OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content* - Page 12

Just caught this fabulous piece of work! It feels good that I'm not the only one who can't stop thinking about future Parud!:D

Thanks for the translation :-)

The Story is great...You could literally feel the passion and the feelings. I really loved it :-)

Some people get very lucky in life. The Jallad and his Titli are among them. I love this whole series , napster.( What is your name, btw? ). And I esp like the parallels you draw between their past and their present. The one with Laila where Paro goes to see her in jail was just heartbreaking. I sometimes don't comment because I cant find the right words to express how beautiful your writing is. It overwhelms me. Please keep writing. Thank you.

Sensual and arousing in description without being overt.You can feel their overwhelming love and passion for each other they are entwined by tann and mann.Paro knows her self and you have charted her growth from akward girl to fulfilled woman with great insight.She has always been content with her life but Rudra has taken her to the stars,made her dream of more and want more.

Simply wow! What an amazing way to show his love ...just the name of paro increases his heartbeat.

What an amazing piece of writing! Just fabulous. Love this Paro who is so in love with her Jallad. Couldn't help myself imagining this story with SANISH in mind.
You truely are very good with words. I love this series and keep reading them again and again. I don't like the Laila in the show, but after reading your story on her where Paro visits her with her twins, i felt for Laila and i truely wish the cv's are reading this and give a fitting end to Laila in the show too as you did.
Thanks for the amazing stories and anxiously waiting for the next one.

Paros moments of discovery ... So intimate, so romantic. This is not erotica. This is lovemaking and it is earth shattering!

That was one beautiful update!

N,
I like your whole series but as I am sucker for hot stuff and lau, I really loved this tomorrow part of Jallad!

I was full of passion, tenderness, love, care almost everything desirable in a good touching love story!

I also loved how you described Dilsher doting on his bahu, he almost greedily licking his fingers for the food she prepared.. You perfectly described Dilsher and Paro relation in 2-3 sentences! I could visualize the actor in the show enacting those scenes!

And coming to Rudra and Paro.. It was just awesome. The way he said sorry when she accidentally woke him up and she started kissing him.. I was left feeling all mushy..

I have to apologize as I've been one of your 'silent' readers. I have to tell you how much I enjoy your series of "Yesterday & Tomorrow". What a creative idea but more so, your ability to craft the story with these characters that we've come to love moving from past to the future or vice versa is no small feat and a testament to your talent. I love how you make the two connected. I've adored every one, though I admit I do like the ones where Rudra worships Paro there's just something about that, which just makes me melt.