OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Forgiveness (completed)

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Wow, thanks for this update. I thought it was a continuation of Paro's and Laila's meeting to only learn that it was based on PaRud's unforgivable and unforgettable past. Rudra is so cruel. I hope he repents for all his cruelty.

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Navin

@napstermonster

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: aruni50218
When you become tender, you become heart meltingly tender, when you become passionate, the room feels too hot, and now this - When you become cruel, it is deadly. You are an amazing writer. I was dying to read what is going on Rudra's head, what is the reason for this insane cruelty... Yeah we know he hates beautiful women, but after this amount of torture, anyone would think back a little to see just may be, they have got it wrong, right? But not this Rudra... and you just perfectly explained why. His thought process is ruthless, but in character, and logical.
Only I don't like this new torture machine.Handing over Paro to another man, i mean someone other than Aman...🤔 Oh well, as long as he himself observe everything, i guess may be i will bear that...

Hope this 5 pages fly fast and we'll get an update soon! 😃

Don't be too sure Baisa! kissi ki safety ki guarantee nahi dungi mein --- I've written the next part, its pretty long and I didn't want to overwhelm the rhythm of story by posting it all together--but I'm personally VERY happy with how its turned out for the Parud story arc I am creating. At least for myself!!

As for your hope for the 5 pages--absolutely--- I am holding on to the hope that I have 100 plus readers for this series, going by the Likes, if not the number of comments--5 pages of comments shouldn't be too much of a stretch from the people who are being kind enough to follow along, you know!

But seriously guys, I am DYING to post the next bit---please do comment, and get yourselves to part 2 of this One Shot !!! Its called FORGIVENESS for a reason Baisas!

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Don't be too sure Baisa! kissi ki safety ki guarantee nahi dungi mein --- I've written the next part, its pretty long and I didn't want to overwhelm the rhythm of story by posting it all together--but I'm personally VERY happy with how its turned out for the Parud story arc I am creating. At least for myself!!

As for your hope for the 5 pages--absolutely--- I am holding on to the hope that I have 100 plus readers for this series, going by the Likes, if not the number of comments--5 pages of comments shouldn't be too much of a stretch from the people who are being kind enough to follow along, you know!

But seriously guys, I am DYING to post the next bit---please do comment, and get yourselves to part 2 of this One Shot !!! Its called FORGIVENESS for a reason Baisas!

well jumping in.. i for one like the violence due to a different thing.. its real.. in such a situation and this impossible, unbelievable love story is even more precious when it comes along due to that..
anyway as for the amount of violence.. well u have already given some previous parts detailing it.. so that is why i am scared.. cz i know just how bad it was for Paro..its bone chilling...dark n callous and takes unscrupulousness and cruelty to new heights..

but still i don't know i am just fascinated with this story. all thanks to ur amazing storytelling!!

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Don't like this rudra at all! How can someone be so ruthless, and heartless! He how's no sign of humanity! Brilliant naps!

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Corporal Jasheem Khan...is he as handsome as Rudra?
Am sure he will be as cruel as Rudra but even he won't be able to break our Paro baisa...

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

oh man - after reading this part; I'm amazed at Paro; how could she forgave him and not only that, consider him her soulmate.

She is priceless!⭐️

I know that that's the way they would treat prisoners - but reading about it other thing. Kudos to you NP for writing such a horror fill episode! 👏

I actually went back & read "Fears" again - needed it to keep the continuity. Something bigger has happened between this update and that one - b/c Paro went with BSD for the raid and saved Rudra...

Will wait to read the story to unfold...Thank you for writing such an awesome story! Thought about publishing?

-Sona

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

God how can rudra be so inhuman. Can't believe she still married him later.

You are scaring me with this guy. Hope he does not do anything to her and rudr will get his brains back by then. Ghaas khane Jo chala Gaya.

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shilpa

@mrsp

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Amazing as usual.The torture that Rudra inflicts is terrible but what an insight into his mind.Of course the death of his men means the end justifies the means(to him).He truly believes Paro to be a traitor hence his behaviour.It will be just as interesting to see his response to Paros innocense ss to see Paros response to his truth.Love this.

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HappilyLost

@HappilyLost

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

you have a gift girl!! absolutely amazing descriptions👏. i have a feeling that the next part won't be an easy read due to the new evil knocking at parvati's door, but there is no way i am missing it anyways.😛

it seems as if the whole BSD is against rudra this time. your title had me wondering who will forgive whom. trust me i am so intrigued!!

love your writing!

P.S i am desperately waiting for the guilt/ regret part. 😃