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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Absoluv

SUPERRR writing Choti...👏

Agree with you & Niyoti dear that only the day she starts distancing herself from him will make him realize her importance in his life...till then...I want lots & lots of romantic scenes so that Rudra can remember them when she leaves him...THO I DON"T WANT that to happen at alll...😛


I'm all for the redemption track- LOL he'll definitely remember romantic moments they've been having. Absence makes the heart grow fonder!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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choti !! brilliant ! and may ur writing live long to make u write such intense os s more and more 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You have a way with words... loved the last line, especially. ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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There's nothing that can match the joy of seeing a one shot written by your favourite writer amidst indolent surfing..
This one shot helped me understand the dynamics of the situation so much better. Parvati and Rudra are hell bent on complicating things- but it's never easy when it comes to love, isn't it?
Real love is always chaotic. You lose control; you lose perspective. You lose the ability to protect yourself. The greater the love, the greater the chaos. It's a given.
People who truly love us can be divided into two categories: those who understand us, and those who forgive us our worst sins. Rarely do you find someone capable of both. I'm glad that Rudra has found his real love:)
That is by far the longest comment I've written:)
Beautiful writing:D

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was amazing!
Loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice portrayal of Rudra's point of view.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Simply loved it! Beautiful OS choti!!
Now if only that assignment was on RR than postal then Choti would have topped with flying colors!!
what say?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
I am so glad the writing bug has caught hold of you...I sincerely hope that it never lets go 😛
Lovely piece of work...his inner thoughts were written so well!
That he wants her to giggle uninhibitedly, wants her to blush when he speaks, wants to be the one who tells her about the ball...it was adorable!
Yet, it was poignant how he realises that he may have lost her because he was too proud to apologise..

I esp loved these sentences:

He was left alone with the woman who had single handedly saved his livelihood and his dignity, who had insisted that he was a better man than he was.

He wanted his image to remain pristine in her eyes, the shining armor glinting in the sun.



Aptly titled, i must add...


Sometimes I think that we all enjoy the Fan Fiction so much more than the show...because there is something about reading his thoughts, which wouldn't really come across on screen..😊


Keep writing sweetie...we all love it 🤗

Cheers
What_the
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one shot
The loneliness, his guilt and pain Rudra was feeling when Parvati was trying her best to get away from him is written very beautifully.
His notions for khoobsorat aurat are changing. He is falling in love with the patient, determine string Parvati.
Love it
Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
just beautiful!! would u write a continuation to this? I hope so... its amazing.. one day I hope too that he will push her one step too far and eventually break her.. only to realize that he has broken his own heart by doing it.. And then work towards bringing her back..
and her to love the flawed man and not the god she has put on a pedestal...


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