The Shifting Sands/ New FF/ Part 2 on Pg 2/

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Shifting Sands.

Paro's diary entries.





I sat on the bridal bed with a myriad, conflicting emotions raging inside me, even as a hot breeze sped over the sands of Rann and whipped up a freak sand storm. The colorful chandeliers of the haveli swayed to and fro, while the sound of urgent feet, scampering around to shut the bothersome sand out, reached my ears. I wanted to get up to shut the window too, but my legs felt oddly paralyzed.

Like all my friends, I had dreamed about this night on many occasions in the past, but never in my wildest dreams, had I imagined it to be like this.

Horrific images of blood soaked sand and his lifeless body refuse to leave my weary mind alone today, and my heart suddenly filled with rage so powerful that it escaped out my mouth as a strangled, tortured cry.

Something finally snapped inside me, and posessed by a wild, reckless spirit, I began to tear jewelry off of my body. Jhumkas, kangans, payals, tika..every piece of jewelry is irreverently tossed on the floor by me, soon joined by ripped strands of flower garlands.


I didn't hear him enter the room and started when a pair of strong arms caught me from behind. As I struggled with all my might, he tighted his hold, making me wince in pain.

"Stop it, Paro. Just stop", he said huskily in my ears.

My fragile body was no match against his massive physical strength and I gave up finally. Breaking down in loud, breathless, frustrated sobs, my body shuddered uncontrollably and muttering something inaudible, he turned me around to press my body close against his.

I found the strength of his hard body oddly reassuring, and immediately hated myself for it.



A/N : Hope that wasn't too bad. Do let me know!



Part 2. -- Page 2.

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I like! That was really good!
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..please continue...its very good...👍🏼

The breakdown...😭
i'm totally picturing sanaya portraying these emotions on PaRud's wedding night...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DoJin

..please continue...its very good...👍🏼

The breakdown...😭
i'm totally picturing sanaya portraying these emotions on PaRud's wedding night...


Thanks for the encouragement :)
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nice!
you delved head first into IF!!!


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That was great!
Plz pm me the updates :)
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Amazingly written ,
Very gripping
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Great start... Do continue soon
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It is very intense...would like to read further...please accept my buddy request...can you please PM me the updates...thanks in advance...
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The Shifting Sands.

Paro's Diary Entries.



Time stopped, as we stood joined in an embrace, listening to the incessant musical chiming of the chandelier above us. My sobs subsided, my body stilled and I lifted my head from where it was resting against his hard chest to look into his eyes.

Mesmerized by their intensity as always, I tried to tear my eyes away, but failed miserably. To curtail the burgeoning response of my ever treacherous body, I told myself that what I saw in their smoldering depths was just a figment of my imagination, an illusion.

Just like a mirage, which vanishes as soon as the winds change direction and the sands shift.

And I, a daughter of this Rann, knew better than to chase after a mirage.

Averting my gaze, I flattened my palms against his chest and pushed.

"Let go of me", I said, my voice hoarse from crying.

I was ashamed of a tingle of disappoinment flit across my heart as he released me immediately and walked over to the window to shut it.

Trying to walk, my legs suddenly felt unsteady and I sat down on the edge of the bed, waiting for the buzzing in my ears to subside.

When I opened my eyes, he stood in front of me with a steel glass filled with milk in his hand.

"Here, drink this. You didn't eat anything all day", he said, in his charactetistically brusque tone.

"I don't want it", I replied, some sparks of my rage, still smoldering among the ashes.

"You know very well, I can easily make you...", his voice trailed off ominously.

My eyes must have reflected fear that I have for him, when I took the glass from him and said bitterly, "Why do you care? Why does it matter to you, if I ate something or not? Why does it matter to you, if I lived or died?


"It doesn't", he said, his lips curving in a dark smile and his eyes vacant.




A/N: Thanks for all the likes and comments! Much appreciated. Hope you like this update too.





Edited by Chicagobears - 11 years ago

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