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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: -DobByDoDgeR-

Amazing
BUT why havent you continued..?


I'm happy you enjoyed it! I may continue, or I may not- I haven't decided yet. If the inspiration strikes, I will!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: malkasub

So beautiful. wish they had shown it like you've written. Its the small nuances that really make the scene. Like they didn't show the hurt in his eyes when she said that she didn't want to go anyway. And the smile on her face when he asked her to pack in todays episode. A close up here and there make all the difference.


The inner thoughts of the characters really do make a lot of difference, and the small details, facial expressions, etc. reveal that. But since they don't always focus on that, I got to express it through my writing! 😊 I'm glad you liked it!

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