YEH PYAR HAI(ss) pt 10 pg 24 jan 20 - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: minnu345

OMG OMG
Love story is gonna start again...
Yeahhh



thanks a lot minnu...ha another love story...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yusra8

fab.. update next part soon



thanks a lot yusra...hope u like further also...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shonai

lovely update di.👏🤗

felt very sad for them when doc told that she has forgotten Shaan😒...but felt happy when Shaan's family supported him & Khanak's family also accepted him as their SIL.👍🏼
ok, so now Shaan is all set to make her fall in love with him🥳. waiting to see how he's gonna do it.
he joined her colg. as professor or student???😕

thanks for the update and for the PM.😊
and yeah!! after a long time m back here😃. missed the place and reading stories here..😭

Priyasree



thanks a lot priya...s he is all set to make her fall in love...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi friends...sorry for the delay..i have lot of works now a days...so only yaar..hope u guys understand...but i will try to complete the story...thanks for ur comments and hitting like button...

pt 8


she continued drawing...

neha : hey its a boy...

nisha : his eyes r looking beautifull...

neha : who is he...

khanak : i dont know...it was in my heart...i thought of drawing so i drawed...

its just my imagination...its not real...

nisha : even it is iimagination he is looking really cute...

khanak : ha..he is reallly handsome...(smile)

excuse me mam...

every one looked at the entrance...they all were shocked...

they looked at the note...then they looked at the person at the entrance...

there eyes were wide opened...

lab assitant : who r u...

i am shantanu...new student...(smile)

lab assitant : get in...

walked in looking around and his eyes saw khanak...khanak also saw him...

he was smiling...and he took a front row seat boys side...

khanak was in the second row...

neha : hey u know him na...

khanak : no...

nisha : hey u r telling lie man...

they three were talking...

lecture has come in they did not see her...they were still talking...

lecturer : khanak...neha..nisha...

they both came back to reality three of them stood...

lecture : wat discussion going on...

nisha : about the new...

khanak : umm project mam...(pressing nehas hand and she became quiet...)

khanak felt like some one is watching here keenly...

she looked and she found shaan was looking at her with a smile...

khanak was just looking at him...

lecturer : sit down three off u...

but khanak did not sit down ...

lecturer : khanak...

khanak came back to reality...

lecturer : r u day dreaming...

khanak : uh..no mam...

she sat down while neha and nisha whispered in her ears s she is day dreaming mam...

and they were giggling...khanak glared at them...

while the class was going to end...they were all copying from board and they were talking...

nisha : hey dude u know him na...

khanak : no yar...

neha : come on man we will not say anything...

they all stopped writing...

khanak : come on guys seriously i dont know him...

neha : oops no...(simile)

khanak : come on neha..seriously...

nisha : how can u draw his face exactly...

(meanwhile lecturer has gone out ten minutes break..they dont know that...

the three were talking interstly...and most of the class mates have gone out)

khanak : come on guys i told u na..it was an imaginary pic...

neha and nisha : but it has come as real..very handsome(smile)

excuser me guys...

three off them lifted there heads and saw...shaan was standing there with a simle..

khanak thought how beautifull his smile...he looks handsome...

shaan : hello...hey...(waving his hand...)

three of them came back to reality...

they all looked at him questiongly...

shaan : hi...i am shantanu..u can call me shaan...and ...

he extended his hand with a chocolate cover...

neha : chcocolates...she was about to take...

khanak pulled nehas hand...and looked at shaan straight...

shaan raised his one eyebrow questiongly...

khanak : what for this chocolate...

shaan : when ever i am starting a new thing i will start with a sweet...

i am starting this new one ..so..(Smile)

extended his chocolate cover...

khanak : my mom told not to get chocolates from neighbours so ..(cute smile)

shaan looked at her for a second and then he smiled at her...

shaan : hey i am ur classmate...we can be friends...

still extending his chocolate cover...

khanak : sorry i dont make friendship with strangers...

shaan : oh i see...so u girls...

before they answer khanak answered no they will also not take chocolate...

with a sweet smile...

shaan looked her for a second and with a smile he went outside...

nisha : hey why did u say like that...

neha : ha..he is really handsome so cute...

nisha : and by the way dude all r ur favorite chocolates man...

khanak : come on girls be quiet i am really thinking about him...

nisha : wat thinking about him...u mean...

khanak : shh..no..i am thinking if i have seen him already...

neha : oh ...

meanwhile ten minutes break was over..everyone came inside...

khanak was looking at the entrance...shaan came inside with a smile and there

eyes met...khanak thought damn he has a beautifull smile...those timples...

where did i saw him...

next mam came inside the class...shaan went and talked with the mam...

khanak thought wat is he talking...mam also smiling...

mam : he is new student shantanu...he likes to give chocolates to everyone please take it...

shaan started to give chocolate to mam then started to to give others also...

and he came near khanaks table with a smile...

and extended the chocolates to them...all three of them took the chocolates...

khanak just glared at him...and then shaan went to his place class started...

neha : hey khanak he is really clever...(whispered)

nisha : ya he is smart...

khanak turned her head and looked at shaan who was listening to the class...

but at the exact moment he also turned around and looked at khanak...

he winked at her with a smile...khanak quickly looked down at her note

with a nervous...and she thought damn he ..he ...

while shaan was thinking baby ..its really nice to see ur original behaviour i love it...

but i have to study this MBA again...first thought of lecturer but then i thought it will not be easy for us to mingle

i have changed my plan...for this i have given a lot of donation to the principle for the college..

and i have agreed to have campus interview here for the final year students for the dads company and so on..

but its really worth it.. i am really loving this baby...

later in the afternoon khanak and her friends bunked the calss and went out...

later at the evening she went home...she saw some new cars were standing in front of her house...

khanak : whose these i havent seen them...who has come...

she went inside the house and she was shocked she was standing still...

shaan was sitting with some elder peoples...

shaan looked at her with a smile...

sharma : my daughter has come khanak...come here...

khanak went near her dad ...

sharma : this is my childhood best friend sunil...and his wife

she did a namasthey to them...

sharma : and he is shaan..sunils shaan...

khanak looked at him...he looked at her with a smile...

khanak : excuse me ..i will be back..(with a smile)

khanak went inside the kitchen where her mom was placing cups in the tray

khanak : mom..i havent seen this sunil uncle...

vidhya : they were in mumbai...so only u did not know...

khanak thought but i feel like i know him...

khanak : why they have come here...after a such a long time...

vidhya: to leave shaan beta in our house...

khanak : wat...




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Posted: 11 years ago
Hahhah this is hilarious...
"To leave Shaan beta in our house" hahhaha

Awesome twist again niki...you just keeps on bringing some interesting stuffs to look forward for the next update...
am loving this new twist!!!

Update the next part soon dear...
cant wait longgg!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it di.. 😃 Shaan as a student..Cool!!! 😊 Khanak and her friends are shocked to see how Khanak's drawing turned out true..

Her friends started questioning her whether she knew him..She denied as forgot him..

Yep..Khanak day dreaming about Shaan..
😉 😆

Awww..She didnt take chocolate from him..But he was clever made her to take it from him..

Awww..Shaan did so much to become a student..Agree..As student he can freely talk to her..😊

Wow!!! Shaan gonna stay in Khanak's home!!! 😃 Awesome twist!!! 👏

Looking forward and thank you for writing an awesome update di.. 😊
Edited by poo_j - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Niki awesome update
Wow shaan as a student very nice. Khanak friends asked her whether she knows him as she draws shaan picture but khanak denied
Khanak didn't take chocolate shaan offered but shaan cleverly made her to take it...aww very cute
Shaan has do so much to come as a student in khanak's class so he can talk to her freely.
Shaan is going to stay in khanak's house ...oh loving it
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
tat was really a nice update... shaan in khanak's home... wow... tat wil really be something interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww such a sweet cute and funny update love it
hahhahaha to leave shan here
wwoowowww this is gonna be fun
update soon love it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww shanak :) update soon

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