I am so glad the writing bug has caught hold of you...I sincerely hope that it never lets go 😛
Lovely piece of work...his inner thoughts were written so well!
That he wants her to giggle uninhibitedly, wants her to blush when he speaks, wants to be the one who tells her about the ball...it was adorable!
Yet, it was poignant how he realises that he may have lost her because he was too proud to apologise..
I esp loved these sentences:
He was left alone with the woman who had single handedly saved his livelihood and his dignity, who had insisted that he was a better man than he was.
He wanted his image to remain pristine in her eyes, the shining armor glinting in the sun.
Aptly titled, i must add...
Sometimes I think that we all enjoy the Fan Fiction so much more than the show...because there is something about reading his thoughts, which wouldn't really come across on screen..😊
Keep writing sweetie...we all love it 🤗
Cheers
What_the
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