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Posted: 12 years ago
Super cute Update 👏 👏 👏 👏

Beatifully written Dear ...Missed your writing 😊 Do post whenever you can.

Khanak returned Home after janvi's wedding but before that the masti planned by girls at Romit's place was amazing 😆 😆 these girls are crazy poor romit kya buddhu banaya use 😆 Khanak set on the place of janvi & She hide behind curtain 😆 LOL @ Romit's romantic start 🤣 he called janvi fat I was like gosh ab toh mara yeh Suhaag raat nahi iski pitai raat banegi ye toh 😆 😆 loved shaan so much in todays update 😊 his impatient behaviour to be with his Sweet heart was ubber cute loved how cutely you have described everything 👏 👏 loved he barged in at night to meet khanak & now that cute conversation Khanak teased him saying she promised someone that she is joining for dinner loved that jealous shaan 😃it was amazing 👏 loved loved loved whole update

will wait for you to continue sweet heart ...post whenever you can 😊

Love
Pranjal.
-pranjal- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
I miss it Heer 😭 😭 if you ever get Chance please continue it,
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heer update soon yaar..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
heer pls update soon waring for your update. and shanak romance 2 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
when will u update u are active but still not updating what happened?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello girls m sorry for not leaving any note as I was absent here for past

few months actually I have got married n didn't had my lappy so couldn't

update. Now m in my maika so today got time to update

Sorry girls I can't promise when I will update the next part or finish this

story. On Sunday I will be going back at my home m so sorry to keep this

story pending whenever I will get time n when I will have net I will try to

complete this FF

I know to leave the story pending annoyed a lot as I too have read many

FF' swhich are pending n wish to complete it but what to do I can't help it

once again m so sorry girls

I thank each n every one who press like button n comment for my FF I so

glad u all like my simple writing even when grammatical I made many

mistakes

Thank u for the like girls kp_yasharan, aasma1, ktym, poo_j, Maneesha_Shanak,

Part 36

Before she left she gave shaan a quick peak on his lips, shaan was shocked

Shaan: aaj needh bohut achi ayegi and said I love u Khanak

Next morning

It was Sunday, ladies wake up early as usual and finished their puja and

preparing for breakfast

Boys were still sleeping as they were tired

Ladies and sunil finished their breakfast; sunil was reading a news paper.

Dadi: sunil'.. ( Looking at Sunil )

Sunil: jee Maa

Dadi: tumne shaan aur Khanak ke bareme aabh kya socha hai

Madhvi: haa sunil aabh hame kya karna parega, Kitna waqt

hogaya, aur Raj koh dehke bhi shaan keh kuch nahi kaha

Sunil: maa, muhje lagta hai , undono ko thora waqt dena

chahiye, kyukijistara woh dono shaadi meh ekk dusreki tag

khich rahethe , muhje esa laga ke woh dono kareeb arahehe

Dadi: tum sahi keh raheho sunil

Madhvi : thikh hai.. hum undono koh thora waqt dehi dehte hai,

wese shaadi mein dono saath saath kitne ache lagrahethe,

mera maan kar rahahe khanak koh aaj hi meri bahu banalu,

beti toh woh hai meri aur mein uski maa, lekin abh muje uski

saas banna hai ( smiling )

Dadi: Madhvi irada kya hai''' saas bane keh baad kya karogi

Both dadi n Madhvi laughed

Sunil: acha maa woh, muhje abse kuch kehna tha, mein aur

Madhvi kuch din keliye bahar jarahehe aur shaan to bhi muhje

kisi kaam seh bahar bhejna hai Delhi waha par kuch office ka

kaam hai

Dadi: thikh hai toh phir mein bhi kuch din ke liye Pune chali

jaungi

Sunil: thikh hai maa''.. aap kuch din waha howao'''., phir

wapas ake apke ladle pote ki aur ladli beti ke bareme sochtehai

( grinning )

Sunil, Dadi and Madhi continue their talks

After some time guys wake up had their breakfast and came to sit with

sunil and ladies woh were chatting, Nidhi left after breakfast.

Sunil: shaan, muhje tumse kuch baat karni hai

Shaan: yeah dad, kya baat hai

Sunil:mein aur tumari mom, one week ke liye bahar ja rahehe,

aur tume Delhi jana parega, kuch din keliye

Shaan: dad muhje kyu ?

Sunil: kyuki Romit ki abhi shaadi hui haa, aur Akshay koh yaha

ha ka kaam samalna hai, toh tum kaal hi jaraheho, 3, 4 din ke

toh baat hai

Shaan: lekin dad '''''..

Sunil cut him

Sunil: mene saab intazam kardiya hai '''.. tum baas kaal j

araheho

Shaan looked at Khanak who was staring at him, sunil notice them and felt

happy

After lunch

Raj: so guys are we going for dinner tonight

Shaan was not in mood after what sunil said

Shaan:no!!!!!!!!!!

Raj: areh tuhme kya huwa, kaal hi humne plan banaya tha

dinner ka

Khanak was sitting opposite shaan, sunil, madhvi and Dadi were not there

Khanak: haa kyu nahi hum saab jaenge, kyu bhabhi

Khushboo: khanak tumlog jao I don't feel to go out

Akshay: haa choote, tumlog ho awo dinner par, hum saab kisi

aur din challenge saath meh

Raj: areh Khanak tumne toh kaal kahatha , tum nahi apaogi

Khanak: haa woh ,mera plan cancel hogaya

Shaan looked at her again but didn't say anything

Raj: thikh hai toh phir tum Nidhi ko batadena

Khanak: haa thikh hai

Khanak called Nidhi, they talked for some time, first they thought to invite

wedding couple but then drop the idea and giggled on the phone

Shaan was upset and no mood for dinner, he won't be with Khanak for 3

days. Khanak saw him alone and went near him on the pool side

Khanak: shaan kya baat hai, tum akele his tara

Shaan turn and looked at her

Shaan: haa tume kya farak parta hai keh mein tumare saath

rahu ya na rahu

Khanak: shaan yeh tum kesi baat karraheho, tume kya lagta hai,

jab Adda neh kaha tum kuch din keliye bahar jaraheho, muhje

acha laga

Shaan: I m sorry Khanak, mein tumare beggar nahi reh sakta

Khanak: me bhi shaan, isi liye toh mein ne woh dinner cancel

kardiya, mein chahti hu ajj hum saath meh dinner kare

Shaan hugged her, they sat in each others arm for sometime near the pool

At Evening

Khanak told Raj to picked Nidhi, She told Raj she is not ready and will come

with Shaan

Raj went to pick Nidhi, when he saw her, his heart skip a beat, Raj started

to like Nidhi and Nidhi too like him. In wedding day both talked nicely and

got to know each other little

Shaan knocked at Khanak's door Khanak was stuggling with her zipper

facing the mirror, she wore a nice black length dress with little thick

strappes , which fitted to her each curved very well. Khanak closed her

zipper but it stuck to upper part of her back so it was difficult for her to

complete her task, she heard a knock again. She was annoyed with her

zipper. She welcome the person at the door

Shaan: khanak tum ready nahi hui'''. And saw her struggling

with her zipper

Khanak: dekho nah yeh '''''. Please meri help kardo

Shaan moved closer to her, khanak felt shiver run down her spine, when

shaan finger's brushed with her, her hands became cold.

Shaan: khanak agar tum apna hath side meh kardogi then I can

help u

Khanak moved her hands slowly; she gripped her two hands very tight

nervously Shaan was struggling to raised her zipper, he looked at her

through the mirror and saw her nervous. Shaan smiled at her act

Shaan: Khanak yeh zipper toh baad nahi rohahihe.

He slowly pulled the zipper little down, khanak could feel it and become

very nervous , she felt her body passed through electric current when his

fingers brushes her skin, she could only whisper his name

Khanak: shaa'aaann---nn!!!!!!!!

Shaan raised his gaze and looked her again through the mirror and felt her

discomfort and nervousness

Shaan: khanak yeh toh atak gai hai, muhje zipper koh thora sa

niche utarna parega

Khanak turn to him immediately without meeting his gaze

Khanak: mein karlungi, tum jao,mein thori der meh niche

arahihu

Shaan: khanak I can help u

Khanak: nahi mein karlungi

Shaan held her face in his palm and make her meet his gaze, khanak met

his gaze. They stare at each other for few minutes. Shaan slowly trace her

face in slow motion, khanak closed her eyes. Shaan kissed her forehead

and temple, his thumb on her lower lips, khanak felt his thumb and smile

spread on her lips. Shaan moved to her lips and Khanak felt his warm

breathe on her lips.Shaan brushed his lips slightly on her lips. Khanak's

lips trembled; she toowanted him to go farther. Shaan felt that and slowly

sucked her lower lips,khanak moan plea surely and shaan deepen the kiss,

Khanak responded to his kiss passionately her hand caresses his hair back

at his nape to bring him more closer, they kissed for few minutes

passionately no one let the other to broke the kiss,afer few second they

moved apart, both breathing hardly but shaan moved to her neck, he

started to leave wet kissed on her neck to shoulder, Khanak was

on fire her legs started to become weak, shaan hands were careses her

little exposed back , she could only whisper his name , she put her hand on

his chest

Khanak: shaaannn!!!!!!!!!

Shaan was not listening to him as she was busy kissing her neck

Khanak: shaan please, stop it

Shaan: mmmhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suddenly shaan phones rang, he stop kissing her and twitched his lips at

the disturbance, he moved from her neck and said " haadh hai yaar,

this is too much ."

Khanak shly smiled at him and before he picked up his ringing phone he

spoke huskiest " to be continue ." khanak open her mouth in shock n

tried to closed her zipper while shaan was talking on the phone

Shaan: hello!!!!!!

Raj: what is this yaar kaha ho tum dono?

Shaan: hum arahehe, woh aaj traffic kuch zyada hai, thori der

mein poch rahehe

Khanak looked at him from the mirror, shaked her head and smiled shly

Shaan end the call and moved toward her, he lower her zipper slightly,

move itup and closed it

Shaan: chale ( naughtly with his dimpled cheeks )

Khanak: mmhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shaan drove and reached the place , Riya and Jai couldn't accompanied coz

they wanted to spent some time together as Riya was not there for few

days, she went to meet some friend who were not leaving in Mumbai

They met at the hotel, they order some starters first, talk for some time

Both couples were throwing glances to each other, Khanak was sitting

beside shaan, he hold khanak's one hand under the table, khanak pleaded

to leaveher through her eyes and then looked at Raj and Nidhi who were

in conv , shaan smiled naughtily at her, after some time they had their

dinner and little later their desert and left the place

Raj dropped Nidhi at her place, both had a great time talking in the car and

enjoyed each other's company

Khanak: shaan hum kaha jarahehe, yeh gar ka rasta toh nahi hai

Shaan: Khanak hum gar nahi jarahehe

Khanak: toh phir!!!!!!! itni raat ko kaha jarahehe

The car stopped at red light, shaan looked at her

Shaan: have patience my Love ( huskiest )

Khanak bushed at his statement and saw naughtiness in his eyes

Please press the like button and feel free to comment 😊

Edited by heer_85 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations heer...wish you a very happy married life...
Loved the update...:))
Take your own time for updating...
Will wait...no worries!!
poo_j thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it.. 😊 Sunil wants ShaNak to have more time..And they all going out..Shaan ti Delhi for 3-4 days..

Awww..Shaan not going to dinner but Khanak..Awww..She cancelled her plan to be with Shaan..So sweet..😊

Raj and Nidhi..Cool!!!😊

ShaNak romance part was freaking hot!!! ☺️

Dinner went well!!!

Where is Shaan taking Khanak??? Surprise..Cool!!!😃

Looking forward and thank you for writing an amazing update.. 😃

P.S: No problem Heer!!! Take your own time!!! 😊
Edited by poo_j - 12 years ago
kp_yasharan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW ASWOME UPDATE HEER 👏 love it

wating for next part


take your time will wat
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations dear wish u a very happy married life
as for tb updates if u r unsure y dont u finish off the ff, in a few updatez nd whenever u get time or net u can make a new one
xxx

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