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win7

@win7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Nice writing. Caught me off guard.

I wish the ending was a bit different though. That she left him instead of shooting herself.

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Zee

@aamir18

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Thank you so much Advaita 😊 I'm glad you enjoyed reading the role reversal. And I'm also glad it helped you sympathize with Radha. It's important to remember that it's not easy being the woman whose love is not reciprocated.

Originally posted by: advaita
omg this is what is called ...tables turned ! amazingly written ! reading this was important for me since it helped me sympathize with laila, something that had eroded with the way her characterization has turned out !

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

You're warning cautioned me... So I didn't expect that there would be a happy ending for PaRud

However, this mad me so sad... The switched roles and all.

Parvati, Shiv's Sati, became powerless when her Rudra left her... :(

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

And agreeing with Advaita,

I too felt more for Laila. Unlike most I understood her pain at being un-love, but in the show I just wanted her away while PaRud came together :/ This brought back the ability to empathize with Laila

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Zee

@aamir18

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Thank you so much for the compliment 😳 I'm glad you liked the role reversal 😆

Originally posted by: DDC1
Nice! Paro is Laila and Laila is Paro as I understand it. The emotions come through very well

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Zee

@aamir18

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Aww, angelzaib! You are also quickly becoming one of my favorite readers! Your appreciation for all my work is heart touching and so appreciated.

Thank you so much for your endless support.

And thank you for pointing out the typo! Silly me. It was out of habit, I guess. 😆

Zee <3

Originally posted by: angelzaib
do u kno u r fast becoming my most favorite person???
well done gal...great OS...

parvati n laila's role reversal was a refreshing change...but tell me something...i am a bit confused...in da second last paragraph...u say khushi reached for da gun?

did i mis something there? but as i said, great OS...

thnx 4 pm

Edited by aamir18 - 11 years ago