here, and he had just thrashed her on the floor, leaving her there in the darkness to die.

She didn't want to die. She just wanted to go home.

He had killed her husband, shot him in cold blood and afterwards she had screamed her lungs out trying to bring his lifeless body back from the netherworld.

But he was dead.

And she was here. Trapped. Rotting. Waiting for death, it seemed.

She wanted to go back to Mami-Sa. She wanted to go home, away from these stone-hearted bas***ds.

Home. Home?

She felt terrified all of a sudden. What would they do to her now?

She wasn't a suhaagan anymore.

For a fleeting moment, the indigo flashed in front of her eyes, and she froze.

No. No. They wouldn't.

Fresh tears spilled out of her eyes, as she saw in front of her, the women of her own village, gathering around her, taking her earrings off one by one. She saw them weeping, and saw how they took off her necklace next. She saw herself screaming, begging them to stop, but it seemed no voice fell on their deaf ears. She saw them moving her hands to break the red glass bangles. She saw them making her dress in the indigo, that was now going to be a permanent part of her life.

A widow's life.

[A/N: I should have clarified this before. Sorry. The color for Rajasthani rajput widows is Indigo/Dark Blue. The video will help, I guess.]

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hOjzmGhPzPQ[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 11 years ago