OS: Yesterday and Tomorrow--Jallad (completed) *mature content*

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Wow..that was so beautiful.. very well written..

They love each other so much..

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Nalanin1987

@tamil_nalan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Would mind to translate the blue writings? I'm sorry I cant speak hindi :-(

Thanks for the Update. It was beautiful :-)

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naz1123

@naz1123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

We saw the Jallad through her eyes..

Beautiful!!👏

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

@Napermonster..I read it and it was beautiful..I will give you a detailed comment on this as this was too passionate to just end in these few lines...Tomorrow wil comment pakka😳

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This was by far the best OS of your series...Romantic, passionate, intense yet cute and not even one inch seemed vulgar..All credit goes to you👏👏..how do you do it?...Very nice..The way the scenes were written we could feel and visualize them so easily. I tried to find out which part was my best but could not as each scene and part was lovely.

Do continue with more such OS😳...One suggestion. why do you say mennu?..it looks a bit punjabi..She speaks manne..(me) I think..😊

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Roshni

@rashika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Wow!

I loved it.

The passion now between them is indescribable.

They are made for each other.

Amazing update.

Wonderfully written

Edited by rashika - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

thank u for updating...worth the wait...😊..portrayed paro's thoughts beautifully...

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hkdrama

@hkdrama

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Very well written. Loved it!!

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Hunnybunny3

@Hunnybunny3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Woohoo finally got an update

This was just beautiful. I don't think I have the words to describe just how amazing this was. The way you intricately weave the magic of Rudra and Paro and all the emotions they are going through is utter perfection. Paro's musing on all that she had dreamed of with all that she has been blessed with shows how far this young beauty has come with the blessing of The Lord above and her husbands love.

Bring on the next one girl. Can't wait 👏

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

awww god!! that is the sweetest thing ever despite being such a passionate moment!! awww awww awww i am still smiling!! god knows how many times in b/w the words i laughed out loud!!

awww awww awww its just adorableee!!!!

i love u for writing this series!! I just loveee it!!! 🤗