SS: Bringing Back Paro pt4 pg 16 06/05

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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really nice!! please update soon! loved the precap 😃

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Shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shona.
Shruti- this is the timeline i followed thinking of what has happened since Dilsheer left...so much happens but seriously doesnt seem like that many days

Day 1- Dilsheer leaves and PaRud get married that night

Day 2- PaRud go BSD office come back to find social workers there, they stay that day and the KKHH night

Day 3- Choodi leela on Paro's burnt wrist. Social workers leave. Rudra goes BSD office to be told to come Jaipur. PaRud leave for Jaipur, that very night is the Ball

Day 4-PaRud come back, Rudra buys the bangles, the pooja and Rudra gets poisoned. Paro spends the night in hospital

Day 5- Paro makes her promise to god and Rudra gains consciousness. Rudra comes home and Paro starts exposing Mohini's truth over dinner I guess

wasnt jaipur trip for two days or am i mistaken

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Thank u guys!

Shruti-yes thats what I thought as thats what Rudra said but on the day they get there, they both shower meet VK and Geetanjali then Rudra gets ready for the Ball. Geetanjali brings Paro down and they get drunk and Paro spent that night sleeping in someone else's room. That morning they leave for Changangadh so it was really for just one night

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

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loved how he just dropped everything and went to her

I am sure Aman tricked him

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Aashifa

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Posted: 11 years ago

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First off dude your Hindi is off the chang, damn I'm jealous. The hold you have over the language in this OS is remarkable.

I loved the added touch of Dilsher, he's been gone for so long from the show that it was nice to hear his character echoed in the OS.

But what I loved loved loved is that you didn't write an aloof Paro, one that would 'try' not to care that Major Saab is back, rather you showed her for what her character is! I loved it :D

Do continue soon!

-Asho

Edited by curledup - 11 years ago

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Navin

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Shona:

I will confess something. All week long, I have been mulling the impending separation over in my mind. I have been wondering what Rudra would do, how he would bring himself to come to terms with it. Because he would not be able to let go because of love and he would not be able to force her to stay because of ego. It NEVER TO OCCURED ME that one of the ways in which we could be out of the dilemma would be to..umm.. SEND HIM ALONG. To "protect" her, naturally, no other reason Banna, none!

My kudos to you for not just coming up with a smart, simple way out for us, but also penning it down and creating an alternate story track where we have her stay true to her word--but also have him stay true to his role as her protector. I love the little detail, almost teasing--"Won't you feed me?" Its such a cute thing because he is her husband, which is why he's even here--and it would fluster Paro, because of course, she will.

I like having simple, uncomplicated Mami-sa in this short story. Shocked by the marriage or not, Jamai-sa is in the house, he will get the adoring treatment he has never had at home--I mean, the poor guy reached for a laddoo and gets poisoned there. I can just see Rudra lapping up the extra attention Mami-sa would naturally give her son-in-law, true traditional Indian style!

His dialogue--"You may have promised to go,but I didnt promise I'd let you leave. You have left, you've kept your bargain. But mine was to keep you safe, so here I am" --- this was absolute genius. Touching, meaningful, and well within Rudra's character arc. This is something he would do, and something I can see working with what the CVs have done for Paro.

Please please post part 2! We are all waiting!

-Navin

Edited by napstermonster - 11 years ago

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: seeta_naips
loved how he just dropped everything and went to her

I am sure Aman tricked him

Thats the one thing that makes him put everything to the side :)

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Shruti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

@shona yeah correct thanks for verifying👍🏼

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: curledup
First off dude your Hindi is off the chang, damn I'm jealous. The hold you have over the language in this OS is remarkable.

I loved the added touch of Dilsher, he's been gone for so long from the show that it was nice to hear his character echoed in the OS.

But what I loved loved loved is that you didn't write an aloof Paro, one that would 'try' not to care that Major Saab is back, rather you showed her for what her character is! I loved it :D

Do continue soon!

-Asho

OMG thank u! Lol im a Brit Indian that too a Gujju so Hindi is like my third language which I hardly ever use so it's a bit hard to put the words together but yrs of watching bollywood movies and tv shows has helped hehe 😆

I miss papa ranawat on the show so naturally had to bring him back here

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