Aaja Sawariyaa PART 8 PAGE 11

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custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Poor paro. She must be feeling from "hot pan to fire". After this she must be feeling that rudra is an angel compared to these devils.

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Can you please put up the links for the previous updates with each update, so that people reading for the first time will be able to find the previous parts.

Really nice story. Feel sad for paro. I have my own doubts about this Seth.

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ab98623

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

thank u so much guys!!!

zanayaforever, asmi279, abjeya, Jyoti, roxon, Shafoo, mrsp and custodian75!!!

ur comments n likes are so encouraging!!!😃🤗

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ab98623

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

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HemaG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

very nice..perfect parud style...loved ti..

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shilpa

@mrsp

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Very good.Dialouge adds to the fast pace.It reads like a script.Love the end and her realisation of her feelings.looking forward to description of her feelings for Rudra.