SS: Bringing Back Paro pt4 pg 16 06/05

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

nicely wrapped up!!

I loved the shart that they both put forth... 😉

and also your explanation of how she can overcome this "deal" with bholenath was very well thought out...

Do write more...we would really enjoy reading more of your work..

Cheers

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rangprab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

beautiful conditions... the SS still deserves and epilogue... you definitely should right one...

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sugarbird

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

that was a wonderful ss. keep writing ...

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Thank you SO much everyone :)

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: rangprab
beautiful conditions... the SS still deserves and epilogue... you definitely should right one...

I did almost but then could have written another story from the epilogue so decided against it

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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

A beautiful series
Great read

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Anita

@neet2407

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

lovely story - I like the way you made Paro understand that her vow was not everything and may not even have been what Bholenath wanted, rather he wants that she is happy which lies with Rudra - The characters were very true to the show and I loved it!

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Shweta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

I'm sure everyone would be happy if the plot changes like this. It's so frustrating to know that Paro might leave Rudra anytime.

Love your SS

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

thank u!

Originally posted by: -Sunset-
I'm sure everyone would be happy if the plot changes like this. It's so frustrating to know that Paro might leave Rudra anytime.

Love your SS

I don't want her to abandon him and leave him broken the way his mum did

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